Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

by Deepati on December 02, 2008, 05:21:49 AM

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abdbundeli

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«Reply #30 on: December 10, 2008, 03:39:31 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 09, 2008, 06:49:37 PM

Deepati, Abd ji and Jas nice work all!!

Pooja ji! Thanks! I'm happy you liked it!
- abd bundeli


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Deepati

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #31 on: December 10, 2008, 04:53:57 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 09, 2008, 06:49:37 PM

Deepati, Abd ji and Jas nice work all!!

Thank You, Pooja Ji


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Deepati

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #32 on: December 10, 2008, 04:58:02 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 09, 2008, 12:50:56 PM

MEHFIL MEH USKA NAAM NA BADNAAM HONEY DENGEY
HUM KISI KOH BHI USKA NAKAAB NA KHOLNEY DENGEY
PYAR KIA HAI, KARTEY RAHENGEY
KYA HUYA JOH MERA NAAM WOH SAATH NA JUDNEY DENGEY

JASBIR SINGH

Wah Bahut Khoob, Jasbir Ji


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #33 on: December 10, 2008, 11:23:05 AM »

Quote from: Deepati on December 10, 2008, 04:58:02 AM

Wah Bahut Khoob, Jasbir Ji

Thanks Deepati

Jasbir Singh


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Deepati

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #34 on: December 11, 2008, 10:58:30 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 09, 2008, 12:50:56 PM

MEHFIL MEH USKA NAAM NA BADNAAM HONEY DENGEY
HUM KISI KOH BHI USKA NAKAAB NA KHOLNEY DENGEY
PYAR KIA HAI, KARTEY RAHENGEY
KYA HUYA JOH MERA NAAM WOH SAATH NA JUDNEY DENGEY

JASBIR SINGH

Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji

Jazbaat-e-ishq nakaam naa hone denge,
dil ki duniya mein kabhi shaam naa hone denge,
dosti ka har ilzaam apne sar par le lenge,
par dost ham tumhe badnaam naa hone denge.

NM


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #35 on: December 11, 2008, 11:03:40 PM »

Jazbaat-e-ishq nakaam naa hone denge,
dil ki duniya mein kabhi shaam naa hone denge,
dosti ka har ilzaam apne sar par le lenge,
par dost ham tumhe badnaam naa hone denge.

NM
Nice sharing Deepa Ji


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Deepati

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #36 on: December 11, 2008, 11:13:22 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 11, 2008, 11:03:40 PM

Jazbaat-e-ishq nakaam naa hone denge,
dil ki duniya mein kabhi shaam naa hone denge,
dosti ka har ilzaam apne sar par le lenge,
par dost ham tumhe badnaam naa hone denge.

NM
Nice sharing Deepa Ji

Thank You, Rajesh Ji aur shukriya ek aur naye naam kaa Usual Smile


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #37 on: December 11, 2008, 11:22:55 PM »

U R Welcome
Ab hum yahi naam se pukarenge
Bura to nahi lagega tumhe
Lage to batla dena
Hum apnapan wapas lelege


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Deepati

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #38 on: December 11, 2008, 11:41:22 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 11, 2008, 11:22:55 PM

U R Welcome
Ab hum yahi naam se pukarenge
Bura to nahi lagega tumhe
Lage to batla dena
Hum apnapan wapas lelege

As you wish Usual Smile


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #39 on: December 12, 2008, 12:00:57 AM »

Thank You


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #40 on: December 14, 2008, 10:33:40 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 05, 2008, 05:15:31 PM

good one jas

Thanks JI

YU DIL NA TODOH MERE DOSTOH
KUCH HOSLA RAKHO MERE DOSTOH
CHAHEY ASHQ KEY TAREY TOOT GAYE
JINDAGI SEY MOOH NA MODO, MERE DOSTOH

RAAT KEY BAAD DIN BHI AATA HAI
GUM KEY BAAD, JAAM BHI AATA HAI
DOOB NA JAO INMEH TUM MERE DOSTOH
JINDAGI SEY MOOH NA MODO, MERE DOSTOH

JASBIR SINGH


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Deepati

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #41 on: December 15, 2008, 07:30:29 AM »

Wah Jasbir Ji, Very Inspiring

Zindagi se mooh naa modenge, chalte jayenge
gam ho yaa khushi, muskuraatey jayenge

kya hua, gar gamon ne aaj hamein ghera hai
raat andheri hii sahi saamne sawera bhi tou hai

dil naa todenge, hausle buland rakhenge
ashq ke taare toot bhi gaye tou kya
kabhi bhi zindagi se mooh nahin modenge


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

«Reply #42 on: December 16, 2008, 12:21:34 PM »

Quote from: Deepati on December 15, 2008, 07:30:29 AM

WAH WAH . kya baat kahi hai Deepati

AISEY HI TUM AITBAAR RAKHNA
JINDAGI SEY MOOH NA MOADNA
SAWERA HO HI JAYEGA EK DIN
KHUDA PEH TUM BHAROSA RAKHNA

JASBIR SINGH