~~~Aa saath baithe'in...~~~

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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2009, 10:12:50 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 05, 2009, 04:01:07 AM
Wah Kya Baat hai KASHISH.. Really A Nice Creation.. waqai Aapka YEh Qalaam Bilkul ek Khwaab sa Laga..!! Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooob..!! Applause Applause


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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2009, 10:34:05 AM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Kashish Sorry Maine LateReply Kiya Is threadPe,.

Yunhi LIkhtre Rehna, Hume Intezaar Hai Aapke AurBhi Kalaamo Ka,.
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«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2009, 10:39:12 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 05, 2009, 10:34:05 AM
Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Kashish Sorry Maine LateReply Kiya Is threadPe,.

Yunhi LIkhtre Rehna, Hume Intezaar Hai Aapke AurBhi Kalaamo Ka,.



shukriya Azeem
waise to humein bhi intezaar rehta hai aapki nazmon ka
aur pls aap sorry mat kaha kijiye... bura lagta hai...
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2009, 12:10:55 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 04, 2009, 11:27:19 AM
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Zindagi kal humein kahan le jaaye
shayad tumhe aur mujhe juda kar jaaye
kuch der ke liye waqt ko rok le'in
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Is mulakaat mein tujhse aur maangu bhi to kya
teri khamosh zubaan se sawaal karoon bhi to kya
aaj aankhon ko hi jawaab dene de'in
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Anjaana sa ehsaas dil mein bhar gaya hai
na jaane tumse kaisa rishta sa ban gaya hai
ise dilon ko hi samajhne de'in
Aa saath baithe'n
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Ek khwab jo saath milkar dekha hai
woh aarzoo jo dono dilon mein hai
yeh tasavvur yunhi rehne de'in
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...


Bohot Khoob Kashish....Very beautifully written!
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«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2009, 05:12:19 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 05, 2009, 10:39:12 AM
shukriya Azeem
waise to humein bhi intezaar rehta hai aapki nazmon ka
aur pls aap sorry mat kaha kijiye... bura lagta hai...



Inshallah,Waise Aapse Bohat Umeedein hain,Yunhi LIkhte Rehna
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«Reply #20 on: May 06, 2009, 09:36:21 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 12:10:55 PM
Bohot Khoob Kashish....Very beautifully written!


bahut bahut shukriya Talat ji
jo apne saraha... notworthy
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«Reply #21 on: May 06, 2009, 09:44:31 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 05, 2009, 05:12:19 PM

Inshallah,Waise Aapse Bohat Umeedein hain,Yunhi LIkhte Rehna


shukriya Azeem jo aapne is kaabil samjha meri koshish rahegi ki aapki umeedon ko poora kar sakoon
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«Reply #22 on: May 20, 2009, 12:16:34 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 04, 2009, 11:27:19 AM
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Zindagi kal humein kahan le jaaye
shayad tumhe aur mujhe juda kar jaaye
kuch der ke liye waqt ko rok le'in
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Is mulakaat mein tujhse aur maangu bhi to kya
teri khamosh zubaan se sawaal karoon bhi to kya
aaj aankhon ko hi jawaab dene de'in
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Anjaana sa ehsaas dil mein bhar gaya hai
na jaane tumse kaisa rishta sa ban gaya hai
ise dilon ko hi samajhne de'in
Aa saath baithe'n
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...

Ek khwab jo saath milkar dekha hai
woh aarzoo jo dono dilon mein hai
yeh tasavvur yunhi rehne de'in
Aa saath baithe'in
yeh pal yeh lamha jee le'in...


Madam ! Aap Agar Likhne baitho To Kalum To Waise hi jhoom Uthegi
aur Padhne waale Ka To Aa'lum Na Puchho Azkhud rafta Ho k padhta hi Jayega..Padhta hi Jayega...Kitni hi badi Tawil Nazm Fir Kyun na Ho.........
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