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by sapana on April 23, 2009, 08:28:50 PM
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याद


ऐ दिल ज़रा चैन तो पाले,
कितना तडपेगा उनकी यादमे ?
ऐ दिल ज़रा सांस तो लेले,
कितना सिसकेगा उनकी यादमे?

तन्हाईका सफर ख़तम नही होता,
गमका यह मोसम ख़तम नही होता,
प्यारने तो दामन छोड़ दिया कबका,
नफ़रतका यह आलम ख़तम नही होता।

खुदा करे मेरी जुदाईका असर हो तुम पर,
खुदा करे तू भी मिलनेको तरसे ,
खुदा करे तेरा दिल भी बेकरार हो,
खुदा करे तेरी आँखे भी बरसे ।
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2009, 08:32:56 PM »
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nice one sapana!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2009, 08:36:12 PM »
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Thanks again.Thanks for comment!
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2009, 02:06:56 AM »
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Yaad aur Teri Yaad dono poems achchhi hain.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2009, 02:19:13 AM »
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thanks sravesh. I love comments. Keeps me going.
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2009, 04:34:32 AM »
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Quote from: sapana on April 23, 2009, 08:28:50 PM
याद


ऐ दिल ज़रा चैन तो पाले,
कितना तडपेगा उनकी यादमे ?
ऐ दिल ज़रा सांस तो लेले,
कितना सिसकेगा उनकी यादमे?

तन्हाईका सफर ख़तम नही होता,
गमका यह मोसम ख़तम नही होता,
प्यारने तो दामन छोड़ दिया कबका,
नफ़रतका यह आलम ख़तम नही होता।

खुदा करे मेरी जुदाईका असर हो तुम पर,
खुदा करे तू भी मिलनेको तरसे ,
खुदा करे तेरा दिल भी बेकरार हो,
खुदा करे तेरी आँखे भी बरसे ।
Achcha likhte ho sapna ji,
khuda ab kiski sunta hai/na khudao se mele gum na khodao se kahkar hi duur ho sakte hai/
ghalib ka ek sh-r apke nazar rakhta hoon---ki
"humko maloom hai jannat ki haqiqat lekin/ dil ke khus rakh ne ko ghalib ye khyal achcha hai"
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2009, 06:06:06 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sapana Ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2009, 10:37:36 AM »
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Quote from: sapana on April 23, 2009, 08:28:50 PM
याद


ऐ दिल ज़रा चैन तो पाले,
कितना तडपेगा उनकी यादमे ?
ऐ दिल ज़रा सांस तो लेले,
कितना सिसकेगा उनकी यादमे?

तन्हाईका सफर ख़तम नही होता,
गमका यह मोसम ख़तम नही होता,
प्यारने तो दामन छोड़ दिया कबका,
नफ़रतका यह आलम ख़तम नही होता।

खुदा करे मेरी जुदाईका असर हो तुम पर,
खुदा करे तू भी मिलनेको तरसे ,
खुदा करे तेरा दिल भी बेकरार हो,
खुदा करे तेरी आँखे भी बरसे ।

Bohot achcha likha hai Sapana Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 01:50:52 PM »
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Thanks Talat.I am learnig.
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 01:53:55 PM »
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Thanks Khasji.I like the reply better then my ashaar.Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 01:54:34 PM »
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Thanks Rajesh.
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 02:32:04 PM »
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Thanks Kash.
Nice lines.
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2009, 02:57:31 PM »
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bohot acha likha hai sapana ji!
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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2009, 03:10:57 PM »
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Thanks Sanya.
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