~** AA Jaao JANA **~

by chitra on April 14, 2006, 04:54:49 AM
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Muddato ke baad aaj fir tanhaai mahsoos hui
jakhmo ke samndar mein puraani chot fir nasoor hui

tamaam koshishe haar gyi parchhaaiya bhi be-ganni hui
bhul gyi thee jise dubaara wo gamo ki kahaani hui

thak gayi ab to raahe bhi ke aur door manzile hui
kaisa ye ajeeb safar Ae-khuda har kadam pe muskile hui

bujhe chirago ki traha dil ki tamnnaaye thee soyi hui
mili thee ek lau,us se roshan shama aaj fir aur koi hui

mere kalaamo se aaj jab ye mahfil rangeen hui
dil ki dhadkane teri yaad mein  aaj fir gamgeen hui

AA JAAO JANA ke teri JANU fir se be-sahaara hui
na milungee fir kabhi saanse bas do ghadi ki mehmaan hui

JANA SIRF TERA INTZAAR HAI BAS..............!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2006, 04:57:14 AM »
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Chitra

Very good !

Bahut achcha likha hai tumne har baar ki tarah !

Rajbir
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2006, 05:05:13 AM »
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bahot   khoob........ Chintra..........
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2006, 05:24:41 AM »
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wah chitra kaya baat hai!!
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chitra
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2006, 05:46:07 AM »
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Thanks Waheed jee....pooja jee, rajbir jee...!!!

waheed jee mera naam to sahi kar do....ya fir jo bhi likha hai usme se r bhi hataa do...kuchh to matlab rahega..!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2006, 05:50:57 AM »
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ha ha ha well said Chitra!!!! yah waheed aisa hi hai....ek sath kai kai kaam jo bichara karta hai!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2006, 06:33:14 AM »
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bhoot khoob chitra...........

zhakmo ke es sumandar me kiyu yeh eshaas hua........
lehre pass aaye tu kiyu yeh dard ka rishta aur khas hua.........
jise pyar kia meine aseem woh na mere pass hua........
khush rahe wo apne pyar ke sath bas yeh meri hai dua........

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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2006, 07:39:45 AM »
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rock india or chitra ................................................. ........ oska nam bhi likh do
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2006, 08:05:22 AM »
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ek baar phir khud ko doraha rahi hun ... yaha mohabbat aur dosti banaye rakhna hamara mahezab ahi ... to ya to aap khid ki apni post ho sudhar de ... anhi to majbooran yeh kaam monitors ko karna padega.
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chitra
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2006, 12:50:22 PM »
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Thanks Tosha jee and YOINDIA monitors...!!
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chitra
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2006, 03:12:56 PM »
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Bahoot khoob majid jee....!!!

Jaane kyo isqh ki raahe itni muskil hoti hai
wafaa karke bhi hume ruswaai hasil hoti hai

Gamo ke samndar bhar aate hai ankho mein
aur bahte hai yu ashk jiase koi tooti mala hoti hai
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2006, 03:25:08 PM »
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Bahoot khoob majid jee....!!!

Jaane kyo isqh ki raahe itni muskil hoti hai
wafaa karke bhi hume ruswaai hasil hoti hai

Gamo ke samndar bhar aate hai ankho mein
aur bahte hai yu ashk jiase koi tooti mala hoti hai


Mahobbat mein Mushkilein bhi Asaan hoti hai.....
Kabhi Karke toh dekho sacchi mahobbat kisi se....
Isme toh Raatein bhi Shaam ki tarah guzarti hai.......!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2006, 03:32:12 PM »
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bahut khoob CHITRA JI, MAJID BHAI, AUR BS JI

Yaad teri bhulaun kaise,tasveer dil se mitaun kaise,
bekarar hoon is kadar, zindgi tum bin bitaun kaise....

guzarte hain bin aapke din-raat, haal-e-dil sunaun kaise,
ajeeb si kashish hai yaadon me teri, tadap dil ki bataun kaise....
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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2006, 03:37:26 PM »
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Quote from: "vicky AKELA"
bahut khoob CHITRA JI, MAJID BHAI, AUR BS JI

Yaad teri bhulaun kaise,tasveer dil se mitaun kaise,
bekarar hoon is kadar, zindgi tum bin bitaun kaise....

guzarte hain bin aapke din-raat, haal-e-dil sunaun kaise,
ajeeb si kashish hai yaadon me teri, tadap dil ki bataun kaise....


Aye Ashique Ashiqui mitane ke liye nahi hoti.....
Yaadein chali ati hai Aankhein band karke....
Inhe bulane ki jaroorat nahi hoti....

Tu bhi kabhi jee ke dekh Shaam ko Raat ke peher mein.....
Samajh jayega Deewangi ki koi hadd nahi hoti.........!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2006, 05:23:21 PM »
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very nice  work  BD.  Vicky..........   Majid.......   sabhi logon  ne bahot accha ..........likha......
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