भूल कैसे सकता हूँ वो दिन जब तुम मिली थी ---रस्तोगी

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भूल कैसे सकता हूँ वो दिन जब तुम मिली थी
मेरे दिल के गुलशन को फूल बनने वाली कलि थी

दिल तो तुम्हारा साफ़ था,भले ही श्याम वर्ण की थी
मेरे गीतों की कोयल थी जब मीठी तान सुनाने वाली थी

आया एक दिन एक माली,तुझे पकड़ कर ले गया
चहकती इस कोयल को अपने पिन्जड़े में बंद कर लिया

तडफती रही इस बंद पिन्ज्डे में कोई भी छुड़ाने नही आया
मैने भी दम तोड़ दिया था मुझे भी कोई उठाने नही आया

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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on July 16, 2015, 05:16:05 AM
भूल कैसे सकता हूँ वो दिन जब तुम मिली थी
मेरे दिल के गुलशन को फूल बनने वाली कलि थी

दिल तो तुम्हारा साफ़ था,भले ही श्याम वर्ण की थी
मेरे गीतों की कोयल थी जब मीठी तान सुनाने वाली थी

आया एक दिन एक माली,तुझे पकड़ कर ले गया
चहकती इस कोयल को अपने पिन्जड़े में बंद कर लिया

तडफती रही इस बंद पिन्ज्डे में कोई भी छुड़ाने नही आया
मैने भी दम तोड़ दिया था मुझे भी कोई उठाने नही आया

आर के रस्तोगी



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shri Qulb ji tippani ke liye shukriya
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shri Qulb ji tippani ke liye shukriya

boss!!!!!!!!!!


meree tippnee per dhanyavaad kee avayshayktaa nahin hai bus ye nivedan hai kee apnee kavtaa me.N kavitaa kaa hee rung bhhare.N aur ise madhur banaay.N jab mai ne aap ka profile padhaa aur aap kee likhee kaveeta se tulnaa kee toh mujhe bahut atpataa saa lagaa kee aap jaise vridh aur shkshit vayakti ko is havaale se bahut hee gambhheer hona chaahiye aur apne kavita kaa pradarsha apne vayakitva ke hisaab se karnaa chaahiye na kee kisee nau-sikhiye bachhe kee tarah.mujhe chhmaa kae.N main koee kavee nahin hoo.n per samvedar sheel dristee rakhtaa hoo.n yahaan to ab aise-aise nimn aster ke loag aane lage hain kee pooree kee pooree YOINDIA kee divaar mailee see lagtee hain aur main ne ye observe kiya hai kee aap loag ek lobby banaa lee hai aur ghatiyaa kalaam ko vaah-vaah karte hain aur ache kalaam ko chhor dete hain iss se do baat saabit hotee hain yaa to aap logo ke mann me.N irsha-devesh hai yaa shaee maano me.N aap logon ko poem ke standard ka anumaan hee nahin hai .ye sab vayaktee ke dhharna ko darshataa hai.

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