aag:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

chitralsony

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aag mairay seenay may eshq nay jo lagayi thi
rafta rafta os may hum khod ko hi pighla baithay

ghyron ki kiya juirat thi hum ko wo saza daitay
yay tu apnay thay jin say hum yay zakhm kha baithay

jiski piyari sorat daikh kay piyar ki abtida ki thi
os say hi faraib kha kr hum dil apna turwa baythay


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divyam

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Re: aag

«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2009, 06:49:16 AM »

Quote from: chitralsony on February 18, 2009, 05:50:05 PM

hello chitral,

nice poetry,

aag mairay seenay may eshq nay jo lagayi thi
rafta rafta os may hum khod ko hi pighla baithay

aag se pighalna?? aag se jalna sahii hota hai, aisa likha jaa sakta hai

aag mairay seenay may eshq nay jo lagayi thi
rafta rafta os may hum khod ko hi jalaa baithay

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ghyron ki kiya juirat thi hum ko wo saza daitay
yay tu apnay thay jin say hum yay zakhm kha baithay

good 1.

take care, keep writing


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javedarshad

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Re: aag

«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2009, 05:12:39 PM »

bahut khoob

doosri baat main divyam ki tayeed kerta hun

javed


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ANAAMIKA

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Re: aag

«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2009, 06:30:24 PM »

Sach kaha tumne chot hamesha apno se he milti hai...
Jin per hota hai akhand vishwaas wo he daga dete hai...

Quote from: chitralsony on February 18, 2009, 05:50:05 PM


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chitralsony

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Re: aag

«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2009, 10:21:45 PM »

thanks for comments all friends,aur aag ka kaam jalana hota yay may bi janti hun lakin may nay eshq ki aag kay mutaliq likha hay jo bharkti aag nahi hoti yay tu wo aag hay jo rafta rafta insaan ko khatum kr daiti hay ,aur pigla ka lafz may nay is maqsad kay liyay istimaal kiya hay,baqi app loagon ka atiraaz sr ankhon pr


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javedarshad

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Re: aag

«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2009, 10:35:53 PM »

YEH AITRAAZ NAHIN HAI , JISM PIGHALTA NAHIN HAI , SHAMA PIGHALTI HAI

JISM GALTA HAI YA PHIR JALTA HAI , AB YEH AAP PER HAI CHAHE JALAIN YA PIGHLAIN

BAHUT KHOOB KAHA HAI AAP NE
SHUKRIA

JAVED


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chitralsony

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Re: aag

«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2009, 03:13:51 AM »

wo mom si lerki tu safr ki
aag may pigal kay mr gayi
yay jo ashkara wajood hay maira
ismay burf ki guriya hi bach gayi


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javedarshad

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Re: aag

«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2009, 07:43:42 AM »

aap sahi hain ista'araat aur tashbeehat alg cheez hain ,is ke sath sath mazmoon kia hai , ager main in cheezon ke bare mein likhne baithon ga to aik saal chahiye aur phir us meyaar ke knowledge ke kafi mehnat derkaar hooti hai. bas itna kafi hai aap sahi hain yahan zid bahas nahin hai , sirf unwan aur mazmoon ke taqaze ki baat hai


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chitralsony

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Re: aag

«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2009, 10:00:50 AM »

javed sahib muafi chahti hun ,app asko zid samaj baythay jub kay may nay just ek sher likha hay ,jo ghayel ji kay ek comment kay jawab may zehen may aya tha and itifaq say yahan is topic say bi mutabiqat rakhti thi so likh liya.


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Talat

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Re: aag

«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2009, 10:06:30 AM »

Quote from: chitralsony on February 18, 2009, 05:50:05 PM

Bohot Khoob..bohot achcha likha hai aapne Chitral Applause

Mera khyaal hai, Chitral Ji ne aag se pighalna isliye kaha hai kai baar hum kehte hain ki humara dil mom sa hai...ya kisi ka wujood mom sa hai jo zara si aanch main pighal jaata hai...jaise ki Ishq ki dheemi aag main.....Baaqi na main koi shayari ki jaankar hoon na urdu zubaan ki..... Usual Smile


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ANAAM

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Re: aag

«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2009, 12:04:53 PM »

CHITRALSONYJI AAP KI AAG KA KAMAAL
ACHHE ACHHE JHULAS RAHE IS GARMI ME

SONI TOU SONE KO PIGHLA KAR ZEWAR BANATE
SAJAANE KO GALA UNKA TAPA TAPA KUNDAN BANATE
AAG SE KHELNE WALE SONYJI ISHQ KI AAG ME KHUD PIGHAL BAITHE
PYAR JO JEEVAN KA ZEWAR HAI YU HE TURWA BAITHE

Quote from: chitralsony on February 18, 2009, 05:50:05 PM


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