Zinda Hai ............................. PWFS

by pankajwfs on March 15, 2012, 05:48:54 AM
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Aaj bhi jis Aag me dil  jal raha hai mera.
Kya uski chingari abhi Usme  zinda hai.


Sunata hai koi jab afsana-e-mohabbat.
parwaaz kare mere dil ka parinda hai.

Aaj wo gair hai uski adaein bhi gair...
Qalb me mere isq kyuN unka baa-shinda hai.

Mere nagme mere jazbaat unpe kurbaan gai.
Kehte hai wo ye faqat kagaz ka pulinda hai.

Isq ka ehsaas to ruhoN ki ibaadat hai.
Na samjha wo kafir jo samjha wo banda hai.

Duniya ke baazar me mohabbat ka kya mol.
Iski kimat wo hi jaane jiska ye dhandha hai.

Aaj bhi jis Aag me dil  jal raha hai mera.
Kya uski chingari abhi Usme  zinda hai.



(PWFS - 15/03/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2012, 05:51:21 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 15, 2012, 05:48:54 AM
Aaj bhi jo pyar mujh me zindah hai.
Kya wo ab tak Usme bhi zindah hai.

Sunata hai koi jab afsana-e-mohabbat.
parwaaz kare mere dil ka parindah hai.

Aaj wo gair hai uski adaein bhi gair...
Qalb me mere isq kyuN unka baa-shinda hai.

Mere nagme mere jazbaat unpe kurbaan gai.
Kehte hai wo ye faqat kagaz ka pulinda hai.

Isq ka ehsaas to ruhoN ki ibaadat hai.
Na samjha wo kafir jo samjha wo banda hai.

Duniya ke baazar me mohabbat ka kya mol.
Iski kimat wo hi jaane jiska ye dhanda hai.

Aaj bhi jo pyar mujh me zindah hai.
Kya wo ab tak Usme bhi zindah hai.


(PWFS - 15/03/2012)

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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2012, 05:57:31 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 15, 2012, 05:48:54 AM
Aaj bhi jo pyar mujh me zindah hai.
Kya wo ab tak Usme bhi zindah hai.

Sunata hai koi jab afsana-e-mohabbat.
parwaaz kare mere dil ka parindah hai.

Aaj wo gair hai uski adaein bhi gair...
Qalb me mere isq kyuN unka baa-shinda hai.

Mere nagme mere jazbaat unpe kurbaan gai.
Kehte hai wo ye faqat kagaz ka pulinda hai.

Isq ka ehsaas to ruhoN ki ibaadat hai.
Na samjha wo kafir jo samjha wo banda hai.

Duniya ke baazar me mohabbat ka kya mol.
Iski kimat wo hi jaane jiska ye dhanda hai.

Aaj bhi jo pyar mujh me zindah hai.
Kya wo ab tak Usme bhi zindah hai.


(PWFS - 15/03/2012)
Dil Se Daad PWFS Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2012, 06:00:31 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2012, 06:03:24 AM »
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Applause Applause :clap:bahut khub pwfs ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2012, 06:19:44 AM »
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Pankaj ji aap ghazal ki tarf badh rahe hain abhee kuchh kamee hai sudhar jaayegee main khush hoon badhaai ho aap pahlee do lines ko dhyaan se padhe aur akhiree do line padhe main hint detaa hoon pahlee do lines men zindaa repeat naheen karte esaahee koi doosraa lafz lekar misre ko banaao
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2012, 07:42:52 AM »
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Thanks for advise Saini sir i have changed the lines as u said .. Thanks again
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2012, 10:07:45 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on March 15, 2012, 05:51:21 AM
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Bahut bahut sukriya Qalb ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 15, 2012, 10:48:40 AM »
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Quote from: SkykiTears on March 15, 2012, 05:57:31 AM
Dil Se Daad PWFS Ji.. Applause

tHANKS SKY JI FOR READING POST
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2012, 12:16:15 PM »
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Pankaj ji. Achhi peshkash hai . Mubarak ho.
And , keep it up ! Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: March 15, 2012, 01:46:05 PM »
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wah wah...bahut badiya pankaj ji..bahut hi khoob...
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wah wah...bahut badiya pankaj ji..bahut hi khoob...
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«Reply #12 on: March 16, 2012, 03:12:43 AM »
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Quote from: SkykiTears on March 15, 2012, 05:57:31 AM
Dil Se Daad PWFS Ji.. Applause
Thanks Sky ji Sukriya
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2012, 03:22:16 AM »
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on March 15, 2012, 06:00:31 AM
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«Reply #14 on: March 19, 2012, 04:14:47 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 15, 2012, 12:16:15 PM
Pankaj ji. Achhi peshkash hai . Mubarak ho.
And , keep it up ! Hasan


thanks Hasan Sir houslaafzai ke liye bahut bahut Sukriya.
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