फूल नीले - नज़्म

by NakulG on November 17, 2016, 02:36:31 PM
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आज़ाद नज़्म


फूल नीले इस गली में
आज भी खिलते हैं लेकिन
अब नहीं वो बात इनमें
अब महक वैसी नहीं है
मैं न कहता था कि शायद
ये महक इनकी नहीं है।

ले गयीं हो तुम महक भी
साथ अपने
इस गली से उस गली में

हाँ सनम!
बादे सबा भी
अब नहीं ताज़ा है देखो
हैं बहुत मायूस झौंके
अब ये खिड़की
भी नहीं खुलती ख़ुशी से

ले गयीं मुस्कान इनकी
साथ अपने
इस गली से उस गली में

लॉन भी अब ख़ुश्क सा है
ओस भी पड़ती नहीं अब
चाँदनी जाने से पहले
घास भी रोती है शायद
सुब्ह नंगे पाँव इस पर
तुम नहीं चलती हो जब से

ले गयी हो शबनमी एहसास भी तुम
साथ अपने
इस गली से उस गली में

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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2016, 10:29:16 PM »
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kyaa baat hai bahut hee umda waah waah.
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2016, 04:11:53 AM »
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Wahhh...Bahot..Khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2016, 06:30:26 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2017, 12:22:40 PM »
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सभी पसन्द करने वालों का तहे दिल से शुक्रिया

आहूजा जी
अदिल sir
राकेश जी
सुरिंद्रन जी

आभार
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