नदिया के पार

by vimmi singh on October 01, 2012, 12:00:53 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 01, 2012, 05:09:30 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai
jitni bhi taareef kee jaaye kam hai.
jokes, poetry, ghazals..aapme pratibha koot koot kar bhari hai..
likhte rahiye.. khush rahiye
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«Reply #16 on: October 01, 2012, 05:13:50 PM »
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saudagar ji....... taarif ke liye bahut bahut shukriya..... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: October 01, 2012, 05:15:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya manoj ji........ Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: October 01, 2012, 05:19:27 PM »
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taarif ke liye aur meri rachna pasand karne ke liye tahe dil se aapka bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: October 01, 2012, 11:32:35 PM »
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ओ नाव खेवईया कर दे मोहे
नदिया के पार
नैनन थक गए  मोरे
तुम आये नहीं अबके बार
मोरे साजन हैं उस पार
ओ नाव खेवईया कर दे मोहे
नदिया के पार

मन भये आहत कछु और नहीं चाहत
ई नदिया भई दुश्मन मोरी
तोहिं कुछ बनाओ बात
ओ नाव खेवईया कर दे मोहे
नदिया के पार
भोर से बैठी मैं ताकत नदिया की धार
अब तो पंछी भी अकेली नहीं
उड़ चली प्रियमन के साथ
ढलने को आई अब सांझ
ओ नाव खेवईया कर दे मोहे
नदिया के पार

उधर वो परेशान
ईधर मैं ताकती तोरी राह
उलझन भई मैं जाऊं कैसे
बीच में पानी की दीवार
जो तैरन  पाती
चल जाती उस पार
ओ नाव खेवईया कर दे मोहे
नदिया के पार

आवत होंगी अब गोपियाँ
जाने न देंगी अबके बार
ताकत मोरी राह कन्हैया
कहा था मिलूंगी इस वार
ओ नाव खेवईया कर दे मोहे
नदिया के पार

कैसे रहा नहीं तुझे समय का ज्ञान
तेरे घर क्या हुआ नहीं उजला संसार
क्रोध आये पर करूँ मैं कैसे
दे दूंगी मैं तोहे दुगुने पैसे
अब करवा मत ईतना इंतज़ार
लूँ मैं तेरी ढेरों बलइयां
ओ नाव खेवईया ले जा  मोहे
नदिया के पार

mubarik achi rachna hai.Ranchi ki khushbu Aa rahi hai, Zharkhand say hamara gehra rishta jo hai
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«Reply #20 on: October 02, 2012, 01:56:06 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #21 on: October 02, 2012, 03:05:15 AM »
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Beautiful poem ,Vimmy ji.
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«Reply #22 on: October 02, 2012, 09:02:27 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sushilbansal ji.......... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: October 02, 2012, 09:04:35 AM »
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tahe dil se aapka bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji.........Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: October 02, 2012, 09:06:48 AM »
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Thank you very much Siddiqui sir....... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: October 03, 2012, 06:34:34 AM »
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sushilbansal ji maafi chahti hun par wo 'Zharkhand' nahi balki 'Jharkhand' hai......
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«Reply #26 on: October 21, 2012, 06:44:50 PM »
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bahut hi khoob surat rachna vimmi ji, bahut bahut badhai
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #27 on: February 14, 2013, 06:44:36 PM »
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bahut hi khoob surat rachna vimmi ji, bahut bahut badhai
ghansham das ahuja
bahut bahut shukriya ahuja ji...... Usual Smile
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