Aajkal.......... mann

by mann.mann on March 20, 2012, 10:41:56 AM
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Ye kis haseen khwab pe marne laga hun aajkal.
Kya pyar ajanabi se karne laga hun aajkal.

Wo raah jise main kabhi mud kar nahin dekha,
Ek din main kai baar guzarne laga hun aajkal.

Uski muhabbaton ka kuchh aisa asar hua,
Bigada hua tha pahle sudharne laga hun aajkal.

Raftaar meri yun to thi tez hawa se jyada,
Aa aa ke tere dar pe thhaharne laga hun aajkal.

Firta tha aasmaan main aawara parinde sa,
Sab yaar ye kahte hain nikharne laga hun aajkal.

Mann

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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 10:51:52 AM »
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Ye kis haseen khwab pe marne laga hun aajkal.
Kya pyar ajanabi se karne laga hun aajkal.

Wo raah jise main kabhi mud kar nahin dekha,
Ek din main kai baar guzarne laga hun aajkal.

Uski muhabbaton ka kuchh aisa asar hua,
Bigada hua tha pahle sudharne laga hun aajkal.

Raftaar meri yun to thi tez hawa se jyada,
Aa aa ke tere dar pe thhaharne laga hun aajkal.

Firta tha aasmaan main aawara parinde sa,
Sab yaar ye kahte hain nikharne laga hun aajkal.

Mann



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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2012, 10:54:19 AM »
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"MANN KA LIKHAA ACHHAA BAHUT PADHNE LAGAA HOON AAJKAL" man ji is shaandaar kalaam ke liye badhaai
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2012, 11:41:12 AM »
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bahut dhanyawad qalbji...
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2012, 11:43:20 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanyawad janab sainiji.... aapki zarra nawazi hai ji....
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2012, 12:12:27 PM »
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Ye kis haseen khwab pe marne laga hun aajkal.
Kya pyar ajanabi se karne laga hun aajkal.

haan ajnabee se hi pyaar hota hai phir wo azeez ho jaata hai

Wo raah jise main kabhi mud kar nahin dekha,
Ek din main kai baar guzarne laga hun aajkal.

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Uski muhabbaton ka kuchh aisa asar hua,
Bigada hua tha pahle sudharne laga hun aajkal.
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Raftaar meri yun to thi tez hawa se jyada,
Aa aa ke tere dar pe thhaharne laga hun aajkal.
acha ji ye to phir kamaal ho gaya icon_flower icon_flower
Firta tha aasmaan main aawara parinde sa,
Sab yaar ye kahte hain nikharne laga hun aajkal. icon_scratch icon_scratch :-?ye misra effective nahin hai. kyon ki aawara ke saath pyaar mein diwane jaisa koi kafiya ho to sher mein vazan ho
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good ..................!

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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2012, 01:21:03 PM »
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Ye kis haseen khwab pe marne laga hun aajkal.
Kya pyar ajanabi se karne laga hun aajkal.

Wo raah jise main kabhi mud kar nahin dekha,
Ek din main kai baar guzarne laga hun aajkal.

Uski muhabbaton ka kuchh aisa asar hua,
Bigada hua tha pahle sudharne laga hun aajkal.

Raftaar meri yun to thi tez hawa se jyada,
Aa aa ke tere dar pe thhaharne laga hun aajkal.

Firta tha aasmaan main aawara parinde sa,
Sab yaar ye kahte hain nikharne laga hun aajkal.

Mann


dil-e-daad kabul karein ,,,,sunder likha hai ,,,maan ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2012, 01:33:18 PM »
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very nice janab
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2012, 01:52:03 PM »
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bahut khoob,mann ji.beautiful !!
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2012, 02:10:41 PM »
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Ye kis haseen khwab pe marne laga hun aajkal.
Kya pyar ajanabi se karne laga hun aajkal.

Wo raah jise main kabhi mud kar nahin dekha,
Ek din main kai baar guzarne laga hun aajkal.

Uski muhabbaton ka kuchh aisa asar hua,
Bigada hua tha pahle sudharne laga hun aajkal.

Raftaar meri yun to thi tez hawa se jyada,
Aa aa ke tere dar pe thhaharne laga hun aajkal.

Firta tha aasmaan main aawara parinde sa,
Sab yaar ye kahte hain nikharne laga hun aajkal.

Mann



Very nice Mann ji Fourth sher per meri aor se dehron daad
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2012, 04:10:31 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2012, 04:42:06 PM »
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waahhhh waahh
bht khoob mann ji--

kuch lines aur add krte to aur acha lagta ye post.

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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waahhhh waahh
bht khoob mann ji--

kuch lines aur add krte to aur acha lagta ye post.

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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waaaahhh man ji bahoot khoob surat likha apne, padhkar tabiyat khush ho gai, daad kabool karen bhai...
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