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by armanjali on January 19, 2012, 10:31:01 AM
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zuba ko jhakma ka ahsas huwa,
Fir b vafaye kalm se nahlati rahi,
Fida har saksha par,
Mehrum khushi khud se,
Mohobbat bhar k zasbato ko sahlati rahi,
Miti khud b kagaz par,
Nahi vo rang mitne h,
Piya zahar has has kar
Fir b nagin hi kahlati rahi,
!arm!
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2012, 10:44:46 AM »
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beta aap zaraa words par dhyaan den. aapke khyaal achen hain. agar words ko sahee istemaal karenge to yqeenan aapke poetry men nikhaar aayegaa jaise zuba naheen zubaan hai(ज़ुबां या  ज़ुबान).aur bhee kai ese words hain. God bless you keep itup       
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2012, 05:55:16 PM »
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Good . But try to make your posts legible and the pronunciations right.
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2012, 06:27:07 PM »
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zuba ko jhakma ka ahsas huwa,
Fir b vafaye kalm se nahlati rahi,
Fida har saksha par,
Mehrum khushi khud se,
Mohobbat bhar k zasbato ko sahlati rahi,
Miti khud b kagaz par,
Nahi vo rang mitne h,
Piya zahar has has kar
Fir b nagin hi kahlati rahi,
!arm!

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