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अब रेत भी कैसे करे ज़ज्ब मेरे
अश्क-ए-गम-ए-जुदाई,

ये अश्क, अश्क नहीं रहे
अब दरिया में हैं बदल चुके।



~ 'परिचित'



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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2015, 09:34:19 PM »
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bahut khoob.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Naa khushk hone de apnee aankhon ko ashq afshan kiye chalaa jaa...
Jahan zaraat-e-muszmahil hain isse gulistan kiye chalaa jaa!
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2015, 03:44:55 AM »
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  Applause Applause Applause

वाह! ... Surindarn ji आपने तो कमाल के अल्फाज़ लिखें हैं ... लाज़वाब !
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2015, 05:56:44 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut khoob....  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2015, 08:19:44 AM »
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अब रेत भी कैसे करे ज़ज्ब मेरे
अश्क-ए-गम-ए-जुदाई,

ये अश्क, अश्क नहीं रहे
अब दरिया में हैं बदल चुके।



~ 'परिचित'



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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2015, 09:54:20 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


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आपका शुक्रिया ...!
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bahut khoob....  Applause Applause Applause Applause

happy3

आपका शुक्रिया Vimmi ji ... !
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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आपका शुक्रिया Qalb जी !
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अब रेत भी कैसे करे ज़ज्ब मेरे
अश्क-ए-गम-ए-जुदाई,

ये अश्क, अश्क नहीं रहे
अब दरिया में हैं बदल चुके।



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good one,sir
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2015, 01:32:25 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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Waah waah...
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