yehi ek baat toh maan lo....

by punam on September 10, 2007, 05:28:32 PM
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aaj mujhe kuch kehne do
choti si baat zara sun lo
yehi ek baat toh maan lo..

dekhe the jo sapne milke
raat ke andhere me mita do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...

yeh nazar jo aaj baras rahi
unhe aansoo chupana sikha do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...

chor jaane ka to soch liye
tum kabhi yaad na aao itni si baat..
mere na samjh dil ko samjha do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2007, 05:42:43 PM »
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punam G
acha likha hai bas raat ke andhere mein mita do kuch msleading hai

:D :D :D
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2007, 11:35:52 PM »
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Very nice Punam ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2007, 01:59:56 PM »
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Nice One Punam Ji,.
Accha Laga Pardhke,.
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2007, 02:04:16 PM »
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aaj mujhe kuch kehne do
choti si baat zara sun lo
yehi ek baat toh maan lo..

dekhe the jo sapne milke
raat ke andhere me mita do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...

yeh nazar jo aaj baras rahi
unhe aansoo chupana sikha do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...

chor jaane ka to soch liye
tum kabhi yaad na aao itni si baat..
mere na samjh dil ko samjha do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...


Maani Jo Baat Aapki Humne, Tabhi To Judaai Paai Hai,.
Hum Khush The Bina Chand Ke "Punam",.
Chand ko Dekhkar Yaad Karne Ki Adaa Aapne Hi To Sikhaai Hai,.

Bhale Hum Rehte Tanha, Na Mehfil Ki Talaash Karte,.
Akele Basar Karte Zindagi Na Kisi Ki Aas Karte,.
Judaai Ka Gham Dekar Ye raah Aapne Hi To Dikhaai Hai,.

________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2007, 02:54:51 PM »
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punam G
acha likha hai bas raat ke andhere mein mita do kuch msleading hai

:D :D :D
    : its gud dear.keep going......but aur thodisi taste come lag rahi hai.............thoda words check krlo....u will get wordings
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2007, 03:21:24 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Punam and lil bro great reply... Good job by both!!

Meri yaadon se kabhi to, khud ko mere angan mai utaro
Phir se thamo hath mera, khud ko mere anchal mai bikharo

Kabhi to jhum kar mujhko phir se mujhe un naamo se pukaro
Bin palke jhapke, deewano ki tarah mujhko phir se niharo

Meri hi galati per, dikhao ankhein, aor phir se mujhe apne gale laga lo
Meri yaadon se kabhi to, khud ko mere angan mai utaro...................
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2007, 02:35:03 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Punam and lil bro great reply... Good job by both!!

Meri yaadon se kabhi to, khud ko mere angan mai utaro
Phir se thamo hath mera, khud ko mere anchal mai bikharo

Kabhi to jhum kar mujhko phir se mujhe un naamo se pukaro
Bin palke jhapke, deewano ki tarah mujhko phir se niharo

Meri hi galati per, dikhao ankhein, aor phir se mujhe apne gale laga lo
Meri yaadon se kabhi to, khud ko mere angan mai utaro...................



yad teri aayegi jarur a hawa kehati hai,,,

kitne hi  fiza  nikalne do a rat kehati hai...

yad rakhenge tumahari en labjoko ......

bejuban dil ka yahi kehana hai..............krishna
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«Reply #8 on: November 16, 2007, 03:20:34 PM »
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Shukriya Didi,.
Bas Apke Ashirwaad Se,.
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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2007, 04:04:42 AM »
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Quote from: punam on September 10, 2007, 05:28:32 PM
aaj mujhe kuch kehne do
choti si baat zara sun lo
yehi ek baat toh maan lo..

dekhe the jo sapne milke
raat ke andhere me mita do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...

yeh nazar jo aaj baras rahi
unhe aansoo chupana sikha do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...

chor jaane ka to soch liye
tum kabhi yaad na aao itni si baat..
mere na samjh dil ko samjha do
yehi ek baat toh maan lo...

bahoot khoob poonam ji

netra.....
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