मिलन की आस.....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

by amit_prakash_meet on April 28, 2012, 06:49:36 PM
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पल पल ये दिन बीता जाये

लम्हा लम्हा रात कटेगी

फिर भी तुम जो न आये तो

मिलने की बस आस रहेगी |

 

क्या क्या ख्वाब सजाये मन में

कितने उम्मीदें बाँधी थी

एक झलक पाने की खातिर

दरवाज़े पर खड़ी रही थी

सूनी पतझड़ सी आँखों में

क्या आ कर मधुमास रहेगी |

 

इंतज़ार में बीता जीवन

मौत बुलाये वो भी न आती  

एक बार मन "मीत" तो आ जा  

बार बार तेरी याद सताती

रात अँधेरी में यादों की

क्या कभी चाँदनी रात रहेगी |

 

पल पल ये दिन बीता जाये

लम्हा लम्हा रात कटेगी

फिर भी तुम जो न आये तो

मिलने की बस आस रहेगी ||
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2012, 06:51:40 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2012, 07:02:38 PM »
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Thanks a lot Anahita Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2012, 07:26:20 PM »
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Bohot Umda, kaafi aacha laga padhkar.

Aage bhi aise hee likhte rahiyga.
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2012, 07:34:37 PM »
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THANKS A LOT MASOOM JI, IS HOSLA AFJAAI KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2012, 08:08:20 PM »
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waaaah bahut khoob amitjii...ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2012, 08:12:17 PM »
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waah.....waah....aur kitna waah karoon, bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne, kaabil-e-daad
पल पल ये दिन बीता जाये

लम्हा लम्हा रात कटेगी

फिर भी तुम जो न आये तो

मिलने की बस आस रहेगी |

 

क्या क्या ख्वाब सजाये मन में

कितने उम्मीदें बाँधी थी

एक झलक पाने की खातिर

दरवाज़े पर खड़ी रही थी

सूनी पतझड़ सी आँखों में

क्या आ कर मधुमास रहेगी |

 

इंतज़ार में बीता जीवन

मौत बुलाये वो भी न आती 

एक बार मन "मीत" तो आ जा 

बार बार तेरी याद सताती

रात अँधेरी में यादों की

क्या कभी चाँदनी रात रहेगी |

 

पल पल ये दिन बीता जाये

लम्हा लम्हा रात कटेगी

फिर भी तुम जो न आये तो

मिलने की बस आस रहेगी ||
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2012, 07:00:27 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2012, 02:36:39 PM »
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Thanks a lot Shihab Ji, GOD bless you
Bahut Khub Amit Ji.... Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2012, 07:49:42 AM »
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Many many thanks Sahiba Ji, koshish jaaree rahegi
Bohot Umda, kaafi aacha laga padhkar.

Aage bhi aise hee likhte rahiyga.
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2012, 07:51:47 AM »
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Thanks a lot Dolly Ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 12:16:00 PM »
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many many thanks Goldy Ji, God bless you
waah.....waah....aur kitna waah karoon, bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne, kaabil-e-daad
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