aag paanii me.n lagaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

by divyam on February 21, 2009, 12:43:09 PM
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dosto,

aik Ghazal pesh hai .. jo ki yahaa.n meri pahli Ghazal hai..

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khol kar dil ko dikhaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
gile-shikawe bhii miTaa le.nge tum aao to sahii

ham amaavas me.n bhii duniyaa ko dikhaa de.n ge chaa.nd
chhat pe ham, tum ko sajaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

ham ne waadaa yeh kiyaa kuchh na chhupaaye.nge kabhii
tum ko aaiinaa banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii

dil to kyaa cheez hai yeh jaan bhee haazir hai sanam
apnee hastii bhii miTaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

haath maa.ngaa hai to ham thaam ke bhee rakkhe.nge
ham-safar tum ko banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii

maa.ngate kyu.n ho charaagar se Gham-e-dil ki davaa
hum tumhe.n Gham ki dawaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

*chaaragar: physician

be-asar apnii-muhabbat ko na samjho, :Ghaafil:!
aag paanii me.n lagaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

-Mayank
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2009, 01:00:50 PM »
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Nice one Divyam Ji
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javedarshad
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2009, 01:07:41 PM »
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bahut khoob


dad hazir hai



javed
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2009, 03:03:32 PM »
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Quote from: divyam on February 21, 2009, 12:43:09 PM
dosto,

aik Ghazal pesh hai .. jo ki yahaa.n meri pahli Ghazal hai..

**************************************

khol kar dil ko dikhaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
gile-shikawe bhii miTaa le.nge tum aao to sahii

ham amaavas me.n bhii duniyaa ko dikhaa de.n ge chaa.nd
chhat pe ham, tum ko sajaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

ham ne waadaa yeh kiyaa kuchh na chhupaaye.nge kabhii
tum ko aaiinaa banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii

dil to kyaa cheez hai yeh jaan bhee haazir hai sanam
apnee hastii bhii miTaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

haath maa.ngaa hai to ham thaam ke bhee rakkhe.nge
ham-safar tum ko banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii

maa.ngate kyu.n ho charaagar se Gham-e-dil ki davaa
hum tumhe.n Gham ki dawaa de.nge tum aao to sahii

*chaaragar: physician

be-asar apnii-muhabbat ko na samjho, :Ghaafil:!
aag paanii me.n lagaa de.nge tum aao to sahii


It's lovely! Jab aagaaz kee yah parwaaz hai, to janaab kisee din chaand-taaroun tak jaa pahuncheyngey! You're welcome! My best wishes are with you!
           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2009, 05:45:05 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 21, 2009, 12:56:02 PM
waah waah Divyam ji...behad acha likha hai.. Applause Applause





shukriyaa saahab,

ummeed hai aage bhi paDhte rahe.nge.....
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2009, 05:45:36 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 21, 2009, 01:00:50 PM
Nice one Divyam Ji
shukriya rajesh jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2009, 05:46:44 PM »
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javed sahaab,

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Quote from: javedarshad on February 21, 2009, 01:07:41 PM
bahut khoob


dad hazir hai



javed

Javed ssaahab,

aadaab,

Ghazal pasand farmaane ke liye shukriya.. ummeed hai aap aage bhi waqt nikaalte rahe.nge aur hame paDhte rahe.nge
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2009, 05:50:59 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 21, 2009, 03:03:32 PM
It's lovely! Jab aagaaz kee yah parwaaz hai, to janaab kisee din chaand-taaroun tak jaa pahuncheyngey! You're welcome! My best wishes are with you!
           - abd bundeli

Abd bundeli saahab,

namsate:

saahab Ghazal ki pasandeegi ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah!  aap ka comment dekha to socha ki, jin hone itni hausila afzaa'ii ki hai, un ka profile dekha jaaye aur unhe ke kuchh Ghazal paDhe jaaye.n.. aur saahab paDhana kyaa thee deede phailte chale gaye, aap to ek behatariin shaayar hai.n, behad behad khushi huii, aap ki Ghazale.n paDh kar, aur aap ne hamaari is koshish ko sarahaa sirf aap ki husn-e-nazar hai, verna ham aap ke khaak-e-paa bhi nahii.n..

ummed hai aap se aage sekhane ka mauqa bhi milega..

tah-e-dil se shukriyah!
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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2009, 05:35:06 AM »
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Dear Celmira ,

aap ka PM dekha, par 30 post restriction ke liye, mai.n aap ke PM ka reply nahii.n kar sakta...   sry........ icon_silent
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2009, 05:44:10 AM »
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Abd bundeli saahab,
namsate:
saahab Ghazal ki pasandeegi ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah!  aap ka comment dekha to socha ki, jin hone itni hausila afzaa'ii ki hai, un ka profile dekha jaaye aur unhe ke kuchh Ghazal paDhe jaaye.n.. aur saahab paDhana kyaa thee deede phailte chale gaye, aap to ek behatariin shaayar hai.n, behad behad khushi huii, aap ki Ghazale.n paDh kar, aur aap ne hamaari is koshish ko sarahaa sirf aap ki husn-e-nazar hai, verna ham aap ke khaak-e-paa bhi nahii.n..
ummed hai aap se aage sekhane ka mauqa bhi milega..
tah-e-dil se shukriyah!
Divyam ji!
Aapki sundar shabdaawalee key liye haardik dhanyawaad!
Aap kaa sadaa swaagat hai!
May HE guide you to all achievable heights!
Namaskaar!
R.P.GARG 'abd bundeli'
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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2009, 06:10:15 AM »
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Lajawab...  Applause
Bahut umda likha hai aapne Divyam ji.
Welcome to YOindia and Enjoy your stay
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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2009, 06:16:48 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 22, 2009, 06:10:15 AM
Lajawab...  Applause
Bahut umda likha hai aapne Divyam ji.
Welcome to YOindia and Enjoy your stay

thanks roja,

aap ne pasand kiya, jaan kar khushii hiii...  lekin kyaa aap
'Roja Mallar' hai.n?
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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2009, 06:31:23 AM »
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Quote from: divyam on February 22, 2009, 06:16:48 AM
thanks roja,

aap ne pasand kiya, jaan kar khushii hiii...  lekin kyaa aap
'Roja Mallar' hai.n?

haan
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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2009, 11:52:55 AM »
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Dear Celmira ,

aap ka PM dekha, par 30 post restriction ke liye, mai.n aap ke PM ka reply nahii.n kar sakta...   sry........ icon_silent


Divyam Ji,

Mujhe apni baat ka jawab aapki posts main mil gaya hai........Aap yunhi iss mehfil ki raunaq badhate rahen, likhte rahen..

Shukriya,

Celmira
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«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2009, 12:02:22 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 22, 2009, 11:52:55 AM
Divyam Ji,

Mujhe apni baat ka jawab aapki posts main mil gaya hai........Aap yunhi iss mehfil ki raunaq badhate rahen, likhte rahen..

Shukriya,

Celmira

celmira jee,

hello,

zara hame bhi to samjhaa deejiye, ki aap ko kaise jawaab mil gaya aap ki baat ka Shocked Even More jab ki ham ne to kuch bataaya hii nahii.n.. abhi ham forum par dubaara aaye socha ki aap ko kah de.n ki 'aap be-fikr rahe.n ham dost hi hai.n' par dekha ki aap ka jawaab pahle se aaya huaa hai:)

chaliye filhaal aap ke PM ke liye bhi shukriya, 30 post ke baad aap ko jawaab zaruur de.nge.. Usual Smile
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