Aaj hamein bichade ek saal ho gya...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 16, 2011, 06:08:47 PM
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Kabhi has kar kabhi ro kar waqt kat'ta gya,
aur aaj hamein juda hue ek saal ho gya,

jab pehli baar dekha tha tumhe,
tabhi mujhe zindgi se ek sawal ho gya,

jane kis neki k badle khuda ne tujhse mila diya,
terri qurbat paake tou gam ek khayal ho gya,

kash-m-kash ka silsila chalta rehta dil mein,
terri mhbt mein tanha jina jaise muhaal ho gya,

jo GEET kisi k liye apne aybo ki qurbani na de saki,
uska terre liye pal mein badal jana tou kamaal ho gya,

zindgi mein sab kuch tha bus mhbt se fakir thi,
terri mhbt se merra jahan malamaal ho gya,

ibadato mein uthaye tune jab jab apne hath,
asar mein har dafa durust merra haal ho gya,

kehkashano mein dilkash taazgi badhti rahi,
fizao mein terri chaht ka jamaal ho gya,

haan ye sach hai aaj hamein bichade ek saal ho gya,
per terri chaht se merra har lamha bemisaal ho gya.........

Jamaal-khubsurati,beauty...
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2011, 07:23:35 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 16, 2011, 06:50:48 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Shukriya shihab ji..
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2011, 03:27:28 AM »
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mast poem Brokenbylove ji…... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu naa geeno tum ye judaai k lamhe-din-mahine aur saal
Sach mai they tere saath gujaare wo haseen pal bemisaal

Par ye na thee hamaari kismat, bichhd ke ho gayaa ek saal
Phir bhi dekho aaj bhi kaayam hai apnee mohbaat ki misaal




Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 16, 2011, 06:08:47 PM



Kabhi has kar kabhi ro kar waqt kat'ta gya,
aur aaj hamein juda hue ek saal ho gya,

jab pehli baar dekha tha tumhe,
tabhi mujhe zindgi se ek sawal ho gya,

jane kis neki k badle khuda ne tujhse mila diya,
terri qurbat paake tou gam ek khayal ho gya,

kash-m-kash ka silsila chalta rehta dil mein,
terri mhbt mein tanha jina jaise muhaal ho gya,

jo GEET kisi k liye apne aybo ki qurbani na de saki,
uska terre liye pal mein badal jana tou kamaal ho gya,

zindgi mein sab kuch tha bus mhbt se fakir thi,
terri mhbt se merra jahan malamaal ho gya,

ibadato mein uthaye tune jab jab apne hath,
asar mein har dafa durust merra haal ho gya,

kehkashano mein dilkash taazgi badhti rahi,
fizao mein terri chaht ka jamaal ho gya,

haan ye sach hai aaj hamein bichade ek saal ho gya,
per terri chaht se merra har lamha bemisaal ho gya.........

Jamaal-khubsurati,beauty...
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2011, 04:36:17 AM »
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wah bahut khub... geetji...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2011, 07:43:29 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Geetji..

bahut Hi vadhiya jazbaat!!! Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2011, 08:10:56 AM »
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umda brokenbyluv ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2011, 08:47:12 AM »
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well written.......daad dilse
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2011, 04:24:19 PM »
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bht khub
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2011, 10:31:51 AM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on May 17, 2011, 03:27:28 AM
mast poem Brokenbylove ji…... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu naa geeno tum ye judaai k lamhe-din-mahine aur saal
Sach mai they tere saath gujaare wo haseen pal bemisaal

Par ye na thee hamaari kismat, bichhd ke ho gayaa ek saal
Phir bhi dekho aaj bhi kaayam hai apnee mohbaat ki misaal





Bahut khubsurat alfaz likhe hai anaam ji aur bahut shukriya merri kavita pasand karne k liye..
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2011, 10:32:18 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on May 17, 2011, 04:36:17 AM
wah bahut khub... geetji...

 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut shukriya manju mann ji...
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2011, 10:33:07 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 17, 2011, 07:43:29 AM
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Geetji..

bahut Hi vadhiya jazbaat!!! Clapping Smiley

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Tuada bahut shukriya khwaish ji...
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Quote from: adil bechain on May 17, 2011, 08:10:56 AM
umda brokenbyluv ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya adil ji..
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2011, 10:40:16 AM »
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Quote from: ek_tamanna on May 17, 2011, 08:47:12 AM
well written.......daad dilse

Bahut shukriya tamanna ji.
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Quote from: nirala on May 17, 2011, 04:24:19 PM
bht khub
Shukriya nirala ji..
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god bless u geet……
be happy alwej
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