YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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samir_bc
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«Reply #30 on: November 21, 2009, 07:30:30 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 20, 2009, 09:15:17 PM
SAMAJH MEIN NAHI AATI YE AKHIR KAISA ASAR HAI
KISI KI PYAR KA YA NAFRAT KA,NA CHAHTE HUE BHI
UNKI YAAD BAAR BAAR KYUN SATATI HAI.
CHALE GAYE WOH  HUMSE NARAZ HOKAR
MAGAR HO GAYI MAIN BECHAIN UNKE CHAHAT KA ASAR SE.



EK KOSHISH KI HAI MAINE.MAAFI CHAHTI HOON AGAR GALATI KE LIYE.E



manzil ka hi pata nahi yeh kaisa safer hai
chale ja rahe ho bus yeh kaisa asar hai

yadon me uski yun deewani ho rhi ho
chahat ka akhir uski yeh kaisa asar hai

yadon per pehra ab lagaogi kaise
chain-o-sukun kho gya yeh kaisa asar hai


ek koshish meri taraf se hi madhu ji......
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«Reply #31 on: November 21, 2009, 07:36:46 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Samir ji,itna asaani aur khoobsurti se aapne itna badiya kavita likh diya.excellent,thanx. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #32 on: November 21, 2009, 07:38:36 PM »
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Quote from: samir_bc on November 21, 2009, 07:30:30 PM

manzil ka hi pata nahi yeh kaisa safer hai
chale ja rahe ho bus yeh kaisa asar hai

yadon me uski yun deewani ho rhi ho
chahat ka akhir uski yeh kaisa asar hai

yadon per pehra ab lagaogi kaise
chain-o-sukun kho gya yeh kaisa asar hai


ek koshish meri taraf se hi madhu ji......
Nice one Samir Ji
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samir_bc
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«Reply #33 on: November 21, 2009, 07:39:31 PM »
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bahot bahot shukriya madhu ji........harish ji........
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #34 on: November 22, 2009, 03:20:03 AM »
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KAASH EK BAAR MERI DIL KI PUKAR WOH SUNLE
AA JAYE LAUT KAR ISS MAHEFIL MEIN EK BAAR
KAHE DOONGI UNSE HUA HAI KAISA ASAR MERE DIL PE
UNKE ISS MAHEFIL SE JAANE KE BAAD.


TRY. Winking
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arac
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«Reply #35 on: November 23, 2009, 09:53:24 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 22, 2009, 03:20:03 AM
KAASH EK BAAR MERI DIL KI PUKAR WOH SUNLE
AA JAYE LAUT KAR ISS MAHEFIL MEIN EK BAAR
KAHE DOONGI UNSE HUA HAI KAISA ASAR MERE DIL PE
UNKE ISS MAHEFIL SE JAANE KE BAAD.


TRY. Winking

kya laut ke faida aakar is mehfil mein
sab ke sab pathar dil rahete ho  jahan
ham jaante hai aap par ye kaisa asar hai
hoga aap ke dil par kisi aur ke dil ka asar
hamare liye toh aap ka dil be-asar hai.
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«Reply #36 on: November 23, 2009, 09:46:14 PM »
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Wah bahut khooooooooob cara ji.lovel lines .excellent. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Winking tongue3
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«Reply #37 on: November 24, 2009, 04:40:59 AM »
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HUA HAI ASAR ISS PATHAR DIL MEIN DHEERE DHEERE.
SEENE KE TADAP WOH KIYA JAANE JO AATE HAI ISS
MAHEFIL MEIN APNA PAHECHAAN BADAL BADAL KE. tongue3
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«Reply #38 on: November 27, 2009, 07:14:07 AM »
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PATHAR DIL KABSE PIGAL NE LAGA HAI
KISI KI PAHECHAAN KI KYUN FIKAR KARNE LAGA HAI
JAB HAM MARTE THEY UNPAR,TAB TOH DIL BE-ASAR THA
AAJ ACHAANAK YEH KAISA ASAR HONE LAGA HAI.
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«Reply #39 on: November 27, 2009, 08:30:43 AM »
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DIL HAI YE MERI KOI PATHAR TOH NAHI
HUA HAI ISS DIL MEIN UNKE BAATO KA ASAR
TADAP UTTI ISSILYE ISS DIL UNKE
CHALE JAANE SE.
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«Reply #40 on: November 27, 2009, 08:39:22 AM »
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Bahut shandar likha hai Madhu ji. Nice sharing
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #41 on: November 27, 2009, 10:23:39 AM »
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Thank you so much Riyaz ji. hello
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«Reply #42 on: November 27, 2009, 11:16:31 AM »
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Wah Madhu-di wah..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kitne khoobsurat khayaal hain aap ke... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Badi chhupi-rustom ho yaar.... Winking Winking Winking Winking
Mujhe tou pata he nahi chala kab shuru huaa ye thread... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Aap k saath likhne ka mazaa tou lete... icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek

Ye kaisa asar hai tere kalaam ka
Kambakht nazren hatt-ti he nahi
Baar-baar padhti hu,aur sochti hu
Kis k khayalo mai doob gayee tu

Bataa sakhi wo kaun hai jo aake kareeb
Chhod ke yaaden Chala gaya tujhse durr
Wo raha hoga jaroor bahut he majboor
Warna Madhu-di ke pyarr ka hai eysa ASAR
Lakhon Bhawre khiche chale aate hain...




Quote from: madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
ITNE KAREEB AA KAR CHALE GAYE KYUN PHIR HUMSE DHOOR
AANKHO MEIN AANSU AUR DIL MEIN HAI DARD
ZINDA RAKHA HAI HUMEIN SIRF TERI CHAHAT KA ASAR
NA HAI AB IN AANKHO MEIN NEEND ,NA HAI DIL MEIN KARAR
MUSKURAATE HAI HUM BHI ISS MAHEFIL MEIN
MAGAR KISKO PATA HAI KITNA DARD HAI AAJ ISS SEENE MEIN
HO GAYE JUDHA HO KAR KHAFA HUMSE ,PAR CHODD
GAYE APNI CHAHAT KA ASAR HUM PE.


DOSTO EK KOSHISH KI AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKHI HAI TOH PLIZ CORRECT ME.
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«Reply #43 on: November 27, 2009, 11:36:09 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 22, 2009, 03:20:03 AM
KAASH EK BAAR MERI DIL KI PUKAR WOH SUNLE
AA JAYE LAUT KAR ISS MAHEFIL MEIN EK BAAR
KAHE DOONGI UNSE HUA HAI KAISA ASAR MERE DIL PE
UNKE ISS MAHEFIL SE JAANE KE BAAD.


TRY. Winking

Nice one indeed Madhu Ji

Tere dil pukaar sun hum aaye the mehfil mein
Kuchh soona soona sa laga tha mujhe woh mehfil
Jab laut kar ghar chala aayaa us mehfil se main
To mujhe aisa masoos hua ki kho gaya hai mera dil
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«Reply #44 on: November 27, 2009, 11:49:29 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 24, 2009, 04:40:59 AM
HUA HAI ASAR ISS PATHAR DIL MEIN DHEERE DHEERE.
SEENE KE TADAP WOH KIYA JAANE JO AATE HAI ISS
MAHEFIL MEIN APNA PAHECHAAN BADAL BADAL KE. tongue3


Quote from: madhuwesh on November 27, 2009, 08:30:43 AM
DIL HAI YE MERI KOI PATHAR TOH NAHI
HUA HAI ISS DIL MEIN UNKE BAATO KA ASAR
TADAP UTTI ISSILYE ISS DIL UNKE
CHALE JAANE SE.


Very good indeed
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