Yeh duriyan

by vinery on May 25, 2015, 12:41:33 AM
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"Duniya ke yeh rasme hai,
Log de dete kasme hai,
Bhool jaun usse kehte hai,
Phir bhi has dun chahte hai,
Tut gaya dil yeh sadma hai,
Dard ban baitha nagma hai,
Aah bhi jaise chikh lagti hai,
Dua bhi mujko bhikh lagti hai,
Jitni unse duriyan hai,
Utni hi majbooriyan hai"
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2015, 12:56:16 AM »
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Aah bhi jaise chikh lagti hai,
Dua bhi mujko bhikh lagti hai,

Kya Bat hai...
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2015, 02:58:46 AM »
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Aah bhi jaise chikh lagti hai,
Dua bhi mujko bhikh lagti hai

now vinery what have you done?Huh?
these lines are like the taj shining under moonlight.
fantabulous.
now study your own lines they will keep u tuned to your future compositions.
choice of words in this line, its lyrical element. Vowwwww man this is great stuff.
u deserve a rau for these two lines alone.
however pls allow me some time before it gets posted in yr account becoz i gave someone last night n there is a cooling period. Congrats lady mindblowing lines.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2015, 03:03:05 AM »
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Aah bhi jaise chikh lagti hai,
Dua bhi mujko bhikh lagti hai

now vinery what have you done?Huh?
these lines are like the taj shining under moonlight.
fantabulous.
now study your own lines they will keep u tuned to your future compositions.
choice of words in this line, its lyrical element. Vowwwww man this is great stuff.
u deserve a rau for these two lines alone.
however pls allow me some time before it gets posted in yr account becoz i gave someone last night n there is a cooling period. Congrats lady mindblowing lines.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thank you so much. Means a lot coming from you.
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2015, 03:03:47 AM »
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Quote from: Saavan on May 25, 2015, 12:56:16 AM
Aah bhi jaise chikh lagti hai,
Dua bhi mujko bhikh lagti hai,

Kya Bat hai...
Thank you so much.
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2015, 04:19:14 AM »
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Superb lines keep writing
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2015, 05:10:10 AM »
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Very nice
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2015, 05:31:42 AM »
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Quote from: vinery on May 25, 2015, 03:03:05 AM
Thank you so much. Means a lot coming from you.
alrighty pooja d rau is yours.
make these lines yr personal benchmark.
try asking yrself wid every line u write is it better or atleast equal to wat i hv written.
i apologise for offering unsolicited advise.
but then, damn, who cares??
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2015, 05:36:25 AM »
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bahut khoob waah waah
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2015, 05:43:28 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2015, 06:57:24 AM »
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Superb lines keep writing
Thank you so much.
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2015, 06:58:06 AM »
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Quote from: Rajigujral on May 25, 2015, 05:10:10 AM
Very nice
Thank you so much.
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2015, 06:58:28 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2015, 07:01:11 AM »
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Quote from: alfaaz on May 25, 2015, 05:31:42 AM
alrighty pooja d rau is yours.
make these lines yr personal benchmark.
try asking yrself wid every line u write is it better or atleast equal to wat i hv written.
i apologise for offering unsolicited advise.
but then, damn, who cares??
Thank you.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 25, 2015, 05:36:25 AM
bahut khoob waah waah
Thank you so much.
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