---aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun---

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aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun---
          jameen ka jahan aasmaa se milna ho
          sitaaron ka jahan jamee par simatna ho
           pahaadon par jahan baadalon ka pighalna ho
           parindon ka jahan bekhof bicharna ho
           
aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalu---

            dilon me jahan fariston ka basera ho
            har raat ki jahan ummedee naya saveraa ho
            gham ki jahan na parchai,muskaati kaliyon ki chatha sunahara ho

aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun---
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2011, 11:52:02 AM »
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aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun---
          jameen ka jahan aasmaa se milna ho
          sitaaron ka jahan jamee par simatna ho
           pahaadon par jahan baadalon ka pighalna ho
           parindon ka jahan bekhof bicharna ho
           
aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalu---

            dilon me jahan fariston ka basera ho
            har raat ki jahan ummedee naya saveraa ho
            gham ki jahan na parchai,muskaati kaliyon ki chatha sunahara ho

aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun---

Bahut Bahut Khoob Killbillji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2011, 12:00:34 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 11:52:02 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Killbillji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sukriya khuaish ji Usual Smile
aap bhi kuch lines add karte apni taraf se to maza aata--

aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun--
  ( mai actualy ise game section me post karna chahta tha )
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2011, 12:20:52 PM »
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sukriya khuaish ji Usual Smile
aap bhi kuch lines add karte apni taraf se to maza aata--

aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun--
  ( mai actualy ise game section me post karna chahta tha )

Beshak Aap isse Game Section Mein Post Kar Sakte Hai Dost,Par Itni Khoobsurat Topic ki Khoobsurti Bekaraar Rahe..Chaliye Main Bhi Kuch Likhta Hoon...


Aa Chal ke Tujhe main leke Chaloon

Jaha  Bhooke Pet Koi Sota Nahi
Jahan Gareebi Ki chot Se Koi Rota Nahi

Jahan Dil Aaene Ki Tarah Saaf Rehta Ho
Jahan Rishwat-Khori Ke Jageh Insaaf rehta Ho

Jahan Aaj bhi Rishton Ki mehak Zinda Ho
APni Khatayon par Insaan Sharminda Ho

Jahan Insaan Sirf Khuda Ke Aage Sar Jhukata Ho
Jahan Har Haal mein Insaan Muskuraata Ho

Aa chal Ke Tujhe Main leke Chalun...
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2011, 06:15:33 PM »
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wah wah khuaish dost--
kamaal ka likha hai aapne--
dil khus ho gaya KB ka Usual Smile
thanq so much
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sukriya mukesh ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2011, 04:22:42 AM »
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Quote from: killbill on August 03, 2011, 11:50:19 AM
aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun---
          jameen ka jahan aasmaa se milna ho
          sitaaron ka jahan jamee par simatna ho
           pahaadon par jahan baadalon ka pighalna ho
           parindon ka jahan bekhof bicharna ho
           
aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalu---

            dilon me jahan fariston ka basera ho
            har raat ki jahan ummedee naya saveraa ho
            gham ki jahan na parchai,muskaati kaliyon ki chatha sunahara ho

aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun---

bht mast likha hai KB ..kaash aisi koi jagah pe ja sakun kabhi
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2011, 04:23:38 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 12:20:52 PM
Beshak Aap isse Game Section Mein Post Kar Sakte Hai Dost,Par Itni Khoobsurat Topic ki Khoobsurti Bekaraar Rahe..Chaliye Main Bhi Kuch Likhta Hoon...


Aa Chal ke Tujhe main leke Chaloon

Jaha  Bhooke Pet Koi Sota Nahi
Jahan Gareebi Ki chot Se Koi Rota Nahi

Jahan Dil Aaene Ki Tarah Saaf Rehta Ho
Jahan Rishwat-Khori Ke Jageh Insaaf rehta Ho

Jahan Aaj bhi Rishton Ki mehak Zinda Ho
APni Khatayon par Insaan Sharminda Ho

Jahan Insaan Sirf Khuda Ke Aage Sar Jhukata Ho
Jahan Har Haal mein Insaan Muskuraata Ho

Aa chal Ke Tujhe Main leke Chalun...

khwaish ji no words to appreciate ur words and feelings.........its just awesome......
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2011, 05:15:46 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 04, 2011, 04:22:42 AM
bht mast likha hai KB ..kaash aisi koi jagah pe ja sakun kabhi

aisi jagah hai ji--
lekin wahan baht muskil se jaa paate hain log !!

sukriya KD----K*
kaash ki tu bhi kuch likh jaati yahan 2-4 line
sbke dilo me ek aisi kisi jagah ka armaan to hota hi hai na!!!
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Bahut Khoob Killbill Ji Applause Applause
sukriya kash ji--
lekin kuch line likhte toi achha hota
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 04, 2011, 04:23:38 AM
khwaish ji no words to appreciate ur words and feelings.........its just awesome......

Thankyou Anujiiiii icon_flower happy9 Usual Smile
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Quote from: killbill on August 03, 2011, 06:15:33 PM
wah wah khuaish dost--
kamaal ka likha hai aapne--
dil khus ho gaya KB ka Usual Smile
thanq so much


Aapka Bahut bahut shukriya Dost jo aapne humein kuch likhne ka Mauka Diya..Thanks for giving ur time.. icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2011, 07:17:35 AM »
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Aapka Bahut bahut shukriya Dost jo aapne humein kuch likhne ka Mauka Diya..Thanks for giving ur time.. icon_flower
no thanx for dis dear--aapne itna achha likha ki bas no words Usual Smile

aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun--
    jahan pyar hi pyar barsta ho
    jahan na koi aashiq tarasta ho
    palkon me sabhi ke haqikati khab hi basta hoi
aa chal ki tujhe mai leke chalun--
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