Aafat me aa gayee hai

by sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 09, 2013, 09:59:32 PM »
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«Reply #16 on: October 09, 2013, 10:18:42 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on October 09, 2013, 06:55:49 PM


ha ha ha nice,ma'am this poem shold be either in misallaneous shayri or mazahiya shayari

Ab jiskaa dil kare wo paa le roshni,
Humne to dil jalaa ke sare raah rakh diyaa.....
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«Reply #17 on: October 09, 2013, 10:26:21 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye..

Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye.

Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.

yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.

Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!


naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #18 on: October 09, 2013, 10:37:20 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on October 09, 2013, 07:18:03 PM
bahot khoooob aapke Rau ki bismillah karen khaas kar is sher ke liye...
Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.
Rau pesh'e'khidmat hai...

yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.

Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!
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Awwal to aapki behad shukrguzaar hoon jo aap bazm me tashreef laaye.... dusri baat ye ke muaafi chahungii mujhe rau ka maayni nahi maloom.. kya aap mehrbaani karke mujhe bataaenge iskaa kiyaa maaini hai..
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«Reply #19 on: October 09, 2013, 11:20:28 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye..

Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye.

Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.

yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.

Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!




Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye.. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #20 on: October 10, 2013, 12:41:57 AM »
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Shayad aapki taaref karna diya ko roushni dikhana hai
har sher apni kahani khud kah raha hai..
khayal o ehsaas ke kya kahne.
maza aa gaya..
likhte rahiye
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«Reply #21 on: October 10, 2013, 01:24:02 AM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 08:26:50 PM
ji bahot shukriyaa aapka....
Your Welcome,Ma"am.!!
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«Reply #22 on: October 10, 2013, 02:48:37 AM »
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kya baat hai sidra jee..

MAza aa gaya padh ke..

dhero daad..happy9

Likhte rahiye, dikhte rahiye, aate rahiye..happy9
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«Reply #23 on: October 10, 2013, 03:28:24 AM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on October 09, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye..
OMG Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardkya tumhaare kaan bahut bade hain.
Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye.
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard bahut shaitan lagti ho
Duniyaa badal rahi to ye bhi marhale hue,
haivaan se hone lagey insaan dekhiye.
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yoon to tumhe bichRe hue beeta hai zamaana,
Ab tak machal rahe mere Armaan dekhiye.
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Hum chal paDe haiN ishq ki raahoN me dostoN,
Ab kyaa khabar kathin hai ke Aasaan dekhiye..!!
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bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #24 on: October 10, 2013, 05:29:15 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 09, 2013, 09:59:32 PM
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behad shukriyaa aapka hriday ji..... padhte rahiyega.
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«Reply #25 on: October 10, 2013, 05:30:10 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on October 09, 2013, 10:26:21 PM

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice

thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks so much Khamosh aawaz.

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«Reply #26 on: October 10, 2013, 05:31:14 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on October 09, 2013, 11:20:28 PM


Aafat me aa gayee hai meri jaan dekhiye,
Mehboob ne pakDe hue haiN kaan dekhiye.. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Ammaa jo gayeeN ghar ke dareeche se nikal ke,
chupke se khaa gayee main unka Paan dekhiye. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

hans lo beta hans lo... jee bhar ke hans lo, par thokra bhar ke thanks bhi rakh lo..... :p lol
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«Reply #27 on: October 10, 2013, 05:36:50 PM »
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waah bhaut khoob daad hi daad..
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«Reply #28 on: October 10, 2013, 06:17:45 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 10, 2013, 12:41:57 AM
Shayad aapki taaref karna diya ko roushni dikhana hai
har sher apni kahani khud kah raha hai..
khayal o ehsaas ke kya kahne.
maza aa gaya..
likhte rahiye



na jaane kyon mujhe aisaa lag rahahai ke mere paas alfaaz nahi baaki aapki shukrguzaari ke liye... yaqeen maniye jis qadar aapne khaak lafzon ki tareef ki hai wo bila subha is laayaq nahi they.. main behad khush hoon ke aap jaise readers hain mere.. aage bhi aapka intzaar karungee. aate rahiyega pleezzzz

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«Reply #29 on: October 10, 2013, 06:19:45 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on October 10, 2013, 02:48:37 AM
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kya baat hai sidra jee..

MAza aa gaya padh ke..

dhero daad..happy9

Likhte rahiye, dikhte rahiye, aate rahiye..happy9


shukriyaa shukriyaa shukriyaaa... aap bhi aate rahiyega....

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