Aaj, man ho rahaa hai gaaney kaa!

by abdbundeli on October 15, 2008, 05:39:00 PM
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Aaj, man ho rahaa hai gaaney kaa!
Aa gayaa hai payaam aaney kaa!!

Aayengey woh, bahaar aayegee;
Waqt hai maanney-manaaney kaa!

Yeh shab-e-wasl hai, sitaarey hain:
Hai samaan wa'adey nibhaaney kaa!

Raat aadhee guzar chalee hai ab,
Dour hai aakhiree fasaaney kaa!

                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2008, 05:41:42 PM »
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bohat bohat umda, bohat khoob abdbundeli  ji.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2008, 03:06:54 AM »
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Shukriyah Tanha(Saurabh) ji!
            Aap ko asha'ar paand aaye! Poori gazal ka post naheen kar paayaa thaa!
                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2008, 04:55:56 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 15, 2008, 05:39:00 PM
Aaj, man ho rahaa hai gaaney kaa!
Aa gayaa hai payaam aaney kaa!!

Aayengey woh, bahaar aayegee;
Waqt hai maanney-manaaney kaa!

Yeh shab-e-wasl hai, sitaarey hain:
Hai samaan wa'adey nibhaaney kaa!

Raat aadhee guzar chalee hai ab,
Dour hai aakhiree fasaaney kaa!


 

                 - abd bundeli


Bohat khoob likha hai Abd ji... Applause Applause

Abd ji shab-e-wasl kar arth bataye please.. icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2008, 05:48:37 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 15, 2008, 05:39:00 PM
Aaj, man ho rahaa hai gaaney kaa!
Aa gayaa hai payaam aaney kaa!!

Aayengey woh, bahaar aayegee;
Waqt hai maanney-manaaney kaa!

Yeh shab-e-wasl hai, sitaarey hain:
Hai samaan wa'adey nibhaaney kaa!

Raat aadhee guzar chalee hai ab,
Dour hai aakhiree fasaaney kaa!

                 - abd bundeli


Waah Waah... Bahut Bahut khoob..
Bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam likha hai Abd ji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2008, 05:54:49 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on October 16, 2008, 04:55:56 AM
Bohat khoob likha hai Abd ji... Applause Applause

Abd ji shab-e-wasl kar arth bataye please.. icon_flower




HoneyRose, Shab means Night (Raat) and Wasl means Meeting (Milan)... So, Shab-e-Wasl means "Milan ki Raat"

Sahi kaha naa Abd ji..  icon_silent
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«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2008, 06:58:59 AM »
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SUBAH HO CHUKI ABD AB TO LAUT AAO
UNKA PESHA HAIN DIL DUKHANE KA

                         -SG-
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«Reply #7 on: October 16, 2008, 11:05:30 AM »
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honeyrose ji / Mahiya ji!
Shukriyah! honeyrose ji, Mahiya ji ney aap ko chaahaa gayaa jawaab dey diyaa hai!
             - abd bundeli
                           
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«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2008, 11:14:28 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 15, 2008, 05:39:00 PM
Aaj, man ho rahaa hai gaaney kaa!
Aa gayaa hai payaam aaney kaa!!

Aayengey woh, bahaar aayegee;
Waqt hai maanney-manaaney kaa!

Yeh shab-e-wasl hai, sitaarey hain:
Hai samaan wa'adey nibhaaney kaa!

Raat aadhee guzar chalee hai ab,
Dour hai aakhiree fasaaney kaa!

                 - abd bundeli





Very Nice Abd Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2008, 11:14:52 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 16, 2008, 06:58:59 AM
SUBAH HO CHUKI ABD AB TO LAUT AAO
UNKA PESHA HAIN DIL DUKHANE KA

                         -SG-

Nice one
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2008, 11:29:45 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 16, 2008, 06:58:59 AM
SUBAH HO CHUKI ABD AB TO LAUT AAO
UNKA PESHA HAIN DIL DUKHANE KA
                         -SG-

Mein to rahtaa  hoon yaheen par Ghayel,
Woh hi aataa hai, woh hi jaataa hai!
Mein raat-din nashey mein rahtaa hoon:
Har lamhey woh mujhey pilaataa hai!
                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2008, 06:39:24 AM »
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bahut aacha likha hai aap ne bundeli ji




Baadal
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2008, 07:14:42 AM »
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Celmira ji / baadal102 ji!
          Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2013, 03:30:26 AM »
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nice.
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2013, 01:46:45 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 23, 2013, 03:30:26 AM
nice.

Thanks!
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