Aaj meera bhi radha ban.na chati hai

by mistufer on June 09, 2009, 01:03:04 PM
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2009, 08:30:59 PM »
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very nice Nira ji and Sahil ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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MHussain
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«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2009, 08:40:32 PM »
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Ms. Nira, beautiful work in love poetry, bravo!
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2009, 08:14:18 AM »
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Bohat khoob Nira kitne khoobsurat aur alag andaz me tumne izhare ishq kiya hain wahhhhhhhh Maza aa gaya...

Meera ki khwaish....

Banu na banu main Radha magar

Itna to tay hain main Mohan ki banna chahti hu.......

-SG-
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k.shael
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«Reply #18 on: June 10, 2009, 08:24:30 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Nira Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kanha tujh ko pal-pal niharoo.n,
Din raat bass teri aarti utaaroo.n,

Mein bass jao.n tere mann mandir me,
Bass itna sa khawab aakhon me sajaoo.n,

Tujhe maan liya sab kuch apna dil se,
Teri khatir deen-duniya bhulaoo.n,

Kanha teri bansi ki meethi dhun par,
Mein Waari Waari jaoo.n..

Shally.
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«Reply #19 on: June 10, 2009, 03:43:21 PM »
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Nira sahiba, Taareef ki haqdaar hain aap, aur mazeed yeh chhoti si koshish bhi...


Tum Roko ya na roko main bas teri ban jaungi,
Na Meera na hi Radha keval daasi ban jaungi,

Sukh bhi aur dukh bhi tere hi angna men priye,
Mere mahi tere ghar ki keval chaukhat ban jaungi,

Main dekh tujhe sharmaun aur vari vari jaun,
Jo roop tujhe bhaye main woh moorat ban jaungi,

Tere pyar men ab jeena teri chah men ab marna hai,
Sab dukh tere main lelungi aisi pagli ban jaungi...

Syed
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mistufer
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«Reply #20 on: June 10, 2009, 06:03:20 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 09, 2009, 08:30:59 PM
very nice Nira ji and Sahil ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

madhuwesh ji
thanks a lot for liking it
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mistufer
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«Reply #21 on: June 10, 2009, 06:05:27 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 09, 2009, 08:40:32 PM
Ms. Nira, beautiful work in love poetry, bravo!

MHussain ji aadaab
aapko pasand aaye yeh ehsaas
aapki shukrguzaar hoon
nira
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mistufer
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«Reply #22 on: June 10, 2009, 06:16:55 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 10, 2009, 08:14:18 AM
Bohat khoob Nira kitne khoobsurat aur alag andaz me tumne izhare ishq kiya hain wahhhhhhhh Maza aa gaya...

Meera ki khwaish....

Banu na banu main Radha magar

Itna to tay hain main Mohan ki banna chahti hu.......

-SG-

sajid ji
bahut acha sher likha hai aapne
ehsaason ki seema nahi hoti
hoti hai bandish samaj ki
shukriya aapko poem pasand aayi
yunhi saath dete rahiyega
take care
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mistufer
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«Reply #23 on: June 10, 2009, 06:20:20 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 10, 2009, 08:24:30 AM
Bahut Khoob Nira Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kanha tujh ko pal-pal niharoo.n,
Din raat bass teri aarti utaaroo.n,

Mein bass jao.n tere mann mandir me,
Bass itna sa khawab aakhon me sajaoo.n,

Tujhe maan liya sab kuch apna dil se,
Teri khatir deen-duniya bhulaoo.n,

Kanha teri bansi ki meethi dhun par,
Mein Waari Waari jaoo.n..

Shally.

shally ji
dil khush kar diya aapke ghazal ne
bahut pavan ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai

aapko meri rachna pasand aayi
shukriya
nira
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«Reply #24 on: June 10, 2009, 06:26:08 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 10, 2009, 03:43:21 PM
Nira sahiba, Taareef ki haqdaar hain aap, aur mazeed yeh chhoti si koshish bhi...


Tum Roko ya na roko main bas teri ban jaungi,
Na Meera na hi Radha keval daasi ban jaungi,

Sukh bhi aur dukh bhi tere hi angna men priye,
Mere mahi tere ghar ki keval chaukhat ban jaungi,

Main dekh tujhe sharmaun aur vari vari jaun,
Jo roop tujhe bhaye main woh moorat ban jaungi,

Tere pyar men ab jeena teri chah men ab marna hai,
Sab dukh tere main lelungi aisi pagli ban jaungi...

Syed


syed ji
aapki tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya

aapki koshish ka jawab nahi kitni khubi se
jazbaaton piro diya hai
daad deti hoon janab kabool kijiye
nira
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«Reply #25 on: June 10, 2009, 06:30:08 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 10, 2009, 04:47:58 PM
Bahot khoob bahot hi umda kalaam likha hai aapne Nira ji,awesome

kaash ji

aapki saharna ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
apna khayal rakhyiga
nira
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syednaami
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«Reply #26 on: June 10, 2009, 09:35:57 PM »
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Quote from: Nira on June 10, 2009, 06:26:08 PM
syed ji
aapki tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya

aapki koshish ka jawab nahi kitni khubi se
jazbaaton piro diya hai
daad deti hoon janab kabool kijiye
nira

Nira Sahiba, darasal aap ki rachna itni pyari lagi keh main likhne pe majboor ho gaya, nahin to kahan likh raha itna aajkal...
Aap ki daad tah-e-dil se qubool karte hain... Shukriya...
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«Reply #27 on: June 10, 2009, 09:40:23 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 10, 2009, 09:35:57 PM
Nira Sahiba, darasal aap ki rachna itni pyari lagi keh main likhne pe majboor ho gaya, nahin to kahan likh raha itna aajkla...
Aap ki daad tah-e-dil se qubool karte hain... Shukriya...

aap sach itne ache writer ho, aap sab ko padh kar
hi seekh rahi hoon, ek baar phirse shukriya adaa karti hoon
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«Reply #28 on: June 12, 2009, 08:02:31 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 10, 2009, 03:43:21 PM
Nira sahiba, Taareef ki haqdaar hain aap, aur mazeed yeh chhoti si koshish bhi...


Tum Roko ya na roko main bas teri ban jaungi,
Na Meera na hi Radha keval daasi ban jaungi,

Sukh bhi aur dukh bhi tere hi angna men priye,
Mere mahi tere ghar ki keval chaukhat ban jaungi,

Main dekh tujhe sharmaun aur vari vari jaun,
Jo roop tujhe bhaye main woh moorat ban jaungi,

Tere pyar men ab jeena teri chah men ab marna hai,
Sab dukh tere main lelungi aisi pagli ban jaungi...

Syed


Bohat khoob Syed Bhai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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k.shael
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«Reply #29 on: June 12, 2009, 09:48:50 AM »
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Quote from: Nira on June 10, 2009, 06:20:20 PM
shally ji
dil khush kar diya aapke ghazal ne
bahut pavan ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai

aapko meri rachna pasand aayi
shukriya
nira

Shukriya Nira Dear for liking my work,

Actually this topic is very closed to my heart that's why i can't stopped myself, and writte here.

Shally.
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