तुम बिन ........Sps

by Sps on August 23, 2012, 02:10:09 PM
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तुम बिन ...


ज़िन्दगी है कुछ  अधूरी,

चाहतें नहीं है पूरी...

हर बात में है मजबूरी

            तुम बिन ...


ख़ामोशी देती है  साथ,

यादों की होती बरसात ...

अनजानी सी लगती हर बात

             तुम बिन ...


लगे हर चेहरा, चेहरा तुम्हारा ,

उड़ता  हर बदल, आवारा..

बहका बहका सा जहां ये सारा

              तुम बिन...


यूँ  ही हो जाती नाराज़,

एहसास मेरे बन गए राज़ ...

मन रहता हर पल उदास

             तुम बिन....
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2012, 03:10:17 PM »
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Bahut pyara likha hai aapne.
continuity of expressions..javaab nahee.
Excellent. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2012, 03:42:33 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2012, 03:52:21 PM »
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bahut hee khoobsoorat
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2012, 04:07:52 PM »
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तुम बिन ...


ज़िन्दगी है कुछ  अधूरी,

चाहतें नहीं है पूरी...

हर बात में है मजबूरी

            तुम बिन ...


ख़ामोशी देती है  साथ,

यादों की होती बरसात ...

अनजानी सी लगती हर बात

             तुम बिन ...


लगे हर चेहरा, चेहरा तुम्हारा ,

उड़ता  हर बदल, आवारा..

बहका बहका सा जहां ये सारा

              तुम बिन...


यूँ  ही हो जाती नाराज़,

एहसास मेरे बन गए राज़ ...

मन रहता हर पल उदास

             तुम बिन....


veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii        naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice--------sps
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2012, 05:58:35 PM »
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sundar kavita.mubarak ho.
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2012, 06:59:55 PM »
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Bahut pyara likha hai aapne.
continuity of expressions..javaab nahee.
Excellent. Applause Applause

Thanks mkv ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2012, 07:00:27 PM »
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nice

Thanx nand ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2012, 07:01:00 PM »
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bahut hee khoobsoorat

Thanx Saini sir
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2012, 07:01:41 PM »
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veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii        naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice--------sps

Thank u very much Khamosh ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2012, 07:02:07 PM »
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sundar kavita.mubarak ho.

Thank u Qais ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2012, 03:03:22 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Sps ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2012, 07:16:26 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Sps ji....!!!

Thank you very much Hriday ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2012, 02:44:01 PM »
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