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by klaskar on September 17, 2010, 03:03:40 PM
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tumhe yaadon me basaake rakhne ki chaahat si ho gai hai,
kuch is tarha pyaar karne ki hamaari aadat si ho gayi hai,

pehle hum doston ke saath haste khikhilaate the,
ab tumhe yaad kar muskuraane ki aadat si ho gai hai,

kabhi tanhaayi se hum ghabraate the jahaan,
ab tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

kabhi apni parchaayi se dur bhaaga karte the,
ab tumhe apni parchhai samajhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

ab tumhaari chahat meri ibadat si ho gayi hai,
ab meri mohabbat hi meri aadat si ho gayi hai...


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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2010, 03:56:09 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 17, 2010, 03:03:40 PM


tumhe yaadon me basaake rakhne ki chaahat si ho gai hai,
kuch is tarha pyaar karne ki hamaari aadat si ho gayi hai,

pehle hum doston ke saath haste khikhilaate the,
ab tumhe yaad kar muskuraane ki aadat si ho gai hai,

kabhi tanhaayi se hum ghabraate the jahaan,
ab tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

kabhi apni parchaayi se dur bhaaga karte the,
ab tumhe apni parchhai samajhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

ab tumhaari chahat meri ibadat si ho gayi hai,
ab meri mohabbat hi meri aadat si ho gayi hai...


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Klaskar Ji....Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne tehreer me...pyaar ke sabhi rang dikhe isme... very nice creation.. dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2010, 11:41:46 PM »
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Bhut hi khoob............

Aaj kaal pyar jhlak reha hai tumari poems main .....

Gud change ............

Keep smiling alwys & keep writing gud stuff ......
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2010, 12:54:09 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Naresh ji...!!!

Quote from: Anshumali on September 17, 2010, 03:56:09 PM
Klaskar Ji....Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne tehreer me...pyaar ke sabhi rang dikhe isme... very nice creation.. dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2010, 12:55:03 AM »
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thank you so much Neel ji... sab aap jaise dosto ka saath aur pyaar hi hai jo main ab pyaar mohabbat pe fir se likh paa raha hoon.. !!!

Quote from: neelgold on September 17, 2010, 11:41:46 PM
Bhut hi khoob............

Aaj kaal pyar jhlak reha hai tumari poems main .....

Gud change ............

Keep smiling alwys & keep writing gud stuff ......
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2010, 04:22:23 AM »
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Gud work .......

Keep writing ...

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thank you so much Neel ji... sab aap jaise dosto ka saath aur pyaar hi hai jo main ab pyaar mohabbat pe fir se likh paa raha hoon.. !!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2010, 08:44:06 AM »
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thanks again...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on September 18, 2010, 04:22:23 AM
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    Bahut achhe ehsaas pesh kiy hai aapne Kapil ji . Very nice. Keep writing. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2010, 08:49:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji...!!! Usual Smile

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    Bahut achhe ehsaas pesh kiy hai aapne Kapil ji . Very nice. Keep writing. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2010, 09:28:19 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 17, 2010, 03:03:40 PM


tumhe yaadon me basaake rakhne ki chaahat si ho gai hai,
kuch is tarha pyaar karne ki hamaari aadat si ho gayi hai,

pehle hum doston ke saath haste khikhilaate the,
ab tumhe yaad kar muskuraane ki aadat si ho gai hai,

kabhi tanhaayi se hum ghabraate the jahaan,
ab tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

kabhi apni parchaayi se dur bhaaga karte the,
ab tumhe apni parchhai samajhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

ab tumhaari chahat meri ibadat si ho gayi hai,
ab meri mohabbat hi meri aadat si ho gayi hai...


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Bahut sundar lekh hai aap ki Kapil
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 18, 2010, 09:28:19 PM
Bahut sundar lekh hai aap ki Kapil
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Klaskar Jee Aadaab!

Behad achche aur khubsurat ahsaas kahe hai aapne...
Aik achchi koshish per daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         


Har baat meiN tera zikra karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai
Tere naam per thandi aah bharne ki aadat se ho gayi hai Usual Smile
         

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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2010, 10:28:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji... aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat sher likha hai.. shukriya...!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 18, 2010, 10:01:37 PM
Klaskar Jee Aadaab!

Behad achche aur khubsurat ahsaas kahe hai aapne...
Aik achchi koshish per daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         


Har baat meiN tera zikra karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai
Tere naam per thandi aah bharne ki aadat se ho gayi hai Usual Smile
         


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