YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #225 on: September 01, 2010, 07:19:21 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Rajesh ji.great lines. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

DARD DENE WAALE KO KANHA FARK PADTA HAI
RAJESH JI.HOTA AGAR USKE DIL MEIN THODA SA BHI MERI CHAHAT KA ASAR
MERE DIL GAMO SE NAHI KHUSIYON SE BHARA HOTA.


Shukriya Madhu Ji

Jo takdeer mein hota hai wahi hai milta
Dard to apne hisse ka tha ye usi ka asar hai
Kahte hai janam se pahle Brahma sab hai likhta
Agar hum badal sake to bole ki ye kaisa asar hai
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«Reply #226 on: March 11, 2011, 01:53:20 PM »
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Yad aon to bas itni si inayat karna,
Apnay badlay howay lahjay ki wazahat karna,

Tum to chahat ka shahkar howa karte they,
Kis se seekha ulfat main milawat karna,

Hum sazaon k haqdar baney hain kab se?
Tum hi kah do kya jurm hai pyar karna?

Teri furqat main ye ankhain ab tak nam hain,
Kabhi aana meray ashkon ki zyarat karna,

Dil main ab bhi hain pyar k diye roshan,
Dekh bholay nahi hum teri hasti ki ibadat karna!

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«Reply #227 on: March 11, 2011, 08:37:58 PM »
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thank you so much Rajesh ji,great lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #228 on: March 11, 2011, 08:41:54 PM »
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Wow bahut khoobsurat lines pesh kiya aapne Imtiaz ji,thank you so much, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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ANAAM
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«Reply #229 on: March 11, 2011, 08:53:57 PM »
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Madhu-ji Good Morning.......

Ye kaisaa asar hai zaalim tere good morning kehne ka
Susti durr hui aur mann karne laga tere paas aane ka


Ye Rajesh ji ko kya ho gayaa wo aate kyu nahi....padosan ji jawaab do naa....
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #230 on: March 11, 2011, 08:56:49 PM »
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Gudmorning Anaam ji,wow kamaal ki lines ,khoobsurat peshkash,thank you so much icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #231 on: March 14, 2011, 07:48:38 AM »
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CHAAKAR BHI MAIN TUJHKO BHUL NAHIN PAATA HUN
JAHAN JAATA HUN TERI YAAD DILATI HAR DAGAR HAI
KAISA JAADU HAI TERE PYAAR KA "YE KAISA ASAR HAI"
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«Reply #232 on: March 14, 2011, 09:24:07 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #233 on: July 17, 2011, 03:19:08 AM »
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ITNE KAREEB HO PHIR HO HUMSE DHOOR
AANKHO MEIN AANSU AUR DIL SE MAJBOOR
ZEETE HAIN BAS AANSOO.N BAHA KAR
DIL PAR AAJ HAI YEH KAISA ASAR

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«Reply #234 on: July 17, 2011, 09:52:17 PM »
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Wow bahut khoob Rajesh ji,lovely lines Superb,shukriya aap hamesha saath diya. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_salut Winking



AISI BHI KIYA MAJBOORI HAI KI
APNE DIL KE BAAT KAHENE SE ITRAATE HO .
KUCH TOH ASAR HUA HOGA AAPKE BHI DIL MEIN
WARNA AISE THODE KOI APNA WAQT BARBAAD
KARTA SAARE DIN BAATON MEIN.

Ek simple sa koshish. Winking


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«Reply #235 on: July 17, 2011, 10:34:09 PM »
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Achchhi koshish hai Madhu

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«Reply #236 on: July 18, 2011, 01:34:02 AM »
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BARBAAT MERI MOHABAT KA AFSANA HAI .

HUME HI WAFA SAMJ NA PAYE UNKI .

WOH BEWAFA NAHI DIL KO BHI BEHLANA HAI.

LUT CHUKI HAI CHAHAT PHIR PYAR MERA AMAR HAI . KAISA YEH ASAR HAI
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«Reply #237 on: July 18, 2011, 02:46:43 AM »
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Jaagi hai aaj unhe dekh kar umange dil mein
Par dil kambakhat saath nahi deta mehfil mein
Dil ko manaata hoon to mann rooth jaataa hai
Na jaane kya hua, aur yeh kaisa asar hai
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«Reply #238 on: July 18, 2011, 03:46:06 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Dosto.... Aap sabne bahut achha likha hai..
mai bhi kuchh likhne ki gustakhi kar raha hu....
koi galti ho to maaf kare...

Aaj teri yaadon ke bahon se lipat kar khoob roya hoon...
Khushi to dil ki ab kahin door pichhe chhod aaya hoon...
Phir bhi tere hi pyar ki ehsaso me jee raha hu mai.,
Ye kaisa asar hai jo tujhe paakar bhi ab tak naa paya hoon...
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«Reply #239 on: July 18, 2011, 10:42:52 AM »
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Great lines Saahil ji,Rajesh ji,M Touhid ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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