zakmon ko paak kar leeya

by anjaan dharkan on January 12, 2009, 03:09:57 PM
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upney zakhmon ko paak kar leeya hai maine, aaj upnay ushkon mein bihgo kar,
mill k door kardo wo naraazgee, wo situm jo dooreeyon ne keeyay hain urson par!
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 09:16:27 PM »
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wah Anjaan, kya baat kahi hai

JAKHMOH KOH TOH PAAK KIA HAI
DIL KOH BHI PAAAK KAR DOH
MITA DOH YEH DOORIYA DILBAR
DOLI SAJA KEY,ABAAD KAR DOH


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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2009, 02:47:40 AM »
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bahut acche Anjani dear and Jasbir ji nice lines..

Zakam itna paye zindagi mein ke
Raas na aaya sukoon-e-zindagi

Wah re kismat,

Doli aayi magar mere dhar pe nahi
Abaad huwe wo, magar mai nahi..


 
 
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2009, 05:20:53 AM »
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Very nice Anjani,,jasbir ji ,,Roja.... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2009, 05:52:28 AM »
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kya baat hai ...anjaan dharkanji......

apne zakmon ko toh paak kar liya tune,apne ashkon mein bhigokar,
apne ashkon ka  kya karoge,jo tham te hi nahin hai ro-ro kar.
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2009, 08:50:30 AM »
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kya baat hai anjaan ji aur jasbir ji............

apne haal-e-dil kisi ko sunaya na kare,
apne ghum kisi ko bataya na kare,
log mutti bhar namak liye ghooma karte hai,
apne zakhm kisi ko dikhaya na kare..
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 12:54:16 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 12, 2009, 09:16:27 PM
wah Anjaan, kya baat kahi hai

JAKHMOH KOH TOH PAAK KIA HAI
DIL KOH BHI PAAAK KAR DOH
MITA DOH YEH DOORIYA DILBAR
DOLI SAJA KEY,ABAAD KAR DOH


JASBIR SINGH
shabd nahi hain... jasbir aapse kuch kehnay se pehlay bahot sochna padr tha hai mujhko... tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2009, 12:54:57 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 13, 2009, 02:47:40 AM
bahut acche Anjani dear and Jasbir ji nice lines..

Zakam itna paye zindagi mein ke
Raas na aaya sukoon-e-zindagi

Wah re kismat,

Doli aayi magar mere dhar pe nahi
Abaad huwe wo, magar mai nahi..


 
 
very many thanx and great work behna Usual Smile
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 13, 2009, 05:20:53 AM
Very nice Anjani,,jasbir ji ,,Roja.... Thumbs UP
thax.
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 12:56:48 PM »
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cara, thax for your words and comment... yunheen saath nihba thay raheeyay!
Quote from: arpangour on January 13, 2009, 08:50:30 AM
kya baat hai anjaan ji aur jasbir ji............

apne haal-e-dil kisi ko sunaya na kare,
apne ghum kisi ko bataya na kare,
log mutti bhar namak liye ghooma karte hai,
apne zakhm kisi ko dikhaya na kare..

bilqul ghalat... dhuk batanay se baanta jaata hai, warna insaan kee rooh ka dunya mein guzara nahee! thax and keep up the work!
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2009, 07:16:35 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 13, 2009, 02:47:40 AM
bahut acche Anjani dear and Jasbir ji nice lines..

Zakam itna paye zindagi mein ke
Raas na aaya sukoon-e-zindagi

Wah re kismat,

Doli aayi magar mere dhar pe nahi
Abaad huwe wo, magar mai nahi..


 
 

Thanks ROJA and very nice lines by you ...


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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2009, 07:17:11 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 13, 2009, 05:20:53 AM
Very nice Anjani,,jasbir ji ,,Roja.... Thumbs UP

Thanks Honey Partner

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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2009, 07:17:58 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 13, 2009, 05:52:28 AM
kya baat hai ...anjaan dharkanji......

apne zakmon ko toh paak kar liya tune,apne ashkon mein bhigokar,
apne ashkon ka  kya karoge,jo tham te hi nahin hai ro-ro kar.

wah CARA very nicely said

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«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2009, 07:18:54 PM »
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Quote from: arpangour on January 13, 2009, 08:50:30 AM
kya baat hai anjaan ji aur jasbir ji............

apne haal-e-dil kisi ko sunaya na kare,
apne ghum kisi ko bataya na kare,
log mutti bhar namak liye ghooma karte hai,
apne zakhm kisi ko dikhaya na kare..

Thanks Arpan and wah kya baat kahi hai aapneh... wah


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«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2009, 07:24:26 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on January 13, 2009, 12:54:16 PM
shabd nahi hain... jasbir aapse kuch kehnay se pehlay bahot sochna padr tha hai mujhko... tongue3

Thanks Anjaaan

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