zuda hoke bhi ham zuda nahi

by oshwin on October 20, 2007, 02:27:43 PM
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KAISE TUJHE MOHABBAT DUN DOST,
                             KABHI KHUD SE BHI TO NA KI MOHHABAT MAINE,
KAISE TUJHE KOI TOHAMT DUN DOST,
                             KABHI KHUD PE BHI TO NA LI KOI TOHMAT MAINE,
TERA YUN CHUPCHAP CHALE JANA APNE ARMAANO KE SAATH,
                             YE KYA TOHFA ZASHNE MOHBBAT KA DIYA MAINE,
AB EN YADUN KE SILSILUN KA KYA KARUN E-KHUDA,
                             YE NIYAMT KI TARHA KYA ATTA KAR DIYA TUNE.


OSHWIN
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2007, 05:33:10 PM »
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Good 1 Oshwin ji
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oshwin
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2007, 01:07:51 PM »
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dear roja,
                          thanks for your kind comment.
          with love & regards,
          oshwin
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2007, 05:08:27 PM »
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bahoot khoob Oshwin ji!!

apka yoindia mai sawagat hai!!
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oshwin
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2007, 12:33:15 PM »
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dear pooja,
                        thanks for your "KHUSHAAMDEED"(swagat),
i just visited your blog. your selection of photographs is great.
with love & regards,
ashwani.
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2007, 07:46:59 PM »
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you welcome Ashwani...

Thanks app waqat nikal kar, meri selections dekhane gaye aor apko pasand aii...

App ke shuru kiye Topic per kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu....

Judai shabd, humari judai mai sakar nahi hota
Ek bhi pal aisa nahi, jab Tu mere sath nahi hota

Her pal tujhi se sawal, her pal tujhi se jawab
Ek pal ko bhi to, tu mujhse juda nahi hota

Raat kat.ti hai tere hi pehlu main ajj bhi
Bas ek mere sath hi to tu nahi hota

Khayalo ko samjha saka hai kab koi jahan main
Aor insaan se juda kabhi uska khayal nahi hota

Judai shabd, humari judai mai sakar nahi hota
Ek bhi pal aisa nahi jab Tu mere sath nahi hota
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2007, 02:06:30 PM »
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dear pooja,
                  har pal tujhe se sawal ,
                              hal pal tujhe se jawab,
                  ek pal ko bhi ,
                              tu mujhse juda nahi hot.
       
VOW,  what a great expression with great visualization.
    this is really having all the SHER with great sense.
i salute your spirit of poetry. although i want to go in details.
butl i m little busy with my sadness. anyhow.
with love & regards.
ashwani
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2007, 08:26:51 PM »
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Bahoot bahoot shukaria Ashwani ji ki apko mera likha hua pasand ayya!!!

Judai ka dard kabhi kisi se juda nahi hota
Sahne ka amda ho shayad alag alag, dard juda nahi hota

Her kisi ne kabhi na kabhi saha hai judai ka jakham zindagi main
Bhawnao main  bikhari zindagi ka magar kabhi bhi yaha ant nahi hota!!!


 Juda = alag, different
Ant = Khatam, End
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2007, 04:06:17 PM »
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DEAR POOJA,
              THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR KIND MOTIVATION.
WITH LOVE & REGARDS
ASHWANI
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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2007, 04:10:39 PM »
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Nice One Aswani Ji,.
Bahoot Hi Accha Sher Pardhne KO Mila,.
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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2007, 12:50:54 PM »
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thanks dear.
   with regards,
   ashwani
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«Reply #11 on: November 06, 2007, 03:22:57 PM »
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u Are Always Welcome
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2011, 10:03:17 PM »
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good written
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