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aa jao..
so rahe hoge..
gum hoge
kisi ke khwabon main...
khabar bhi na hogi tumhe..
koi baitha hai
palke bichhaye
tumheri rahon main...
ki jago...
aao aajao...
ab to aa hi jao..
baki jo hain..
kuchh sanse..
thodi dhadkane..
pata nahin kb..
sath chhod degi...
is raste par shayad..
fir tumhe
meri khaq bhi na milegi...
aa jao...
ab to aa jao...
manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2011, 04:27:35 AM » |
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wah ji…
likha to acha hai aapne…
lekin…
khumaar e ishq me dard ko milaana thk nai…
judai me dard jamta hai…
khumaar me to srf masti aur mohbt honi chahiye…
daad dil se aur dua ki aapki palken jhapakne se pahle aapka intzaar khatam ho jaaye
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2011, 04:30:58 AM » |
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kisi sach ka ehsas jo boht khoob pesh kiya aPni si lagi yeh sachai
very good
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2011, 04:40:26 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya kbji....
aapne thik kaha... ki isme bhi judai ka dard hai.. par khumare ishq main islie dia ki ishq ka khumar hai tabhi intzar hai..... par shayad aap thik kahte hain...
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2011, 04:41:57 AM » |
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bahut ahut shukriya saahilji...
sath rahie....
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2011, 07:02:03 AM » |
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aa jao..
so rahe hoge..
gum hoge
kisi ke khwabon main...
khabar bhi na hogi tumhe..
koi baitha hai
palke bichhaye
tumheri rahon main...
ki jago...
aao aajao...
ab to aa hi jao..
baki jo hain..
kuchh sanse..
thodi dhadkane..
pata nahin kb..
sath chhod degi...
is raste par shayad..
fir tumhe
meri khaq bhi na milegi...
aa jao...
ab to aa jao...
manju "mann"
WAH WAH WAH KYA AJIZI HAI , KYA DARD HAI. BAHUT KHOOB |
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2011, 07:58:39 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya khamoshji.....
yun hi sath rahie.....
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2011, 08:39:03 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....
sath rahieyega sada...
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2011, 09:14:44 AM » |
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lo aa gaye…
soye the palke moonde
gum the
tumhare hi khabo me
ke ab jaag gaye
haseen tumare chehre ke
deedaar ko aa gaye…
ke ab kyn roothi ho…
kuch der hui
manta hu sanam
ke maan bhi jaao
ab tum bhi to aa jao
aa hi jao ab
thoda aur……
etbaar kar lo
bas ek baar hi apni baaho me
fir se bhar lo
na jaa saku kahi ab
ke mujhe tum sanam
dil me apne tum qaid kar ko……
tere deed ko ab
palken bichaye tars rahe hum
ab tumhari in raaho me……
ke jaan ab tum bhi
aa jao aa hi jao…
lo hum to aa gaye
snam ab tum b to aa jao…
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2011, 09:23:49 AM » |
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kbji.... jaisi rachna hamne likhi wesi har rachna esa hi jawab chahti hai.... shukriya aapka....  |
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2011, 09:26:58 AM » |
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thanq thanq ji…
aapse seekh rhe hain bas…
wese hum to esa reply bht pehle dia karte the…
ab to bhul chuke hain
ab fir se seekh rhe hain
sukriya
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2011, 10:34:06 AM » |
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lo aa gaye…
soye the palke moonde
gum the
tumhare hi khabo me
ke ab jaag gaye
haseen tumare chehre ke
deedaar ko aa gaye…
ke ab kyn roothi ho…
kuch der hui
manta hu sanam
ke maan bhi jaao
ab tum bhi to aa jao
aa hi jao ab
thoda aur……
etbaar kar lo
bas ek baar hi apni baaho me
fir se bhar lo
na jaa saku kahi ab
ke mujhe tum sanam
dil me apne tum qaid kar ko……
tere deed ko ab
palken bichaye tars rahe hum
ab tumhari in raaho me……
ke jaan ab tum bhi
aa jao aa hi jao…
lo hum to aa gaye
snam ab tum b to aa jao…
kya jaawab hai ustaad puraa kill kar diya dost |
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2011, 10:34:58 AM » |
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aa jao..
so rahe hoge..
gum hoge
kisi ke khwabon main...
khabar bhi na hogi tumhe..
koi baitha hai
palke bichhaye
tumheri rahon main...
ki jago...
aao aajao...
ab to aa hi jao..
baki jo hain..
kuchh sanse..
thodi dhadkane..
pata nahin kb..
sath chhod degi...
is raste par shayad..
fir tumhe
meri khaq bhi na milegi...
aa jao...
ab to aa jao...
manju "mann"
bahut umdaaaaaaaaa manjum ji |
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2011, 11:55:33 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji.........
sath rahie.....
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