*****Aahista *****

by honeyrose on August 24, 2008, 03:47:34 PM
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Aahista  hum aapse milne lage
Hum aapki ore keeche chale aaye
 
Humen aise muhabbat hone lagi
Jeevan mein rang bharne lagi
 
Hum aapke kareeb hone lage
Aapke naam se naam milane lage
 
Dil mein meeti yaadein rahe gaye
Mathay par bindiya chamak ne lage
 
Aapse duriyaan mehsus hone lagi
Aarzoo-e-dil mujhe hone lagi
 
Dekha na karo humen chupke se
Hogaye hain hum aapke kasam se
 
Ghoomti hai nazar aapko dekhte rahe
Ashq ki ravaanii mein kajol mithe gaye
 
Aahista se kuch kahete kahete
Phoolon se ghar hum sajate rahete
 
Patharon ke beech hum soye rahete
Dil mein hum aapna ghar basate


*^^honeyrose^^*
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2008, 04:02:33 PM »
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Kya baat he? aaj kal to barish ho rahi he ash'aar ki, honeyrose ji isi tarah likhte rahiye, khumar-e-ishq mein aap chhane lage.
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2008, 06:06:06 PM »
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Kya baat he? aaj kal to barish ho rahi he ash'aar ki, honeyrose ji isi tarah likhte rahiye, khumar-e-ishq mein aap chhane lage.
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Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Sayyid ji joh aapne mujhe hosla diya..aur shayari ko
pasand kiya..thanks so much... happy9
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2008, 06:20:16 AM »
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GOOD WORK HONEY DI,
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2008, 08:18:56 AM »
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Subhan Allah,.
Great Posting Sis,.
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2008, 08:42:02 AM »
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Shukriya Shally sis

Thanks Azeem bhai jaan...
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2008, 04:57:31 PM »
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Kya badhiya aur umda ashaar se aap ne likha hai, bilkul sahih kaha. Well done Honeyrose Jee. -
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2008, 05:02:08 PM »
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Kya badhiya aur umda ashaar se aap ne likha hai, bilkul sahih kaha. Well done Honeyrose Jee. -

Shukriya Syed aapka joh aapne humen hosla diya aur meri shayari ko pasand ki
thanks so much.... notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2008, 10:20:38 AM »
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Aahista  hum aapse milne lage
Hum aapki ore keeche chale aaye
 
Humen aise muhabbat hone lagi
Jeevan mein rang bharne lagi
 
Hum aapke kareeb hone lage
Aapke naam se naam milane lage
 
Dil mein meeti yaadein rahe gaye
Mathay par bindiya chamak ne lage
 
Aapse duriyaan mehsus hone lagi
Aarzoo-e-dil mujhe hone lagi
 
Dekha na karo humen chupke se
Hogaye hain hum aapke kasam se
 
Ghoomti hai nazar aapko dekhte rahe
Ashq ki ravaanii mein kajol mithe gaye
 
Aahista se kuch kahete kahete
Phoolon se ghar hum sajate rahete
 
Patharon ke beech hum soye rahete
Dil mein hum aapna ghar basate


*^^honeyrose^^*

Chaliye Honey Der se aaya Meri aadat jo hai waise

Waah..aajkal To aap Kamaal Ke Kalaam Likh Rahe Ho
Waah..Andaaz To Dekhiye Khumar-e-Ishq waala...!

Aub Lafzo’n Ko Koi Kya dekhe…
Ek Hi Saans Me Nazm Ko Jo Padh Liye…
Aub Dil Hi Dil Me Yoonh Kehne Lage…
Badhiya Hai Honey K Ishq K Taraane……..!!!

                || Raza ||

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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2008, 10:33:17 AM »
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Chaliye Honey Der se aaya Meri aadat jo hai waise

Waah..aajkal To aap Kamaal Ke Kalaam Likh Rahe Ho
Waah..Andaaz To Dekhiye Khumar-e-Ishq waala...!

Aub Lafzo’n Ko Koi Kya dekhe…
Ek Hi Saans Me Nazm Ko Jo Padh Liye…
Aub Dil Hi Dil Me Yoonh Kehne Lage…
Badhiya Hai Honey K Ishq K Taraane……..!!!

                || Raza ||



Shukriya Raza ji joh aap aaye aur kavita ko pasand kiya aap
der se aaye koi baat nahi ji bus aapne hosla diya mujhe ye
bohat pasand hai humen..thanks so much... happy9
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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2008, 11:38:34 AM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai jaya di aapne
koshish ki hai kuch likhne ki maine bhi
shayad aapko pasand aa jaaye... Applause Applause

Aahista se yeh kya keh diya tumne
ki sab kuch naya sa lagne laga
kuch khone laga to bahut kuch milne laga
mohabbat jo ho gayi tumse
ab shikayat na hogi kabhi tumse
haan hum ho gaye hain aapke kasam ki kasam se...
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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2008, 02:25:29 PM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai jaya di aapne
koshish ki hai kuch likhne ki maine bhi
shayad aapko pasand aa jaaye... Applause Applause

Aahista se yeh kya keh diya tumne
ki sab kuch naya sa lagne laga
kuch khone laga to bahut kuch milne laga
mohabbat jo ho gayi tumse
ab shikayat na hogi kabhi tumse
haan hum ho gaye hain aapke kasam ki kasam se...
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Thanks diya dear...
Buhat khoob likha hai diya dear Applause


 
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2008, 02:48:20 PM »
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Aahista  hum aapse milne lage
Hum aapki ore keeche chale aaye
 
Humen aise muhabbat hone lagi
Jeevan mein rang bharne lagi
 
Hum aapke kareeb hone lage
Aapke naam se naam milane lage
 
Dil mein meeti yaadein rahe gaye
Mathay par bindiya chamak ne lage
 
Aapse duriyaan mehsus hone lagi
Aarzoo-e-dil mujhe hone lagi
 
Dekha na karo humen chupke se
Hogaye hain hum aapke kasam se
 
Ghoomti hai nazar aapko dekhte rahe
Ashq ki ravaanii mein kajol mithe gaye
 
Aahista se kuch kahete kahete
Phoolon se ghar hum sajate rahete
 
Patharon ke beech hum soye rahete
Dil mein hum aapna ghar basate


*^^honeyrose^^*

wah ji wah kya baat hai saalisahiba mujhe maloom nahi tha mere liye itna achcha likh dengi aap  tongue3 tongue3
waise jiske liye bhi likha hai bahoot achcha likha hai...... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2008, 02:54:45 PM »
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wah ji wah kya baat hai saalisahiba mujhe maloom nahi tha mere liye itna achcha likh dengi aap  tongue3 tongue3
waise jiske liye bhi likha hai bahoot achcha likha hai...... Clapping Smiley



Shukriya jiju aapko pasand aaya ...thanks so much happy9
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2008, 10:09:50 AM »
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Nice One Again Honey Sis,.
Diya Sis,.
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