zanatki sair karke aai hu

by sapana on April 25, 2009, 12:33:10 AM
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mera mehtaab, mera aaftaab CHHodke aai hu mai,
ab taariki hai jivanme, roshni CHHodke aai hu mai.
ab ugal le jitana zaher hai tujame ai zamane,
unke aabe-hayaat shiri hothoko chumke aai hu mai.
kuch bhi n raha yaad muje mahobatke siva,
unke dilse mera dil jodke aai hu mai.
ab nahi chuyege muje tane, tir or khanzar,
teri mahobatka baktar odhke aai hu mai.
dilki baatope tavvjo di hamne ai,khuda,
ab zhenko ansuna karke aai hu mai.
tuje pata nahi shayad tere chunese ji uthi hu mai,
ek saath kai zindgiya ji aai hu mai.A
kabhi teri yaadme hasna kabhi teri yaadme rona,
lagata hai khudko divana karke aai hu mai.
voh sander ka kinara, voh tere hathome mera haath,
mano ya na mano zannatki sai karke aai hu mai.
ab nahi hai ye sunehre sapne mere tanha,
teri aankhome ek sapana CHHodke aai hu mai.

Sapana
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2009, 12:53:54 AM »
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जन्न्तकी सैर करके आई मैं

मेरा मेहताब ,मेरा आफताब छोडके आई हुं मैं ,
अब तारीकी है जीवनमे, रोशनी छोडके आई हुं मैं ।
अब उगलले जीतना ज़हर है तुजमे ऐ ज़माने ,
उनके आबे -हयात शिरी होठोको चुमके आई हुं मैं ।
कुछ भी न रहा याद मुझे महोबतके सीवा,
उनके दिलसे मेरा दिल जोडके आई हुं मैं
अब नही छुएगे मुझे ताने तीर और खंज़र ,
तेरी महोबतका बकतर ओढ्के आई हुं मैं ।
दिलकी बातोपे तवज्जो दी हमने ऐ, खुदा,
अब जहेनको अनसुना करके आई हुं मैं
तुजे पता नही शायद तेरे छुनेसे जी उठी हुं मैं,
एक साथ कई जिन्दिगिया जी आई हुं मैं.
वोह समंदरका किनारा ,वोह तेरे हाथोमे मेरा हाथ,
मानो या ना मानो ज़न्नत की सैर करके आई हु मैं .
कभी तेरी यादमे हँसना,कभी तेरी यादमे रोना,
लगता है खुदको दीवाना करके आई हुं मैं
अब नही ये सुनहरे सपने मेरे तन्हा,
तेरी आँखोमे एक सपना छोडके आई हुं मैं .
सपना


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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2009, 03:59:08 AM »
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ab ugal le jitana zaher hai tujame ai zamane,
unke aabe-hayaat shiri hothoko chumke aai hu mai.....

Bohat bohat khoob Sapana ek behtareen peshkash.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2009, 04:58:20 AM »
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GUD SAPNA JEE...
WELCOME ........
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2009, 04:59:10 AM »
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Thanks.Sajid( Ghayal)!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2009, 05:01:01 AM »
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AGAIN GUD ONE SAPNA JEE..
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2009, 05:05:27 AM »
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Thanks Pndit. I am ajust biggner.

Duniyane diye itne zakhm ki, kuch n aaya par shayari aa gai.
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2009, 06:19:35 AM »
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Second sher kafi achchha hai Sapna, good.
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2009, 08:01:49 AM »
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SAPANA Ji.. bahut accha Likha hai.. Waqai aisa laga ki Jaise Koi Sapna aapne Kaagaz par Likh diya Lafzon me Piro Kar.. Bahut Khooob..!! Applause Applause


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«Reply #9 on: April 25, 2009, 10:00:22 AM »
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  BAHAUT ACHCHA KALAAM SAPNAA JI
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«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2009, 12:58:39 PM »
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Subhan Allah, Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, Sapna Ji,.

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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2009, 02:17:42 PM »
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Thanks Pandit,
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2009, 02:18:22 PM »
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Thanks mann. Apki zara navaji
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«Reply #13 on: April 25, 2009, 02:19:58 PM »
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thanks Jansheen,

Apki dadse hoslaa badhta hai.varana mai to biggner hu.
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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2009, 02:22:32 PM »
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thanks khamosh> aapki duaa.
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