गुजारिश...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

by amit_prakash_meet on March 31, 2012, 12:40:39 PM
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दिल ए बर्बाद की दास्ताँ सुनाना चाहता हूँ
में भी किसी को  अपना बनाना चाहता हूँ |
 
कतई परेशां न होना मेरा ग़म सुनकर तुम
प्यार भीख में मिले मैं ये नहीं चाहता हूँ |
 
चाहने से ही मिलता गर जहाँ में सब कुछ
तो में भी अपने लिए एक मुकां चाहता हूँ |
 
फिर भी तुमसे सिर्फ एक गुजारिश है "मीत"
तुम्हे हर पल हँसता हुआ देखना  चाहता हूँ | |
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2012, 12:57:25 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on March 31, 2012, 12:40:39 PM
दिल ए बर्बाद की दास्ताँ सुनाना चाहता हूँ
में भी किसी को  अपना बनाना चाहता हूँ |
 
कतई परेशां न होना मेरा ग़म सुनकर तुम
प्यार भीख में मिले मैं ये नहीं चाहता हूँ |
 
चाहने से ही मिलता गर जहाँ में सब कुछ
तो में भी अपने लिए एक मुकां चाहता हूँ |
 
फिर भी तुमसे सिर्फ एक गुजारिश है "मीत"
तुम्हे हर पल हँसता हुआ देखना  चाहता हूँ | |


good Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2012, 01:22:37 PM »
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GOOD
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2012, 01:51:42 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on March 31, 2012, 12:40:39 PM
दिल ए बर्बाद की दास्ताँ सुनाना चाहता हूँ
में भी किसी को  अपना बनाना चाहता हूँ |
 
कतई परेशां न होना मेरा ग़म सुनकर तुम
प्यार भीख में मिले मैं ये नहीं चाहता हूँ |
 
चाहने से ही मिलता गर जहाँ में सब कुछ
तो में भी अपने लिए एक मुकां चाहता हूँ |
 
फिर भी तुमसे सिर्फ एक गुजारिश है "मीत"
तुम्हे हर पल हँसता हुआ देखना  चाहता हूँ | |

nice one
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2012, 04:38:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2012, 06:05:50 PM »
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Thanks a lot
Quote from: adil bechain on March 31, 2012, 12:57:25 PM
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2012, 06:07:04 PM »
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Thank you
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2012, 06:09:32 PM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on March 31, 2012, 01:51:42 PM
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2012, 06:11:38 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 31, 2012, 04:38:29 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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nice APM...
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Quote from: theyash on March 31, 2012, 06:14:35 PM
nice APM...
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob Amit ji....!!!
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob Amit ji....!!!
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