YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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cara
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«Reply #45 on: November 28, 2009, 04:11:50 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 27, 2009, 08:30:43 AM
DIL HAI YE MERI KOI PATHAR TOH NAHI
HUA HAI ISS DIL MEIN UNKE BAATO KA ASAR
TADAP UTTI ISSILYE ISS DIL UNKE
CHALE JAANE SE.

JEENA YAHAN MARNA YAHAN TERE MEHFIL KE SIVA JANA KAHAN
TU MERI BANE YAA NA BANE,MERE DIL MEIN HAI SADA TERA JAHAN
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«Reply #46 on: November 28, 2009, 05:11:46 AM »
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Sabne Bahoot badhiya likha
Madhuji Koyalji Rajesh ji Caraji Skji Aracji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #47 on: November 28, 2009, 07:27:31 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
ITNE KAREEB AA KAR CHALE GAYE KYUN PHIR HUMSE DHOOR
AANKHO MEIN AANSU AUR DIL MEIN HAI DARD
ZINDA RAKHA HAI HUMEIN SIRF TERI CHAHAT KA ASAR
NA HAI AB IN AANKHO MEIN NEEND ,NA HAI DIL MEIN KARAR
MUSKURAATE HAI HUM BHI ISS MAHEFIL MEIN
MAGAR KISKO PATA HAI KITNA DARD HAI AAJ ISS SEENE MEIN
HO GAYE JUDHA HO KAR KHAFA HUMSE ,PAR CHODD
GAYE APNI CHAHAT KA ASAR HUM PE.


DOSTO EK KOSHISH KI AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKHI HAI TOH PLIZ CORRECT ME.


Bahut Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Madhu.. Such Me aapki Yeh Koshish Waqai Behad Khubsoorat Hai.. Aapka Likha aaj Pahali baar Padha Hai Shayad Maine.. Aur such Me aapke Yeh Ehasaas Mere Dil Ko Choo gaye.. Applause Applause


Rajesh Ji, Koyal Ji & Samir Bhai aap sab ne Bhi Bahut Khooob Likha hai doston.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #48 on: November 28, 2009, 07:31:33 AM »
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Mujhe Diye Zakhon Ka Hisaab Chukaana Hai Kabhi Na Kabhi,
Apni Hi Wafaaon Se Tujhe, Tadpaana Hai Kabhi Na Kabhi...!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #49 on: November 28, 2009, 09:04:01 AM »
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Thanx Mann Ji
N Nice response
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #50 on: November 28, 2009, 11:43:55 AM »
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Thank you so much Koyal ji,Rajesh ji,Cara ji,Mann ji Pank ji,aap sabhi ne kamaal ke likha.mujhe bahut khushi hui aap sabhi ne mere thread pe kuch na kuch likha aur meri hausla badaayi, love4 love9
Aur Pank ji aapne kuch bhi nahi likha. Crying Crying Crying Crying tongue3
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«Reply #51 on: November 29, 2009, 02:36:35 AM »
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Aanshoo ko bah jane do,nahi to kahin na kahin dard hoga,ager aanshoo bahane se koi apna hota to ye sara jag hamara ho gaya hota.
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«Reply #52 on: November 30, 2009, 06:51:48 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 22, 2009, 03:20:03 AM
KAASH EK BAAR MERI DIL KI PUKAR WOH SUNLE
AA JAYE LAUT KAR ISS MAHEFIL MEIN EK BAAR
KAHE DOONGI UNSE HUA HAI KAISA ASAR MERE DIL PE
UNKE ISS MAHEFIL SE JAANE KE BAAD.


TRY. Winking


bahot hi badiya try madhu ji..... acha likhti hain ap.

thanks to all housla afjai ke liye.



roka bahot mager yeh kadam ruk nahi paye
bhul kar sabkuch teri mehfil me chale aye

karna na phir kabhi yun berukhi humse
ek baar seh gaye ab yeh jaan na chali jaye

kuch na keh zuban se sab jaante hai hum
woh dil hi kiya jo tera dard na samjh paye

yeh kaisa asar hai chahat ka teri humper
kho jate hain tujhme kuch aur na yaad aye



samir"dilse"
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«Reply #53 on: November 30, 2009, 08:01:20 AM »
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Wow too good Samir ji,lovely creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you so much Samir ji. hello
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«Reply #54 on: November 30, 2009, 08:06:12 AM »
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Quote from: samir_bc on November 30, 2009, 06:51:48 AM
bahot hi badiya try madhu ji..... acha likhti hain ap.

thanks to all housla afjai ke liye.
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roka bahot mager yeh kadam ruk nahi paye
bhul kar sabkuch teri mehfil me chale aye

karna na phir kabhi yun berukhi humse
ek baar seh gaye ab yeh jaan na chali jaye

kuch na keh zuban se sab jaante hai hum
woh dil hi kiya jo tera dard na samjh paye

yeh kaisa asar hai chahat ka teri humper
kho jate hain tujhme kuch aur na yaad aye



samir"dilse"


Bahut khoob Samir Ji
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«Reply #55 on: November 30, 2009, 08:16:01 AM »
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Tere dil ki pukaar mere dhadkan mein sama gaye
Mere badhte kadam rahon mein khud hi tahar gaye
Na jaane hua hai kaisa asar mere dil pe o jaane jaana
Padha hai mujhko tere mehfil mein laut kar yun aanaa
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«Reply #56 on: November 30, 2009, 08:23:16 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 30, 2009, 08:01:20 AM
Wow too good Samir ji,lovely creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you so much Samir ji. hello


bahot bahot shukriya madhu ji....
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«Reply #57 on: November 30, 2009, 08:25:53 AM »
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Wah kiya baat hai Rajesh ji,lovely creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #58 on: November 30, 2009, 08:28:02 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 30, 2009, 08:06:12 AM
Bahut khoob Samir Ji

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 30, 2009, 08:16:01 AM
Tere dil ki pukaar mere dhadkan mein sama gaye
Mere badhte kadam rahon mein khud hi tahar gaye
Na jaane hua hai kaisa asar mere dil pe o jaane jaana
Padha hai mujhko tere mehfil mein laut kar yun aanaa


thanks harish ji.........



nice reply..... acha likha apne.
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«Reply #59 on: November 30, 2009, 09:08:49 AM »
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HOGA KYUN NAHI ASAR IN LADKO KE DIL MEIN AB
ROK PAATE NAHI APNE KADAM ISS MAHEFIL MEIN AANE SE AB
HUA HAI INKE DIL MEIN HUM LADKIYON KA KUCH AISA ASAR
PHIR BHI CHUPAATE RAHETE HAI APNE
DIL KA HAAL HUM LADKIYON KO NADAAN SAMAJH KAR



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