मालूम ही न था...अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

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तेरी मदमस्त आँखों से पीते रहे हम
मयखाने का पता हमें मालूम ही न था

झील सी आँखों में ताउम्र डूबे रहे हम
तैरने का हुनर  हमें मालूम ही न था

सोचते थे बेपंनाह मोहब्बत करते हैं हम
सलीका-ए-मोहब्बत हमें मालूम ही न था

चले गए वो किसी और के होके "मीत"
करेंगे ऐसे सितम हमें मालूम ही न था
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 10:30:39 AM »
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तेरी मदमस्त आँखों से पीते रहे हम
मयखाने का पता हमें मालूम ही न था

झील सी आँखों में ताउम्र डूबे रहे हम
तैरने का हुनर  हमें मालूम ही न था

सोचते थे बेपंनाह मोहब्बत करते हैं हम
सलीका-ए-मोहब्बत हमें मालूम ही न था

चले गए वो किसी और के होके "मीत"
करेंगे ऐसे सितम हमें मालूम ही न था  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 11:05:33 AM »
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Thanks a lot Qalb Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 11:19:04 AM »
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bahut sunder amit ji badhaai aur daad detaa hoon. rau to main pahle hee de chukaa hoon
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 11:35:36 AM »
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bahut mast likhaa hai sir
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2012, 12:17:24 PM »
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Gajab bhai aapne to kamal hi kar diya
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2012, 12:19:26 PM »
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Gajab bhai aapne to kamal hi kar diya
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2012, 12:32:41 PM »
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bahut khoob , amit ji.Badhaai.
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2012, 01:09:42 PM »
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waah bahut khoob amitjii...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2012, 06:37:04 PM »
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तेरी मदमस्त आँखों से पीते रहे हम
मयखाने का पता हमें मालूम ही न था
acha hai iss bahaane rindo.n ki duniya se door rahe icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
झील सी आँखों में ताउम्र डूबे रहे हम
तैरने का हुनर  हमें मालूम ही न था
ye to ghalat hai doobne se acha hai ki tair ke zindagi bachaayi jaaye. abb aap ki marzi. per mere ooper ye ilzaam nahin aanaa chahiye tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
सोचते थे बेपंनाह मोहब्बत करते हैं हम
सलीका-ए-मोहब्बत हमें मालूम ही न था
per saliqa-e-mohabbat aap ko malika-e-mohabbat hi sikhaa sakti hai main nahin Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
चले गए वो किसी और के होके "मीत"
करेंगे ऐसे सितम हमें मालूम ही न था
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard aaj kal aise ashiq to nahin hote aap kaise itne anaadi bann gaye ho

bahut bahut khoob meeeeeeet.........!
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2012, 06:52:52 AM »
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Waah waah Meet Ji, bahut hi khoob likha aapne, padkar dil kush ho gaya, dili mubaarkbaad aur dheron daad
तेरी मदमस्त आँखों से पीते रहे हम
मयखाने का पता हमें मालूम ही न था

झील सी आँखों में ताउम्र डूबे रहे हम
तैरने का हुनर  हमें मालूम ही न था

सोचते थे बेपंनाह मोहब्बत करते हैं हम
सलीका-ए-मोहब्बत हमें मालूम ही न था

चले गए वो किसी और के होके "मीत"
करेंगे ऐसे सितम हमें मालूम ही न था
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2012, 07:28:20 AM »
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Bahut bahut dhanyvaad Saini Ji aur hosla afzaai ke liye shukriya
bahut sunder amit ji badhaai aur daad detaa hoon. rau to main pahle hee de chukaa hoon
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2012, 02:21:35 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob Amit ji...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2012, 05:04:51 AM »
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Thanks a lot Himanshu Ji
bahut mast likhaa hai sir
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2012, 05:23:57 AM »
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Thanks a lot Masoom Ji
Gajab bhai aapne to kamal hi kar diya
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