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Aaj mile abhi abhi bas ab jane ki baat na karo kitna rangin hai ye aaj ki sama.. esse bedardi se jaya na karo aaj mile abhi abhi bas ab jaane ki baat na karo..
kitni suhani hai ye chandni raat mere mehabub meri nind udane wale hame na tarpao... aaj mile abhi abhi bas jane ki baat na karo...
kal ki kisko khabar meri mano aaj ki es pal ko bekhudi se rusva na karo aaj mile abhi abhi bas ab jaane ki baat na karo..
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punam
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2007, 06:04:09 AM » |
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Mere Mehboob Meri Majburi Ko Samjha Karo. Mere Sanam Mujhe Yun Rokne Ki Ziid Na Karo.
Door Hokar Bhi Main Hardum Tere Pass Rahunga. Khwabo Main To Kabhi Yaado Main Mujhe Mehsoos Karo
Yun Bhari Mehfi Main Kehne Se Kuch Nahi Hoga Bus Akele Main, Mere Wapas Aane Ki Dua Karo.
Wada Raha TumSe.e.HumDum Mere Main Jald Aaunga Bus Ho Sake To Tum Thoda Sa Sabar Karo.... Thanx for sharing majid ji.. bahat acha likha aap ne...
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2007, 06:07:23 AM » |
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samjha ne ki kosish me din raat kari par ye dil hai nadaan manta hi nahi
dur kahan wo yehin to hai kitni kahi par ye dil kyun aaj baat manta hi nahi
tanha kahan ho yaado me wo to hai keheti rahi par ye dil kuch sun ne ko aaj taiyar hi nahi
wo bewafa nahi tujhe yun chor na jayenge samjhati rahi par dil ko unki hi fikra thi meri nahi...
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2007, 10:11:03 AM » |
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Bohat Khoob, Bohat Aachey Punam & Majid!
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2007, 01:15:31 PM » |
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Wah Wah PUNAM ji Behad Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh ki hai aapne.. !!! Pahali baar Aapko Aaj padha aur Padh kar Bahut acha laga.. Ab to aapki Har naye Post ka Humen Besabri se Intzaar rahega.... Bahut khooooooooooooob..... !!!! & Nice One MAJID BHAI..... !!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2007, 06:28:37 PM » |
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Bohat Khoob, Bohat Aachey Punam & Majid! Thanx Nirbhay ji ...
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2007, 06:31:58 PM » |
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Wah Wah PUNAM ji Behad Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh ki hai aapne.. !!! Pahali baar Aapko Aaj padha aur Padh kar Bahut acha laga.. Ab to aapki Har naye Post ka Humen Besabri se Intzaar rahega.... Bahut khooooooooooooob..... !!!! & Nice One MAJID BHAI..... !!!!!! Thanx vicky ji kyun saminda kar rahe hain...aap logo ki sahayata rahegi to bas ek do likhne ki koshish karti rahungi... thanx again....
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2007, 07:18:24 PM » |
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Duniya ki rukh ko pehachanti hun main par dil ko samjha nahi pati hun main
samjhke na samjhe ye dil to kya karun dil ki hath aaj majbur hun main
unhe kaise samjhaun kaisi uljhan me hun ye khuda tu hi bata ab kya karu main...
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2007, 02:06:00 PM » |
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cheda tha tumne hame jis najar se ab tak hame wo nigahen hai yaad
tum kya jano ghayal kar gaye dil ko kaise tumhare wo teer nigahe aaj bhi hai yaad
tum hamare khayalo me yun bhatakte hi raho tumhare dil ki har dharkan ki sada hame hai yaad...
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2007, 02:43:13 PM » |
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beautifull poems Punam...
yaad karte ho har pal humein to kehte kyun nahi dil hi dil mein pyar chupaye baithe ho kabhi dikhaya bhi karo.. tum to aise pesh aate ho jaise hum ajnabi hon tumhare liye maante ho agar apna to kabhi jataya bhi karo
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2007, 05:12:50 PM » |
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nice punam and nikki!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2007, 07:34:35 AM » |
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Thanx pooja ji....
nikki ji bahat ache likhe ho aap....
aap kya jaano aap ko kitna chahati hun dil hi dil me aap se baat karti hun
samne jab aap ko paati hun kuch bhi kehe nahi paati hun
ye kaisi pyaas hai pyaar ki jisse bhujha ne ki koshish se hari hun
ye kaisi chahat hai dil ki jo aap ko dikha nahi paati hun...
parlo aap ankho se meri dil ki baat jo main kehena chahate huye bhi kehe nahi paati hun...
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2007, 12:55:08 PM » |
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Wah Wah KYa baat hai PUNAM.. Bahut Khoooob ek se Badh kar ek Kalaam Pesh Kiye hian aapne.. Behad Khubsoorat Lafzon se Sajaya aapne is Tahreed ko.. & Nice one NIKKI.. Bahut khoooooooob.. !!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2007, 05:13:28 PM » |
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Thanx vicky ji...
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2007, 05:26:50 PM » |
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Dil pe kisi ke chahat ka asar hai kisi ki najar ki chuban se yeh dil ghayal hai mithi si dard deti yeh chuban bhi kadam kadam par unhi ki sath hone ka ehshash hai na din me chain na raat ko nind hai dekho na yeh dil ki kaisi haal hai.... haan haan mujhe unse pyaar hai....
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