Aaj bhi...

by chitra on May 19, 2010, 01:27:24 PM
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Zamaane gujar gye par, teri baate yaad aati hai,
Bujhi bujhi in saanso ko, Aaj bhi sulga jaati  jati hai…..!

Waise to beqarari mein mujhe, neend nahi aati hai,
aur aati hai to Teri surat mujhme, aaj bhi samaa jati hai.

Ye hawaaye bhi hai be-sharm, jab tab chali aati hai,
meri badan ko teri khushboo se, aaj bhi mahaka jati hai…!

Khyaalo mein hi sahi meri ruh, tujhse mil to aati hai,
Aur Tere seene ki tapish mujhe ,aaj bhi jala jati hai…!
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2010, 01:40:52 PM »
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Wah wah Chitra ji kamaal ki rachna hai aapki. Very nice. Keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2010, 01:52:52 PM »
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Thankx Riyaz ji...!
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2010, 07:26:19 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Chitra ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likhi aapne,Shihab ji aapne bhi kamaal ke lines likha.great work. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2010, 08:40:25 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Chitra ji... badi hi khoobsurti se likha hai aapne... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye kavita...!!!

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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2010, 08:57:37 PM »
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qatl kar chuke jaane kinne logo ka tum
aaj bhi lakin hame tum masoom nazer aate ho
shayara ke roop me jaane kitno ko bhate ho
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2010, 09:02:47 PM »
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Quote from: chitra on May 19, 2010, 01:27:24 PM

Zamaane gujar gye par, teri baate yaad aati hai,
Bujhi bujhi in saanso ko, Aaj bhi sulga jaati  jati hai…..!

Waise to beqarari mein mujhe, neend nahi aati hai,
aur aati hai to Teri surat mujhme, aaj bhi samaa jati hai.

Ye hawaaye bhi hai be-sharm, jab tab chali aati hai,
meri badan ko teri khushboo se, aaj bhi mahaka jati hai…!

Khyaalo mein hi sahi meri ruh, tujhse mil to aati hai,
Aur Tere seene ki tapish mujhe ,aaj bhi jala jati hai…!




tere her sher me her ek ko apna sach nazer hai atta
warna koi yuhi khamkha her sher per taali nahi bajata
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2010, 09:37:54 PM »
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Haad ho gaye yeh to Manoj aap ko nahi pasand aya to its ok bt hoe can u say dis ........
kissi ki feelings ka aisa mazak shyd aap ke pass dil nahi hai ...
baki sab ne dil se feel kiya issliye traif bi kiya .......
aap ko kuch kehna ka kya fiada aap ko kuch samz nahi ana ..


GUd One Chitra dnt wory abt dis comnt .........

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tere her sher me her ek ko apna sach nazer hai atta
warna koi yuhi khamkha her sher per taali nahi bajata
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2010, 09:39:30 PM »
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I m relly shocked hoe no one react on Manoj commnt ..........
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Khyaalo mein hi sahi meri ruh, tujhse mil to aati hai,
Aur Tere seene ki tapish mujhe ,aaj bhi jala jati hai…!


lajawaab ..haqiqat se bhar poor shair likha hai aap ne..wah wah
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2010, 09:47:25 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shihab ji... kya kehne aapke...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on May 19, 2010, 06:24:41 PM

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    Nam Aankhon Mein Koi Pyaas Rehti Hai
        Zindagi Tum Bin Badi Hi Udas Rehti Hai.
 
             Har Pal Yun Chalti Hai Yaadon Ki Bandukein
                Aur Hasraten Pehne Sabar Ka Libas Rehti Hai.!




Khush Rahiye...

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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2010, 09:54:54 PM »
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tum chhuri apni zubaan pe rakh ke auron ko qaatil kehte ho,
mohabbat kya hoti hai ye pata nahi aur khud ko aashiq kehte ho,
shabdon me chhipe ehsaas ko mumkin nahi hai har koi samajh le,
qadar karte nahi auron ke dard ka aur khud ko qadardaan kehte ho...

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 19, 2010, 08:57:37 PM
qatl kar chuke jaane kinne logo ka tum
aaj bhi lakin hame tum masoom nazer aate ho
shayara ke roop me jaane kitno ko bhate ho
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Gud 1 kapil...

uske nxt post ka bi reply karo

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tum chhuri apni zubaan pe rakh ke auron ko qaatil kehte ho,
mohabbat kya hoti hai ye pata nahi aur khud ko aashiq kehte ho,
shabdon me chhipe ehsaas ko mumkin nahi hai har koi samajh le,
qadar karte nahi auron ke dard ka aur khud ko qadardaan kehte ho...
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2010, 09:59:14 PM »
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jaruri nahi ki apna dard hi dard ho auro ke dard ko bhi mehsoos karna sikho,
auron ke ghum me to ansoo baha sakte nahi par auro ki khoobi ki taarif karna sikho...

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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2010, 10:00:55 PM »
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Thanx a lot Neel ji... aapka hukum saraankhon par...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 19, 2010, 09:56:52 PM
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