Aaj bhi...

by chitra on May 19, 2010, 01:27:24 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 19, 2010, 10:01:42 PM »
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GUd !!!!!!!!!!!
Thnx atleast kissi ne to mere reaction pe reaction diya ..

Quote from: klaskar on May 19, 2010, 09:59:14 PM
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auron ke ghum me to ansoo baha sakte nahi par auro ki khoobi ki taarif karna sikho...
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«Reply #16 on: May 19, 2010, 10:10:57 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on May 19, 2010, 10:01:42 PM
GUd !!!!!!!!!!!
Thnx atleast kissi ne to mere reaction pe reaction diya ..
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«Reply #17 on: May 20, 2010, 03:00:12 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on May 19, 2010, 09:37:54 PM
Haad ho gaye yeh to Manoj aap ko nahi pasand aya to its ok bt hoe can u say dis ........
kissi ki feelings ka aisa mazak shyd aap ke pass dil nahi hai ...
baki sab ne dil se feel kiya issliye traif bi kiya .......
aap ko kuch kehna ka kya fiada aap ko kuch samz nahi ana ..


GUd One Chitra dnt wory abt dis comnt .........

meine to chittra ke gazel ki tarriff ki kari hai
ab tumhe samjh me na aaye to phir mei kya karu
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«Reply #18 on: May 20, 2010, 03:45:21 AM »
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thanks neel jee,klaskar jee, sahib jee, madhu jee, nazar jeee...!
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«Reply #19 on: May 20, 2010, 03:54:55 AM »
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Neel jee...!

Zindgee mein aisa hota rahta hai,
dard kanhaa har koi samjh paata hai.
haar jaati hai koshishe magar,
patthar bhi kabhi pighla karta hai.

again thank...apne meri bhawnaao ko bakhoobi samjha...!
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«Reply #20 on: May 20, 2010, 04:20:36 AM »
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Thanks, Shihab jee..........apake jawaab mein..

pyaasi nigaahe tere didaar ko tarsti rahai,
tere aane ki umeed mein, har aahate sunti hai.

yaado ki parchhaiya har saans ke saath chalti hai
fir jaane kyo tumhari hasrate ek parda kiye rahti


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«Reply #21 on: May 20, 2010, 08:12:51 PM »
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Thanx a lot Chitra !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U r doing relly gud work Keep doing........
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«Reply #22 on: May 21, 2010, 02:07:56 PM »
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Quote from: chitra on May 19, 2010, 01:27:24 PM

Zamaane gujar gye par, teri baate yaad aati hai,
Bujhi bujhi in saanso ko, Aaj bhi sulga jaati  jati hai…..!

Waise to beqarari mein mujhe, neend nahi aati hai,
aur aati hai to Teri surat mujhme, aaj bhi samaa jati hai.

Ye hawaaye bhi hai be-sharm, jab tab chali aati hai,
meri badan ko teri khushboo se, aaj bhi mahaka jati hai…!

Khyaalo mein hi sahi meri ruh, tujhse mil to aati hai,
Aur Tere seene ki tapish mujhe ,aaj bhi jala jati hai…!



Wah kya Baat hai Chitra Ji.. Bahut Waqt Baad aaj aapki Qalam Ko Padha.. Such Me Bahut Intzaar tha aapki ek Peshkash Ka.. Aur aaj Yeh Intzaar poora hua..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Mohabbat Aur Beqaraari se Bhari aapki Yeh Rachna Dil Ko Chhoo Gai. Bahut Hi Umda peshkash hai.. Daad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #23 on: May 21, 2010, 04:22:02 PM »
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thanks mann jeee...........!
apki daad ke bina ye koshish adhuri thi..!
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«Reply #24 on: June 01, 2010, 11:21:10 PM »
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Quote from: chitra on May 19, 2010, 01:27:24 PM

Zamaane gujar gye par, teri baate yaad aati hai,
Bujhi bujhi in saanso ko, Aaj bhi sulga jaati  jati hai…..!

Waise to beqarari mein mujhe, neend nahi aati hai,
aur aati hai to Teri surat mujhme, aaj bhi samaa jati hai.

Ye hawaaye bhi hai be-sharm, jab tab chali aati hai,
meri badan ko teri khushboo se, aaj bhi mahaka jati hai…!

Khyaalo mein hi sahi meri ruh, tujhse mil to aati hai,
Aur Tere seene ki tapish mujhe ,aaj bhi jala jati hai…!



Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai..Behad khubsoorat...Likte rahiye... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: June 02, 2010, 05:15:03 AM »
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chitraa saaHiba:

namaste!

aapka andaaz-e-bayaa.n mujhe bahot hi pasand aaya! ehsaaso.n ko ba-Khoobee aapne lafzoN meiN piroyaa haii... mere dil se daad!

yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee...! KhuSh rahe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #26 on: June 02, 2010, 05:21:14 AM »
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Quote from: chitra on May 19, 2010, 01:27:24 PM

Zamaane gujar gye par, teri baate yaad aati hai,
Bujhi bujhi in saanso ko, Aaj bhi sulga jaati  jati hai…..!

Waise to beqarari mein mujhe, neend nahi aati hai,
aur aati hai to Teri surat mujhme, aaj bhi samaa jati hai.

Ye hawaaye bhi hai be-sharm, jab tab chali aati hai,
meri badan ko teri khushboo se, aaj bhi mahaka jati hai…!

Khyaalo mein hi sahi meri ruh, tujhse mil to aati hai,
Aur Tere seene ki tapish mujhe ,aaj bhi jala jati hai…!



wah wah bahut hi khoob chitra ji

jasbir singh
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