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«Reply #15 on: December 17, 2009, 03:16:35 PM » |
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Kuch Koshish Hum Bhi Kar Rhe Hai Kuch Galti Ho To Maaf Karna
Aaj Phir Dil Mein 1 Kashk Jag Uthi Hai
Unse Milne Ki Tamana Phir Jag Uthi Hai
Hum Beithe Hai Aas Lagaye Unke 1 Deedar Ko
Wo Na Jane Kis Baat Se Humse Ruthi Hai
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«Reply #16 on: December 17, 2009, 04:43:58 PM » |
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Bahoot Khoob Geet and Koyal
good creation Shihab !
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #17 on: December 17, 2009, 06:18:41 PM » |
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Thanks Rishi-bhai...for appriciating.... Bahut Hi Sundar Mehfil Hai
Geet Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Aapne
Aur Bahut Hi Sudar Response Diya Hai Koyal JI And Shihab Bhai Aapne
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #18 on: December 17, 2009, 06:40:15 PM » |
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Very nice lines Rishi-bhai......  Ruthna-manaana tou khel hai pyarr ka
Himmat na haar ho jaayega deedaar yaar ka
Kuch Koshish Hum Bhi Kar Rhe Hai Kuch Galti Ho To Maaf Karna
Aaj Phir Dil Mein 1 Kashk Jag Uthi Hai
Unse Milne Ki Tamana Phir Jag Uthi Hai
Hum Beithe Hai Aas Lagaye Unke 1 Deedar Ko
Wo Na Jane Kis Baat Se Humse Ruthi Hai
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«Reply #19 on: December 17, 2009, 07:33:45 PM » |
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Kuch Koshish Hum Bhi Kar Rhe Hai Kuch Galti Ho To Maaf Karna
Aaj Phir Dil Mein 1 Kashk Jag Uthi Hai
Unse Milne Ki Tamana Phir Jag Uthi Hai
Hum Beithe Hai Aas Lagaye Unke 1 Deedar Ko
Wo Na Jane Kis Baat Se Humse Ruthi Hai
Woh Maan jayegi Bahut umda koshish ki hai aap ne Rishi |
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #20 on: December 18, 2009, 02:26:10 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Koyal JI And Nice Line
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«Reply #21 on: December 18, 2009, 02:29:23 PM » |
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Woh Maan jayegi
Bahut umda koshish ki hai aap ne Rishi
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sir Ab Manane Ki Koi Jarrurat Nahi Hai Hume Wo Kisi Aur Ke Humraah HO Gaye |
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«Reply #22 on: December 18, 2009, 05:11:19 PM » |
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Thanks Rishi-bhai..... Aaj phir....N jaane kyu.....ye lines yaad aagyee anayaas...
"Chhod de duniya kisi ke liye ye munasib nahi aadmi ke liye"
FILM Sarasvatichandra ka ye geet.....nahi jaanti kyu....Bahut Bahut Shukriya Koyal JI And Nice Line
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«Reply #23 on: December 20, 2009, 05:46:33 PM » |
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Thnx alot koyal,shihab ji rishi ji sophiji rajeshji madhu ji samir ji aap sabhi ne bahut ache comments diya hai thnx alot for appericiating...
Aaj phir ek baat hai dil mein..
gar vo apna bana le tou lab khol hi du......
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«Reply #24 on: December 20, 2009, 06:10:17 PM » |
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Thanks Geet-di.....  Aaj phir jo mann huaa hai tou lab khol he do
Kehdo usse jo bhi kehna hai dil ko tere oose
Ab na kar intezaar ke kaun pehle kehta hai
Pehle aap pehle aap mai na jaayen beet
Pyaar ki amulya ghadiyen,sun sakhi Geet |
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«Reply #25 on: December 23, 2009, 05:41:37 PM » |
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thnx koyal..
Har baat lafzo mein jatayi kahan jati hai,
kuch lafz ankahe hi ache lagte hai,
kehna jab mushkil ho mhbt mein...
kuch afsane nighao mein hi ache lagte hai......
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«Reply #26 on: December 24, 2009, 04:56:48 PM » |
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Afsaane kitne tune nigahon mai chhupaaye hain sakhi Kya Darr nahi lagta ashq ban ke beh na jaayen sabhee...  |
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«Reply #27 on: December 25, 2009, 01:20:34 PM » |
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Darte tou kabhi dil ka darwaza
yu na kholte kisi k liye,
ansu tou hai mhbt ka tohfa hai..
hote nhi zaya yu hi har kisi k liye......
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«Reply #28 on: December 27, 2009, 07:18:57 PM » |
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Barasti hain teri aankhen yu kis k liye
Aaj phir jaage hain armaa,bataa kis k liye
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«Reply #29 on: December 29, 2009, 05:25:21 PM » |
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Armaan jage uske liye hain jo merra nhi hai,
phir bhi har saans uske liye pyasi hai,
ek baar use paa lu yahi armaan hai merra..
phir mit jaye jivan mein chhayi jo ye udasi hai......
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