yeh sawaal mere hain tumse, bolo.. charan..

by lovely_charan on December 27, 2012, 06:19:32 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 27, 2012, 04:46:57 PM »
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this is something different, ek premika apne premi ko yaad karte huye kya soch rahi hai aisa maine likhne ki koshish ki hai.. dono ko biccharhe huye arsa guzar gaya hai magar usey apne premi (lover) ki yaad ab bhi bahut aati hai.. and wo kya sochti hai har pal har mausam mein yeh batane ki ek chhoti si koshish hai.. please bataiyega ki kya main thik se likh paayi?? Usual Smile Usual Smile


jhonkaa hawa ka aata hoga ab bhi,
dil ko tumhare chhu jata hoga ab bhi..

kahin koi awaaz meri sunte ho kya?
aahat se man machal jata hoga ab bhi..

maine do pal ruk ke socha tha, kya?
naam mera yaad aata hoga ab bhi..

kitne achhe pal woh beete, hai na?
man geet koi gungunata hoga ab bhi..

kab dhoop khili ya sham dhali, kyun?
waqt yun hi guzar jata hoga ab bhi..

koi shaqs mile raahon mein mujhsa, toh?
chehra mera dhundhlata hoga ab bhi..

yeh kaise pal hain, yeh mahaul hai kya?
har pehar thehar jaata hoga ab bhi..

kya sirf meri yaadon mein ho tum?
ya tum bhi gumsum rehte ho mujh mein?
kya sirf meri aankhein yeh nam hain?
ya tum bhi palkein bhigote ho ghum mein?

yeh sawaal mere hain tumse, bolo..
kuch yaad tumhe bhi aata hoga ab bhi..

hua arsa jab biccharhe the hum tum..
par dil ka ghum sehlata hoga ab bhi...
BAHU HI KHOOBSURAT KALAAM  HAI, ISKE LIYE  DIL SE DAAD ...KHUDA  AAPKO  HAMESHA  HAMARE BEECH  BANAYE  RAKKHE AUR  AAP YU'N  HI KHOOBSURAT KALAMO'N SE SHAAD  KARTE RAHEN....AAP KA REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"
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«Reply #16 on: December 27, 2012, 05:55:15 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Charan jee
Question ...ka andaaz khoob raha aapka.
very innovative
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lovely_charan
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«Reply #17 on: December 27, 2012, 07:02:24 PM »
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BAHU HI KHOOBSURAT KALAAM  HAI, ISKE LIYE  DIL SE DAAD ...KHUDA  AAPKO  HAMESHA  HAMARE BEECH  BANAYE  RAKKHE AUR  AAP YU'N  HI KHOOBSURAT KALAMO'N SE SHAAD  KARTE RAHEN....AAP KA REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"
bahut bahut shukriya aapka rehan ji.. khuda ne chaha toh sath rahega... aap sabka sath rahe toh aage bhi likhte rahenge.. Usual Smile
thank you very very much..
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«Reply #18 on: December 27, 2012, 07:03:15 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Charan jee
Question ...ka andaaz khoob raha aapka.
very innovative
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bahut bahut bahut bahut thank you sir ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

thanks a lot for the support.. Usual Smile
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