Aag lagaa do..................

by Amit Janglan on December 11, 2004, 04:36:38 AM
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Surme ka til lagake rukkhe lajawab pe
Aur nokhte bad rahe ho tum khuda ki kitaab main .

Vo mu chupayae baithen hain jalta hai mera dil
Aai hawa aag lagade us nakab main .
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2004, 02:04:16 PM »
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very nice amit bhai............. Usual Smile
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ishika gautam
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2004, 04:39:21 PM »
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raat bhar ek shama jalti hai is nakab main
yun nakab main agg lagane ki koshish na kar ,
tu ek barbad hua hai mere surmain ke ek till se
mhefile  main baki log jalkar khak ho jayenge
manjoor hai agar tujhe itne logo ka katal
to jala de is nakab ko
hum bhi, tere katal main rusawa ho jayenge
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lovebites
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2004, 04:59:57 PM »
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Nice work Ishika and Amit.............!
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ishika gautam
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2004, 05:18:03 PM »
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thanx love byte
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lovebites
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2004, 06:14:33 PM »
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Quote from: "ishika gautam"
thanx love byte


ur welcome...................!
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ishika gautam
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2004, 08:32:09 AM »
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oh really sagar
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2004, 02:45:14 PM »
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Quote from: "ishika gautam"
raat bhar ek shama jalti hai is nakab main
yun nakab main agg lagane ki koshish na kar ,
tu ek barbad hua hai mere surmain ke ek till se
mhefile  main baki log jalkar khak ho jayenge
manjoor hai agar tujhe itne logo ka katal
to jala de is nakab ko
hum bhi, tere katal main rusawa ho jayenge


wowwowowow  ishika..........excellent..........nice wordings......
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