~:: Aaj apne jishk ko benakab ho jaane Do ::~

by nirbhay on May 09, 2006, 11:43:26 AM
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Dedicated to Roshni..

Chipa rakha tha anchal mein Isq ko
Aaj aapne Jishk ko benakaab ho jaane do

Rang roop mein kya rakha hai Jaana
Dil se dil ke bich baatein ho jaane do

Apne bich mai saare faaslon ko mita dunga
Haan humko muhabaat hai sabko bata dunga
Bass tum aaur mujhe shack na karna
Sitam zamana lakh karey to kartey jaane do

Chipaa rakhey they armaan tumne bhi dil mein
Apne dil ko abb bekhauf nirbhay ho jaane do

Door to mai tumhare ehsaas se nahi hona chahta
Parr dil hai ki tumhara khwaab hai dekhna chahta
Shab to dhalne mein abhie WaQt baaQi hai bahut
Parr Roshni bharaa khwaab dekhna hai mujhe, bass isliye soo jaane do!


~! Neer !~
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2006, 11:49:21 AM »
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fantastic neer ji.........
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2006, 12:48:10 PM »
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bahut khoob majid..

Milti hain raahein manzil kismat se kisi ko,
Tadpta kaun nahi hai apne dilbar ko paane ko,
Aanson bahayein hain laakhon humne ek apne mehboob ko paane ko,
Ab to rooh-e-asar yeh kehta hai abhi sau janam hai nibhane ko...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2006, 12:58:47 PM »
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wah bahut khoob majid...
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2006, 01:10:16 PM »
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NIRBHAY bhai bahut khubsoorat likha hai aapne... nice one
and good one GESU aur MAJID BHAI..........
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2006, 01:38:07 PM »
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neer ji kya baat  hai .........bahut sundar likha hai aapne ........great......
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2006, 02:28:53 PM »
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good one Neer..
Gesu & Majid excellent work.. very touching!!


zakhm ashQon ki shakal behgaye acha hua..
Dard mere labon tak na aaya acha hua..
karke waada tod dete.. mujhe judaaii ka ghum bhi hota..
bewafa duniya mera koi apnaa nahi acha hua..
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2006, 02:36:04 PM »
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intezar kya hota hai ye mujhe tune bataya
karke mera intezar pyaar kerna mujhko sikhya

bekherb tujh se the haiera zindagi ke raaste
paas aake meri aarzo ko ek nayi manzil tak poonchaya

door jate rahe besabab tujh se hum
ek tere intezaar ne paas humme tere hai laya

sochte hum tu the hai azaab ye mohaabt
iski her uljhano ko pyaar se tune hatya

dil to hairaan tha tujh se anjaan tha
tere isi intezaar ne do dilo ko hai milaya


~rosh~
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2006, 02:54:27 PM »
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:oops:  :cry: Love you for this Roshni...


Arz hai...


Kehtein hain ki intezar humesha mitha hai fall laaya
aaur tumahari muhabaat ne bekhoobi humein hai ye sikhlaya

Door chal kar abb judd gayein hain hum dono ke raaste
suroor-e-khumar aaur tumse bhi bahut nahi chiip paaya

Pass aarahe they tum door jaakar bhi mujhse
tumahara raaste ne tumhein sahi manzil takk laaya

kya pataa tha kisey kehtein hain muhabaat jaana
maine to bass khud mein tumhein aaur sirf tumhein paaya hai

mai kehta tha tumse rozz jo ek martaba ek hii baat
shukra hai dair se hii sahi tumne bhi wo alfaaz dohraya!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2006, 02:59:54 PM »
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ohhhhhhhhh so sweeett!!!
iska jawab jald baazi main nahi aram se doongi !!! hope u dont mind!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2006, 03:05:11 PM »
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ohhhhhhhhh so sweeett!!!
iska jawab jald baazi main nahi aram se doongi !!! hope you dont mind!!!



kuch kehne kii zarurat hai kya ? Tum yahan aagayi bass aaur kya chahiye..

Good ones Majid bhai, gesu Jee & mehak..
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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2006, 03:19:31 PM »
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Quote from: "nirbhay"
Dedicated to Roshni..

Chipa rakha tha anchal mein Isq ko
Aaj aapne Jishk ko benakaab ho jaane do

Rang roop mein kya rakha hai Jaana
Dil se dil ke bich baatein ho jaane do

Apne bich mai saare faaslon ko mita dunga
Haan humko muhabaat hai sabko bata dunga
Bass tum aaur mujhe shack na karna
Sitam zamana lakh karey to kartey jaane do

Chipaa rakhey they armaan tumne bhi dil mein
Apne dil ko abb bekhauf nirbhay ho jaane do

Door to mai tumhare ehsaas se nahi hona chahta
Parr dil hai ki tumhara khwaab hai dekhna chahta
Shab to dhalne mein abhie WaQt baaQi hai bahut
Parr Roshni bharaa khwaab dekhna hai mujhe, bass isliye soo jaane do!


~! Neer !~


Quote from: "roshni246"
intezar kya hota hai ye mujhe tune bataya
karke mera intezar pyaar kerna mujhko sikhya

bekherb tujh se the haiera zindagi ke raaste
paas aake meri aarzo ko ek nayi manzil tak poonchaya

door jate rahe besabab tujh se hum
ek tere intezaar ne paas humme tere hai laya

sochte hum tu the hai azaab ye mohaabt
iski her uljhano ko pyaar se tune hatya

dil to hairaan tha tujh se anjaan tha
tere isi intezaar ne do dilo ko hai milaya
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~rosh~

 
 
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 Love you for this Roshni...


Arz hai...


Kehtein hain ki intezar humesha mitha hai fall laaya
aaur tumahari muhabaat ne bekhoobi humein hai ye sikhlaya

Door chal kar abb judd gayein hain hum dono ke raaste
suroor-e-khumar aaur tumse bhi bahut nahi chiip paaya

Pass aarahe they tum door jaakar bhi mujhse
tumahara raaste ne tumhein sahi manzil takk laaya

kya pataa tha kisey kehtein hain muhabaat jaana
maine to bass khud mein tumhein aaur sirf tumhein paaya hai

mai kehta tha tumse rozz jo ek martaba ek hii baat
shukra hai dair se hii sahi tumne bhi wo alfaaz dohraya!!!
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Neer :heart: Roshu

Meri taraf se tum dono ko bahut bahut haardik badhai ! :rock:

Yeh tum dono ne apne pyar ka bahut achcha izhaar kiya hai =D>

Rajbir
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2006, 04:20:59 PM »
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Quote from: "Rajbir"
Quote from: "nirbhay"
Dedicated to Roshni..

Chipa rakha tha anchal mein Isq ko
Aaj aapne Jishk ko benakaab ho jaane do

Rang roop mein kya rakha hai Jaana
Dil se dil ke bich baatein ho jaane do

Apne bich mai saare faaslon ko mita dunga
Haan humko muhabaat hai sabko bata dunga
Bass tum aaur mujhe shack na karna
Sitam zamana lakh karey to kartey jaane do

Chipaa rakhey they armaan tumne bhi dil mein
Apne dil ko abb bekhauf nirbhay ho jaane do

Door to mai tumhare ehsaas se nahi hona chahta
Parr dil hai ki tumhara khwaab hai dekhna chahta
Shab to dhalne mein abhie WaQt baaQi hai bahut
Parr Roshni bharaa khwaab dekhna hai mujhe, bass isliye soo jaane do!


~! Neer !~


Quote from: "roshni246"
intezar kya hota hai ye mujhe tune bataya
karke mera intezar pyaar kerna mujhko sikhya

bekherb tujh se the haiera zindagi ke raaste
paas aake meri aarzo ko ek nayi manzil tak poonchaya

door jate rahe besabab tujh se hum
ek tere intezaar ne paas humme tere hai laya

sochte hum tu the hai azaab ye mohaabt
iski her uljhano ko pyaar se tune hatya

dil to hairaan tha tujh se anjaan tha
tere isi intezaar ne do dilo ko hai milaya
[/b]

~rosh~

 
 
Quote from: "nirbhay"

 Love you for this Roshni...


Arz hai...


Kehtein hain ki intezar humesha mitha hai fall laaya
aaur tumahari muhabaat ne bekhoobi humein hai ye sikhlaya

Door chal kar abb judd gayein hain hum dono ke raaste
suroor-e-khumar aaur tumse bhi bahut nahi chiip paaya

Pass aarahe they tum door jaakar bhi mujhse
tumahara raaste ne tumhein sahi manzil takk laaya

kya pataa tha kisey kehtein hain muhabaat jaana
maine to bass khud mein tumhein aaur sirf tumhein paaya hai

mai kehta tha tumse rozz jo ek martaba ek hii baat
shukra hai dair se hii sahi tumne bhi wo alfaaz dohraya!!!
[/color]


Neer :heart: Roshu

Meri taraf se tum dono ko bahut bahut haardik badhai ! :rock:

Yeh tum dono ne apne pyar ka bahut achcha izhaar kiya hai =D>

Rajbir


 Puzzled !  Puzzled ! thhxxx
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2006, 02:12:41 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob Neer and Roshini!!!!

Congratulations !!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 10, 2006, 06:30:06 AM »
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Neer Bahi and Roshni Ji.

bahut hi accha likha laga kaleja cheer kar rakh diya.....

nice and good.

congrats!!!!!!!!!!
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