Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

by Deepati on December 02, 2008, 05:21:49 AM
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Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya,
rishta-e-intezaar toot gaya.

yoon woh thukra ke chal diye goya,
ik khillona tha pyaar toot gaya.

roye rah-rah kar hichkiyan lekar,
saaz-e-gam baar baar toot gaya.

aapki berukhi ka shikwa kya,
dil tha naapa_idaar toot gaya.

dekh li dil ne besabaati-e-gul,
phir tilism-e-bahaar toot gaya.

"Saif" kya chaar din ki ranjish se,
itani muddat ka pyaar toot gaya.


Written by "Saifuddin Saif"
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2008, 05:24:24 AM »
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nice sharing deepti
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2008, 05:32:28 AM »
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Thank you Pooja
Quote from: Pooja on December 02, 2008, 05:24:24 AM
nice sharing deepti
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2008, 05:35:44 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 02, 2008, 05:21:49 AM
Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya,
rishta-e-intezaar toot gaya.

yoon woh thukra ke chal diye goya,
ik khillona tha pyaar toot gaya.

roye rah-rah kar hichkiyan lekar,
saaz-e-gam baar baar toot gaya.

aapki berukhi ka shikwa kya,
dil tha naapa_idaar toot gaya.

dekh li dil ne besabaati-e-gul,
phir tilism-e-bahaar toot gaya.

kya chaar din ki ranjish se,
itani muddat ka pyaar toot gaya.


Written by "Saifuddin Saif"







bahut hi sundar hai yeh deepati



CHAR DINOH KA YEH MELA
NA JANEY KAISEY TOOT GAYA
MILA THA NASIBOH SEY SANAM
NA JANEY KAISEY ROOTH GAYA


BAAHAREY BHI ABB TOH AATI NAHI
RUTT BHI ABB TOH CHAATI NAHI
MILA THA NASIBOH SEY SANAM
NA JANEY KAISEY ROOTH GAYA


KHAMOSH HAI MANZAR HAR TARAF
KHUSHI BHI ABB TOH AATI NAHI
MILA THA NASIBO SEY SANAM
NA JANEY KAISEY ROOTH GAYA



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2008, 05:37:38 AM »
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Very Well Written...
Thanks for sharing with us, Deepati Ji..
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2008, 06:57:55 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 02, 2008, 05:21:49 AM
Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya,
rishta-e-intezaar toot gaya.

yoon woh thukra ke chal diye goya,
ik khillona tha pyaar, toot gaya.

roye rah-rah kar hichkiyan lekar,
saaz-e-gam baar baar toot gaya.

aapki berukhi ka shikwa kya,
dil tha naapa_idaar toot gaya.

dekh li dil ne besabaat-ae-gul,
phir tilism-e-bahaar toot gaya.

kya chaar din ki ranjish se,
itani muddat ka pyaar toot gaya.

Written by "Saifuddin Saif"

Lovely sharing deepti ji!
Aakhiree sheir ki pahlee laain shaayad kuchh yoon hogee:
'kya karoon chaar din ki ranjish se', ya 'kya huaa chaar din ki ranjish se,' deykhiyegaa!
                               - abd bundeli
 
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2008, 07:09:37 AM »
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great sharing deepati ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2008, 09:58:59 AM »
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Nice sharing Deepati Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2008, 08:09:52 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 02, 2008, 05:35:44 AM

bahut hi sundar hai yeh deepati



CHAR DINOH KA YEH MELA
NA JANEY KAISEY TOOT GAYA
MILA THA NASIBOH SEY SANAM
NA JANEY KAISEY ROOTH GAYA


BAAHAREY BHI ABB TOH AATI NAHI
RUTT BHI ABB TOH CHAATI NAHI
MILA THA NASIBOH SEY SANAM
NA JANEY KAISEY ROOTH GAYA


KHAMOSH HAI MANZAR HAR TARAF
KHUSHI BHI ABB TOH AATI NAHI
MILA THA NASIBO SEY SANAM
NA JANEY KAISEY ROOTH GAYA



JASBIR SINGH

Bahut Khoob, Jasbir Ji aur Shukriya happy9
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2008, 08:11:28 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 02, 2008, 05:37:38 AM
Very Well Written...
Thanks for sharing with us, Deepati Ji..

Thanks, Mahiya Ji
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 02, 2008, 06:57:55 AM
Lovely sharing deepti ji!
Aakhiree sheir ki pahlee laain shaayad kuchh yoon hogee:
'kya karoon chaar din ki ranjish se', ya 'kya huaa chaar din ki ranjish se,' deykhiyegaa!
                               - abd bundeli
 

Shukriya, Abd Ji
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great sharing deepati ji

Shukriya, Bekraar Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2008, 08:14:04 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 02, 2008, 09:58:59 AM
Nice sharing Deepati Ji

Thank You, Rajesh Ji
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Quote from: Deepati on December 03, 2008, 08:09:52 AM
Bahut Khoob, Jasbir Ji aur Shukriya happy9


tHANKS DEEPATI


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«Reply #14 on: December 05, 2008, 05:15:31 PM »
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good one jas
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