Aafat me aa gayee hai

by sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
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Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye..

Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye.

Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.

yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.

Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2013, 04:21:03 PM »
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Mohtarma tak Taish ka salaam pahuNche,

ek muskurahat si aa gayi laboN pe aapki kaavish padh kar, mere khayaal se ise khumaar-e-ishq ke bajaaye hazl men daalna behtar hoga... Mohabbat se jyada to shararat ki boo aa rahi hai is kalaam se... Usual Smile Chupke se khaa gayi main unka paan dikhiye... sahi hai, alag hai aur original hai, yahi khaas baat hai kalaam me.. aage bhi yuNhi likhte rahiye... aur hum mukhatib hote raheNge...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2013, 04:30:10 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye..
WAAAH WAAH WAAH Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye.
BOHUT KHOOB Laughing hard Laughing hard
Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.
SHANDAAR Applause Applause Applause
yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.
LAJWAAB Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!
ZABARDAST Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
WAAH WAAH SIDRA SAHIBA BOHUT HI UMDA KALAAM
PESH KIYA HAI AAPNE ,,, LAJAWAAAB
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2013, 04:35:36 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2013, 05:21:32 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on October 09, 2013, 04:21:03 PM
Mohtarma tak Taish ka salaam pahuNche,

ek muskurahat si aa gayi laboN pe aapki kaavish padh kar, mere khayaal se ise khumaar-e-ishq ke bajaaye hazl men daalna behtar hoga... Mohabbat se jyada to shararat ki boo aa rahi hai is kalaam se... Usual Smile Chupke se khaa gayi main unka paan dikhiye... sahi hai, alag hai aur original hai, yahi khaas baat hai kalaam me.. aage bhi yuNhi likhte rahiye... aur hum mukhatib hote raheNge...!! Usual Smile

aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa taish ji... mujhe bahot khushi hui ye jaankar ke aapko ye accha laga.

ar rhi baat sharaarat ki to binaa sharaarat ke muhabbat muqammal kahaan. padhte rahiyega hame.. thanks
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2013, 05:22:43 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on October 09, 2013, 04:30:10 PM
WAAH WAAH SIDRA SAHIBA BOHUT HI UMDA KALAAM
PESH KIYA HAI AAPNE ,,, LAJAWAAAB
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thank you very very much sahel jee. padhte rahiyegaa...

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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2013, 05:26:49 PM »
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bahut pur lutf kalaam hai . Sidra saheba bahut mubarakbad . Likhti rahye.
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2013, 05:46:18 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye..

Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye.

Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.

yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.

Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!

Bahut Umda.!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2013, 06:14:43 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2013, 06:26:01 PM »
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Quote from: vb on October 09, 2013, 04:35:36 PM
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2013, 06:55:49 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye..

Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye.

Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.

yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.

Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!




ha ha ha nice,ma'am this poem shold be either in misallaneous shayri or mazahiya shayari
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2013, 07:18:03 PM »
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bahot khoooob aapke Rau ki bismillah karen khaas kar is sher ke liye...
Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.
Rau pesh'e'khidmat hai...

yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.

Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 09, 2013, 05:26:49 PM
bahut pur lutf kalaam hai . Sidra saheba bahut mubarakbad . Likhti rahye.

Mashkoor hui main, aapki inaayaton se Siddiqui saahab. Hausla afzaai ke liye aage bhi muntazir rahungee. shukriya
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 09, 2013, 05:46:18 PM
Bahut Umda.!!

ji bahot shukriyaa aapka....
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 09, 2013, 06:14:43 PM
waah waah bahut khoob

aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa Saini saahab. aage bhi aapka intzaar rahegaa
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