16ve dhadkan

by namrus on October 18, 2008, 01:44:20 PM
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sal ki pehli barsat
jawani ki pehli dhadkan
ek nazar mei hi pyar hua
woh thee meri 16 sal ke pheli dhadkan
ab kuch nahi acha lagta
ab koi nahi acha lagta
tum ko jab tak nahi dekhta
zindagi me aur kuch acha nahi lagta,
tumhare chahere ko is tarah dil me rang de
jaise whao patther ke lakeer
jo meet nani sak thi
na dharam,najatpat,
ham ko milaya hai mohobbat ne pas pas,
ham karte hai us 16baras ki bali umar ko
jis ne hame ye dil diya

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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2008, 08:39:27 PM »
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Bohot khoob namrus ji achha likha he aapne, aap ka swagat he.
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2008, 08:48:54 PM »
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Nice work namrus ji, apka yoindia main sawagat hai
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2008, 12:38:53 AM »
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Welcome to Yoindia Namrus Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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