Yeh Sher!

by Ricky on March 02, 2006, 08:56:55 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 06, 2006, 05:58:13 AM »
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her saaz, her mahfil mai bajaya nahi jaata
her gazal ko sar-e-amm gaya nahi jaata
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«Reply #16 on: May 06, 2006, 07:28:23 AM »
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Nahi Bajte Ek Hi Saaz Har Mehfil Mein,..
Jaise Log Badalte Hain Waise Hi Saazon Ko Badla Jaata hai,..
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«Reply #17 on: May 07, 2006, 08:44:27 PM »
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Bahot hee umda Pooja ji.
and Jaanasheen... good effort but I feel you can improve it more.

Saaz aor raaz ki kahani inteha ittefaaq rakhti hai,
ek main kayi dhun toh ek kayi chippe ahsaas rakhti hai !!
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«Reply #18 on: May 08, 2006, 05:24:02 AM »
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Ahsaas mai jab bhi tum gungunaaty ho
meri likhe her shabd ko, gazal banaty ho
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«Reply #19 on: May 10, 2006, 09:48:43 AM »
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Shukriya Bhai But Hoe Can We Improve It ,..
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«Reply #20 on: May 12, 2006, 07:26:44 PM »
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I have sent you PM, I hope that would be helpful
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«Reply #21 on: May 13, 2006, 08:12:45 AM »
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Yes Bhai,..

Dard Ko Zindagi Mein Lekar Jeeye Jaa Raha Hoon,..
Judai Ke Gham Ko Ansoun Ke Sang Peeye Jaa Raha Hoon,..

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«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2006, 07:37:03 PM »
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GOOD, I am glad you followed my suggestions.
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«Reply #23 on: May 17, 2006, 10:12:34 AM »
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Thank U Bhai,..

Judaa Hone Ka Gham Karte Hain Wo,..
Na Jaane Kyun Judai Se Darte Hain Wo,..
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«Reply #24 on: July 04, 2006, 02:19:38 PM »
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Dooriyan to nahin thi, rahi phir bhi judaai
Ek Ishq ki aisi bhi daastaan kabhi guzri hai !!
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«Reply #25 on: July 06, 2006, 11:58:33 AM »
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Dooriyan to nahin thi, rahi phir bhi judaai
Ek Ishq ki aisi bhi daastaan kabhi guzri hai !!


Bahoot Khoob Talat sis,.

Humpar Bhi Guzre Hain Kuch Aise Sitam Judaai ke,..
Ke Jo Bhi Suna Dastaan Hamari Rone Laga,..
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«Reply #26 on: July 07, 2006, 01:28:07 PM »
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Thanks Usual Smile Nice ones by you here !

Judai di hai to de gaya muskaan bhi
Ek anokhe ishq ki daastan hain meri !!
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«Reply #27 on: July 07, 2006, 02:02:24 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks Usual Smile Nice ones by you here !

Judai di hai to de gaya muskaan bhi
Ek anokhe ishq ki daastan hain meri !!


Bahoot khoob Talat Ji,..

Apni Bebasi Ka Udaya Maine Mazak Kuch Tarah,..
Aaye Jab Ashq Aankh Mein Main Muskuraa Diya,..
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«Reply #28 on: July 07, 2006, 05:38:33 PM »
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Kyun chipaye baithe theh woh raaz, woh ahsaas,
aa jaate tum kareeb, dee thi jo tumhe humney awaas ..!
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«Reply #29 on: July 08, 2006, 07:05:08 AM »
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pighal to hum gaye teri ankhon ke noor se..
  munasib aab kya main hoon...jo tum dekhte ho door se
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