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manzil-e-ishq
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Zakham dil ke saare ubhar aaye….
Jab jab yaade uski nikhar aaye……
use khayal bhi aata kaha hoga mera
or mujhe uski hi har pal fikar aaye
bahut door hu, mumkin nahi milna us se
jane kyu wo hi wo mujhe nazar aaye
kurbaan jis pe thi do jaha ki khushi
usi ki mahfil me na mera koi jikar aaye
wo hi rasta mira wo hi thi 'Manzil'’
ab kaha kisko meri khabar aaye...
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2011, 09:14:18 AM » |
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Zakham dil ke saare ubhar aaye….
Jab jab yaade uski nikhar aaye……
use khayal bhi aata kaha hoga mera
or mujhe uski hi har pal fikar aaye
bahut door hu, mumkin nahi milna us se
jane kyu wo hi wo mujhe nazar aaye
kurbaan jis pe thi do jaha ki khushi
usi ki mahfil me na mera koi jikar aaye
wo hi rasta mira wo hi thi 'Manzil'’
ab kaha kisko meri khabar aaye...
BAHUT KHOOB M.E.I |
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2011, 12:10:04 PM » |
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Bahut khoob priya ji.
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2011, 12:14:43 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2011, 02:02:11 PM » |
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Priya di.. Maza agaya parrkar.. Bilkul mere dil kay jazbaat bayan hue hai..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2011, 06:36:56 PM » |
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kya baat hai Priya ji... bahut achha likha hai aapne...
Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2011, 07:19:59 AM » |
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thanx khamosh ji..... BAHUT KHOOB M.E.I
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2011, 07:20:29 AM » |
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bht bht shukria geet ji..... Bahut khoob priya ji.
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2011, 07:22:24 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2011, 07:23:14 AM » |
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shukria rahim..... god bless u... Bahaut bahaut khoob Priya di.. Maza agaya parrkar.. Bilkul mere dil kay jazbaat bayan hue hai.. Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2011, 07:23:46 AM » |
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bht bht shukria shihab ji.... Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji...
Shad o Aabad Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2011, 07:24:18 AM » |
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thanx alot intezaar ji..... kya baat hai Priya ji... bahut achha likha hai aapne...
Intezar !
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2011, 10:57:03 AM » |
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oye hoeyyyyy.....
kya baat he priya bada sweet likha he yaar........ek dam behtareen wala.....babht khub aur bht aache...ese hi likhti raho
"aa jati he bahare wo jidhar aye
hume to har jagah bas wo hi najar aye
esa nahi ki jaha me ek wo hi he haseen
par yaroo chand to sirato me ek hi najar aye"
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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2011, 05:53:09 PM » |
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Bohat Khoob Priya Ji.
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«Reply #14 on: March 07, 2011, 08:00:45 AM » |
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thanx mg...... chand to sitaro me ek hi nazar aaye.... kya baat kahi hai ji... tooooo good... thanx for dis beautiful reply.... oye hoeyyyyy.....
kya baat he priya bada sweet likha he yaar........ek dam behtareen wala.....babht khub aur bht aache...ese hi likhti raho
"aa jati he bahare wo jidhar aye
hume to har jagah bas wo hi najar aye
esa nahi ki jaha me ek wo hi he haseen
par yaroo chand to sirato me ek hi najar aye"
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