Aankhon Se Mere Wo Mayusiyo Ka Parda Hata Gaya...........Touhid

by Mohammad Touhid on September 04, 2012, 08:40:35 AM
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Dekh Kar Ush Haseen Ko, Jikra Kuchh Yu Humne Kiya.,
Aa Gaya Dil Ke Kareeb,  Aur Dil Me Ghar Kar Gaya..


Behosh The Ab Talak, Duniya Me Koun Janta Hume.,
Wo Aakar Hamare Paas, Hamari Pechaan Bata Gaya..


Gar Tare Na Hote Gardish Me, To Bulandi Pe Hote.,
Duaao Se Kismat Badalne Ki, Wo Tarqeeb Bata Gaya..


Dekh Uski Mohabbat Ko, Mai Kabhi Na Samajh Saka.,
Ye Uska Hi Pyar Tha, Aaj Mai Kaha Se Kaha Aa Gaya..


Ush Ehsaan Ko Marte Dam Tak Na Bhulenge “Touhid”
Aankhon Se Mere Wo Mayusiyo Ka Parda Hata Gaya...

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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2012, 09:00:57 AM »
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Very Nice N Inspiring!!! Really liked  3rd and 4th line!!!

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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2012, 09:06:54 AM »
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Very Nice N Inspiring!!! Really liked  3rd and 4th line!!!

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bahut bahut shukriya shireen ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2012, 09:24:34 AM »
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Jane Kya Jadu Hai Unka Jo Mujh Pe Chal Gaya,
Awara Dil Mera Pehle Har Raah Par Machal Gaya,
Zindagi Se Mile Thokaro Ne Bagawat Hi Sikhayi,
Jane Kaise Yeh Tumhare Ishq Mein Sambhal Gaya..!!
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Jane Kya Jadu Hai Unka Jo Mujh Pe Chal Gaya,
Awara Dil Mera Pehle Har Raah Par Machal Gaya,
Zindagi Se Mile Thokaro Ne Bagawat Hi Sikhayi,
Jane Kaise Yeh Tumhare Ishq Mein Sambhal Gaya..!!


Masha allah.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shireen ji.. Usual Smile

Ehsaas Dil Ki Jab Aankhon Me Utarne Lage.,

To Samajh Lo Ki Tumhe Mohabbat Ho Gayi Hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2012, 09:35:48 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob touhid ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2012, 09:48:25 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob touhid ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pankaj Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2012, 09:51:32 AM »
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bahut khoob tauhid ji
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bahut khoob tauhid ji

bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2012, 10:22:53 AM »
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waah waah Touhid bhai kamaal kee peshkash
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2012, 10:24:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob Touhid jee

bas yun hi likhte rahiye,,
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2012, 10:38:11 AM »
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waah waah Touhid bhai kamaal kee peshkash

Aapko ye ghazal pasand aayi.. bahut khushi hui..

aise hi sath dete rahe Saini sir ji.. Usual Smile

bahut bahut shukriya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2012, 10:41:16 AM »
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Bahut khoob Touhid jee

bas yun hi likhte rahiye,,

Tah-e-dil se aapka suhkriya mkv ji.. Usual Smile

"kosis to yuhi ki hai likhne ki Touhid.,
mukammal to tab hogi jab aapko pasand aaye.."
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2012, 10:58:05 AM »
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Bahut Khub Tauheed Bhai Applause

Shad o aabaad rahiye

Shihab

Apna Waqt dekar aur apne pyare comments se iski ahamiyat badhane ka.. Bahut bahut shukriya Shihab Bhai.. Usual Smile

Aap Bhi Shaad O Aabad rahiye..

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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2012, 12:34:12 PM »
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very beautiful lines Touhid ji
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