<>*Aaj barf sa pighal jayen hum*<>

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<>*Aaj barf sa pichal jayen hum*<>


Uffff na aise dekho hume k  sharma jayen hum
Tere seene se lag kar tujhme hi kho jaye hum
Lehron sa machal k saahil se milne aye hum
Milkar tujhe wahin khudko mita jaye hum

Na dikhao ye adaa ye naazo nakhre oo sanam
K tum bin na ik pal bhi ji payenge hum
Aajao aake thaam lo hume apni panahon me
K tumhari garmi se aaj barf sa pighal jayen hum

Nazdeekiyan badhao kuch aise k na aaye duri kabhi
Leke mujhe baahon me aaj mere hi ban jao tum
Bhar do maang aaj meri angeenat sitaron se
Aur mujhe apni hamesha k liye bana jao tum…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 08:02:16 PM »
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jab dil teri khamoshi me thahar jaata hai,
phir andhere mein bhi tu hi nazar aata hai,
kya hua in aandhiyon ko aaj khuda jaane
tu hai to ye tufaan bhi khamosh nazar aata hai,

main to humesha raha tera, juda tumse hua nahin
phir kyo ankhon me judai ka kahuf nazar aata hai,
maine tujhe apna banaakar hi rakha hai saanso me
aur aankhon ko bas tera hi chehra nazar aata hai... !



Intezar !

achhe ehsaas bayaan kiye hain aapne !

<>*Aaj barf sa pichal jayen hum*<>


Uffff na aise dekho hume k  sharma jayen hum
Tere seene se lag kar tujhme hi kho jaye hum
Lehron sa machal k saahil se milne aye hum
Milkar tujhe wahin khudko mita jaye hum

Na dikhao ye adaa ye naazo nakhre oo sanam
K tum bin na ik pal bhi ji payenge hum
Aajao aake thaam lo hume apni panahon me
K tumhari garmi se aaj barf sa pighal jayen hum

Nazdeekiyan badhao kuch aise k na aaye duri kabhi
Leke mujhe baahon me aaj mere hi ban jao tum
Bhar do maang aaj meri angeenat sitaron se
Aur mujhe apni hamesha k liye bana jao tum…!!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2010, 08:47:36 PM »
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Anamika di aur Intezar jee..
Bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob..!
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2010, 08:53:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai

Intezar !

Quote from: -Rahim- link=to pic=59212.msg1085841#msg1085841 date=1287780456
Anamika di aur Intezar jee..
Bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2010, 02:15:49 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai reeeeeeeee.. ek dum mastammmmm.... bahut din baad apne type ka kuch padhne ko mila to bahut achcha laga ... aur padhte hi humne bhi apne ishtyle me kuch likh diya... bahut bahut mast likha hai aapne...

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aajaao meri baahon me aake khud ko aaj bikhar jaane do,
chaahat me meri doobke khud ko thoda aur nikhar jaane do,

mere jism ki khushboo se khud ko aaj zaraa sa mehek jaane do,
kareeb tum mere aake khud ko aaj zaraa sa behek jaane do,

khol do tum julfon ko apne, unhe chehre pe mere faila do,
aaj tumhaare julfon me mujhko ek baar to ulajh jaane do,

honth tumhaare madira ke pyaale, aaj zaraa unhe chakh lene do,
aankh tumhaare jheel ke jaise, mujhe unme tum doob jaane do,

pyaar tumhaara ban ke main aaya, mujhko hadd se guzar jaane do,
bhool jaao duniya ko aaj tum, mujhko pyaar me tum mar jaane do,

jhoom utho yun pyaar me mere ki aaj na khud ko sambhal paane do,
aag laga dun tan man me tumhaare aur khud ko tum pighal jaane do...
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2010, 02:16:30 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne bhai...!!!

jab dil teri khamoshi me thahar jaata hai,
phir andhere mein bhi tu hi nazar aata hai,
kya hua in aandhiyon ko aaj khuda jaane
tu hai to ye tufaan bhi khamosh nazar aata hai,

main to humesha raha tera, juda tumse hua nahin
phir kyo ankhon me judai ka kahuf nazar aata hai,
maine tujhe apna banaakar hi rakha hai saanso me
aur aankhon ko bas tera hi chehra nazar aata hai... !



Intezar !

achhe ehsaas bayaan kiye hain aapne !

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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2010, 02:39:29 AM »
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KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI.......MASTAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM.......hai reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lagta hai sapne bhi sach hote hain........Raat sapne me hum barf k gole banaa k tumhaari auor fenk rahe they aur tum unse bachne ko bhaag rahi thi......no banawat ye 100% sach hai.....Hum friday afternoon ko 3.00pm ravaana hoker Saterday-Sunday ki chhuti mananey Blue Montains aaye hain.....we are six of us.....we two from dubai....2 from Thailand....2 from Newzealand.......Its one of the most beautiful place of Australia......looks as if out of heaven......Cool almost 6 deg.cen.
Mountain-tops all covered with white snow.......Jee chaha barf k gole bana k tumhaari tarf fenku......

Aur subah subah ye tumhari poem "BARF SA PIGHAL JAYEN HUM".......PADH KAR....AATM-VEEBHOR HO UTHAA......

Haath me liye barf kay gole hum ghanto khelte rahe
Barf ko hum haathon se fisalte-pighalte dekhte rahe

Tum meri baahon me ho,Har lamha yahi ahsaas hota raha
Hamaari garm saanso me tumhaara tan-badan  pighalta raha

Ruka ruka sa tha wo haseen khoobsurat pal o-jaanemaan
Hum bhool sab kho gaye they ek duje mai  o-mere sanam

Khule aasma kay tale hum do-jism ek jaan ban khade they
Sara jahaan jaise dekhne ko humein khush-ho khada thaa

Tum mujhse lipti huyee chhuyi-muuyi si naajuk lagti thee
Teri julfon kay saaye mai , mein bhee besudh ho raha tha

Bhor ki pehli kiran usha ki lalima se teri maang sajaa raha tha
Tujhe apni bahon me bhar k jeevan bhar k liye apna bana raha tha




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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2010, 09:19:09 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Anaam ji....!!!

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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2010, 09:26:47 AM »
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KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI.......MASTAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM.......hai reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lagta hai sapne bhi sach hote hain........Raat sapne me hum barf k gole banaa k tumhaari auor fenk rahe they aur tum unse bachne ko bhaag rahi thi......no banawat ye 100% sach hai.....Hum friday afternoon ko 3.00pm ravaana hoker Saterday-Sunday ki chhuti mananey Blue Montains aaye hain.....we are six of us.....we two from dubai....2 from Thailand....2 from Newzealand.......Its one of the most beautiful place of Australia......looks as if out of heaven......Cool almost 6 deg.cen.
Mountain-tops all covered with white snow.......Jee chaha barf k gole bana k tumhaari tarf fenku......

Aur subah subah ye tumhari poem "BARF SA PIGHAL JAYEN HUM".......PADH KAR....AATM-VEEBHOR HO UTHAA......

Haath me liye barf kay gole hum ghanto khelte rahe
Barf ko hum haathon se fisalte-pighalte dekhte rahe

Tum meri baahon me ho,Har lamha yahi ahsaas hota raha
Hamaari garm saanso me tumhaara tan-badan  pighalta raha

Ruka ruka sa tha wo haseen khoobsurat pal o-jaanemaan
Hum bhool sab kho gaye they ek duje mai  o-mere sanam

Khule aasma kay tale hum do-jism ek jaan ban khade they
Sara jahaan jaise dekhne ko humein khush-ho khada thaa

Tum mujhse lipti huyee chhuyi-muuyi si naajuk lagti thee
Teri julfon kay saaye mai , mein bhee besudh ho raha tha

Bhor ki pehli kiran usha ki lalima se teri maang sajaa raha tha
Tujhe apni bahon me bhar k jeevan bhar k liye apna bana raha tha






paagal anaam k pagal se sapne.....
ek to barf k maze le rahe ho uspe jalate bhi ho...bekaar insaan......
achch ahai mauka mila hai tumhe masti karne ka kar lo karlo chhotu...
par ek din badla zarur lungi main bhi...itna nahin jalaya na to dekhna....

waise ye mast wali poem kiske liye likhi hai...
 tumhari dreamgirl mil gai kya re....
mil gai to mujhe pic bhejna mat bhulna
aakhir use approve to mujhe hi karwana hai maa pa se.........tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2010, 05:25:38 AM »
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Wahaan koi permanent nahi milti.....all are free birds.....
Detail me baad me batata hu jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Barf sab peeghal gayee reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

paagal anaam k pagal se sapne.....
ek to barf k maze le rahe ho uspe jalate bhi ho...bekaar insaan......
achch ahai mauka mila hai tumhe masti karne ka kar lo karlo chhotu...
par ek din badla zarur lungi main bhi...itna nahin jalaya na to dekhna....

waise ye mast wali poem kiske liye likhi hai...
 tumhari dreamgirl mil gai kya re....
mil gai to mujhe pic bhejna mat bhulna
aakhir use approve to mujhe hi karwana hai maa pa se.........tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2010, 05:50:53 AM »
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<>*Aaj barf sa pichal jayen hum*<>


Uffff na aise dekho hume k  sharma jayen hum
Tere seene se lag kar tujhme hi kho jaye hum
Lehron sa machal k saahil se milne aye hum
Milkar tujhe wahin khudko mita jaye hum

Na dikhao ye adaa ye naazo nakhre oo sanam
K tum bin na ik pal bhi ji payenge hum
Aajao aake thaam lo hume apni panahon me
K tumhari garmi se aaj barf sa pighal jayen hum

Nazdeekiyan badhao kuch aise k na aaye duri kabhi
Leke mujhe baahon me aaj mere hi ban jao tum
Bhar do maang aaj meri angeenat sitaron se
Aur mujhe apni hamesha k liye bana jao tum…!!!

bahuit khoob likha he anu jiii...is bar sachchi bahut mast...~
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2010, 05:51:32 AM »
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jab dil teri khamoshi me thahar jaata hai,
phir andhere mein bhi tu hi nazar aata hai,
kya hua in aandhiyon ko aaj khuda jaane
tu hai to ye tufaan bhi khamosh nazar aata hai,

main to humesha raha tera, juda tumse hua nahin
phir kyo ankhon me judai ka kahuf nazar aata hai,
maine tujhe apna banaakar hi rakha hai saanso me
aur aankhon ko bas tera hi chehra nazar aata hai... !



Intezar !

achhe ehsaas bayaan kiye hain aapne !


mast intezar sahab achha reply diya apne bhi~
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2010, 05:52:23 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai reeeeeeeee.. ek dum mastammmmm.... bahut din baad apne type ka kuch padhne ko mila to bahut achcha laga ... aur padhte hi humne bhi apne ishtyle me kuch likh diya... bahut bahut mast likha hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


aajaao meri baahon me aake khud ko aaj bikhar jaane do,
chaahat me meri doobke khud ko thoda aur nikhar jaane do,

mere jism ki khushboo se khud ko aaj zaraa sa mehek jaane do,
kareeb tum mere aake khud ko aaj zaraa sa behek jaane do,

khol do tum julfon ko apne, unhe chehre pe mere faila do,
aaj tumhaare julfon me mujhko ek baar to ulajh jaane do,

honth tumhaare madira ke pyaale, aaj zaraa unhe chakh lene do,
aankh tumhaare jheel ke jaise, mujhe unme tum doob jaane do,

pyaar tumhaara ban ke main aaya, mujhko hadd se guzar jaane do,
bhool jaao duniya ko aaj tum, mujhko pyaar me tum mar jaane do,

jhoom utho yun pyaar me mere ki aaj na khud ko sambhal paane do,
aag laga dun tan man me tumhaare aur khud ko tum pighal jaane do...

kapil jiii bahut abdhya ...kya khoob likha hai wah..~
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2010, 05:53:01 AM »
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KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI.......MASTAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM.......hai reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lagta hai sapne bhi sach hote hain........Raat sapne me hum barf k gole banaa k tumhaari auor fenk rahe they aur tum unse bachne ko bhaag rahi thi......no banawat ye 100% sach hai.....Hum friday afternoon ko 3.00pm ravaana hoker Saterday-Sunday ki chhuti mananey Blue Montains aaye hain.....we are six of us.....we two from dubai....2 from Thailand....2 from Newzealand.......Its one of the most beautiful place of Australia......looks as if out of heaven......Cool almost 6 deg.cen.
Mountain-tops all covered with white snow.......Jee chaha barf k gole bana k tumhaari tarf fenku......

Aur subah subah ye tumhari poem "BARF SA PIGHAL JAYEN HUM".......PADH KAR....AATM-VEEBHOR HO UTHAA......

Haath me liye barf kay gole hum ghanto khelte rahe
Barf ko hum haathon se fisalte-pighalte dekhte rahe

Tum meri baahon me ho,Har lamha yahi ahsaas hota raha
Hamaari garm saanso me tumhaara tan-badan  pighalta raha

Ruka ruka sa tha wo haseen khoobsurat pal o-jaanemaan
Hum bhool sab kho gaye they ek duje mai  o-mere sanam

Khule aasma kay tale hum do-jism ek jaan ban khade they
Sara jahaan jaise dekhne ko humein khush-ho khada thaa

Tum mujhse lipti huyee chhuyi-muuyi si naajuk lagti thee
Teri julfon kay saaye mai , mein bhee besudh ho raha tha

Bhor ki pehli kiran usha ki lalima se teri maang sajaa raha tha
Tujhe apni bahon me bhar k jeevan bhar k liye apna bana raha tha





anaam ji achha sapna dekhte he aap...bahut badhiya...lage rahiye~
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«Reply #14 on: October 29, 2010, 08:49:30 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

kapil jiii bahut abdhya ...kya khoob likha hai wah..~
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