-----/// Aa bhi jaao tum /// ------ Hriday

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khuli    baahen    hain    meri,   aa   bhi   jaao tum
aake    seene   se   mere   ek   baar    lag jaao tum

hothon   ki    laali   apni   yun   naa  chhipaao tum
zulfon  ko   chehre   se   thodaa  to   hataao  tum

kaanpte hothon   ko apne mere paas to laao tum
jaadu   se adaaon  ke mujhe  yun naa sataao tum
 
sharbati    aankhon  ka  mujhe  ras to pilaao  tum
aa  ke  kareeb    itne   ab yun  naa  sharmaao tum

rehke duur  khade  mujhse mujhe naa sataao tum
daud  ke   aa    jaao  janaa  seene se lag  jaao tum

khuli    baahen   hain     meri ,   aa   bhi jaao  tum
aake   seene   se   mere    ek   baar  lag   jaao  tum

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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 03:41:05 PM »
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Nice!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 03:42:48 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 22, 2012, 03:19:08 PM
khuli    baahen    hain    meri,   aa   bhi   jaao tum
aake    seene   se   mere   ek   baar    lag jaao tum

hothon   ki    laali   apni   yun   naa  chhipaao tum
zulfon  ko   chehre   se   thodaa  to   hataao  tum

kaanpte hothon   ko apne mere paas to laao tum
jaadu  se adaaon  ke mujhe  yun naa sataao tum
 
sharbati    aankhon  ka  mujhe  ras to pilaao  tum
aa  ke  kareeb    itne   ab yun  naa  sharmaao tum

rehke duur  khade  mujhse mujhe naa sataao tum
daud  ke   aa   jaao  janaa  seene se lag  jaao tum

khuli    baahen   hain     meri ,   aa   bhi jaao  tum
aake   seene   se   mere   ek   baar  lag   jaao  tum

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very very romantic... nice sher hriday jee  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 05:38:09 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil jee

kya kahun..shabdo ki kami pad jaati hai..aapki taareef karna bhi tedhi kheer hai..sab to aap pahle hi likh chuke hote hai.
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 06:02:12 PM »
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rumaani khayalon mein aap sedhe pahuncha dete hai sahab. Dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 06:06:29 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 22, 2012, 03:19:08 PM
khuli    baahen    hain    meri,   aa   bhi   jaao tum
aake    seene   se   mere   ek   baar    lag jaao tum

hothon   ki    laali   apni   yun   naa  chhipaao tum
zulfon  ko   chehre   se   thodaa  to   hataao  tum

kaanpte hothon   ko apne mere paas to laao tum
jaadu   se adaaon  ke mujhe  yun naa sataao tum
 
sharbati    aankhon  ka  mujhe  ras to pilaao  tum
aa  ke  kareeb    itne   ab yun  naa  sharmaao tum

rehke duur  khade  mujhse mujhe naa sataao tum
daud  ke   aa    jaao  janaa  seene se lag  jaao tum

khuli    baahen   hain     meri ,   aa   bhi jaao  tum
aake   seene   se   mere    ek   baar  lag   jaao  tum

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naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2012, 12:58:31 AM »
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bahut bahut pyaaree kapil ji aaj hee jaanaa aapkaa naam bahut sunder
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2012, 12:59:55 AM »
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bahut acche
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 22, 2012, 03:19:08 PM
khuli    baahen    hain    meri,   aa   bhi   jaao tum
aake    seene   se   mere   ek   baar    lag jaao tum

hothon   ki    laali   apni   yun   naa  chhipaao tum
zulfon  ko   chehre   se   thodaa  to   hataao  tum

kaanpte hothon   ko apne mere paas to laao tum
jaadu   se adaaon  ke mujhe  yun naa sataao tum
 
sharbati    aankhon  ka  mujhe  ras to pilaao  tum
aa  ke  kareeb    itne   ab yun  naa  sharmaao tum

rehke duur  khade  mujhse mujhe naa sataao tum
daud  ke   aa    jaao  janaa  seene se lag  jaao tum

khuli    baahen   hain     meri ,   aa   bhi jaao  tum
aake   seene   se   mere    ek   baar  lag   jaao  tum

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2012, 02:42:40 AM »
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Bahut Badiya KAPIL JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2012, 06:44:19 AM »
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bahut hi romantic likha hai, badhai Hriday ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2012, 12:56:16 PM »
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thanks a lot Shireen ji....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on August 22, 2012, 03:41:05 PM
Nice!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2012, 12:58:49 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2012, 04:49:18 PM »
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bahut khub bahut hi badhiya hriday ji........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Kapil Bhai Behad Rumaani Peshkash Hai Yeh Aapki.. Har Lafz Me Mohabbat Bhari Hai.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2012, 03:52:11 PM »
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thanks a lot Shireen ji....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on August 22, 2012, 03:41:05 PM
Nice!!! Applause Applause Applause
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