Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Miru;;;;

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Toot Kar In Bahon Main Bikhar Jane De,
Saanson Main Teri Utar Jane De.

Mohabbat Jo Hamne Ki Hai Sanam,
Chahat Ki Had Se Gujar Jane De.

Ho Na Kabhi Koyi Rahe-E-Dusbari,
Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De.

Bekrari Ke Pal Jo Gujare Hai Humne,
Chehre Ki Lali Se Nikhar Jane De.

Kahti Hai Dhadhkane Dil Ki Tamana,
Gesuon Main Teri Machal Jane De.

Toot Kar In Bahon Main Bikhar Jane De,
Saanson Main Teri Utar Jane De.

Masti Khili Hai,Same Jali Hai,
Chhu Ke Baban Ko Pighal Jane De.

Rahe-e-Gujar Main Tu Hi Ab Tu Hai,
Zindagi Ke Pal Ko Khusahal Jane De.

Sabe-Faribi Na Ho Koyi Basta,
Honton Tele Jaam Saham Jane De.

Toot Kar In Bahon Main Bikhar Jane De,
Saanson Main Teri Utar Jane De.

IITian Miraj..!! Bus Mai Or Tu


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Re: Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru

«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2013, 01:52:32 PM »

very nice


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Re: Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru

«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2013, 02:34:39 PM »

nice lines miru ji bohut umda


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Re: Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru

«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2013, 02:50:20 PM »

बहुत खूब मीरु जी.


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Re: Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru

«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2013, 02:56:26 PM »

goooooood


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Re: Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru

«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2013, 08:01:25 PM »

Miru Jee Aadaab... !

Janab behad khoobsurat aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN janab... achchi kalaam huyi hai...

Is khoob koshish par humari dheroN dili daad o mubbarakabd kabul kijiye...
Kuch speling mistakes and kuch technical mistakes ko point kiya hai humne buraa na lage toH unpar mashq kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: Miru;;;; on July 09, 2013, 10:44:04 AM

Toot Kar In Bahon Main Bikhar Jane De,
Saanson Main Teri Utar Jane De.

Mohabbat Jo Hamne Ki Hai Sanam,
Chahat Ki Had Se Gujar Jane De.

Ho Na Kabhi Koyi Rahe-E-Dushwari,
Aankhon Main Teri Sawar Jane De.

Bekrari Ke Pal Jo Gujare Hai Humne,
Chehre Ki Lali Se Nikhar Jane De.

Kahti Hai Dhadhkane Dil Ki Tamana,
Gesuon Main Teri Machal Jane De.

Toot Kar In Bahon Main Bikhar Jane De,
Saanson Main Teri Utar Jane De.

Masti Khili Hai,Same Jali Hai,
Chhu Ke Baban Ko Pighal Jane De.

Rahe-e-Gujar Main Tu Hi Ab Tu Hai,
Zindagi Ke Pal Ko Khusahal Jane De.

Sabe-Faribi Na Ho Koyi Basta,
Honton Tele Jaam Saham Jane De.

Toot Kar In Bahon Main Bikhar Jane De,
Saanson Main Teri Utar Jane De.

IITian Miraj..!! Bus Mai Or Tu


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Re: Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru

«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2013, 11:08:13 PM »

bahut bahut khoob miruji.. dheron daad...


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Re: Aankhon Main Teri Sabar Jane De..!!..Miru

«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2013, 06:55:56 PM »

bahut khoob


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