Aao aaj shukriyaan keh de.......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 07, 2009, 04:24:44 PM
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As valentine day is approaching and love is in air, i request all the yoindians to express their love for someone who is very special in their life. Most of the time we want to say how much we love them but we are not able to say this, specially me. In front of my wife if i say something romantic she will just start laughing as i am really a unromantic person if its comes to speaking. I have written some lines for my wife as i just want to thanks her for all she has done for me....

Kehne ko lab khule, par tujhse kabhi kaha nahi
Kya kya na aye humnashee tune mere liye kiya nahi

Kya kya na sitam dhaye, kya kya na kahi batein
Tera ishq nahi hara, tune shikwa kabhi kiya nahi

Jo beti bankar tune diya Ma Baap ko mere
Woh beta hoker Sajid kabhi de paya nahi

Mere bachcho ko tune seecha, khoon se apne
Koi farz ma ka nahi aisa, jo tune nibhaya nahi

Mere aagan ki tulsi bhi tu, Main Mohan meri Radha bhi tu
Koi wada aisa nahi, jo tune nibhaya nahi

Aaj keh lene de in labo ko aye meri Hum_nawa.z
Pyaar tune mujse kiya, tera bohat bohat shukriya

Bada nadaan hain khud ko, kehta hain shayer GHAYEL
Teri qurbaniyo ko teri chahet ko, ab tak yeh samjha nahi

                         -Sajid Ghayel-

(Plz express your love for your loved ones just write what your heart sayyyyyyyy Heart is always right.  Winking
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2009, 04:38:57 PM »
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Gayel bhai aaj tum ne apne takhlas ka haq ada kar diya aur hamain gayel kar diya, Khuda karay aap ka pyar kabi kam na ho,ameen.asgr Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2009, 06:38:48 PM »
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 Applause Ghayal sab jawab nahi, aap ki wife bahut khush hogi yeh dekh ke aap ki dil me kitna pyar hai unke liye.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2009, 11:58:16 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2009, 03:33:28 AM »
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Bahoth qoob ghayel !! yaar mauzo pe likhna to koi tum se sikha mere bhai !! kasam se maza agaya ghayel sahab !! waise hum pardes me rahene walon ki nazar karta hon ye 4 lines !!

eak shaks meri sanson me samaya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!
magar wohi shaks mujhe paraya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!
usse milne ko dil bahoth karta hai "Ghayel"
magar ane jane me kiraya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!

...............Janab Rahat Indori Sahab ...................

ye 4 lines me pyaar bhi shikwa bhi gurbath bhi shikayath bhi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2009, 03:37:52 AM »
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Wow...Bahut accha likha hai aapne Sajid_Gayal ji.

Last 4 line toh dil ko chu gayi thi.. 
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2009, 03:40:33 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 08, 2009, 03:33:28 AM
Bahoth qoob ghayel !! yaar mauzo pe likhna to koi tum se sikha mere bhai !! kasam se maza agaya ghayel sahab !! waise hum pardes me rahene walon ki nazar karta hon ye 4 lines !!

eak shaks meri sanson me samaya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!
magar wohi shaks mujhe paraya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!
usse milne ko dil bahoth karta hai "Ghayel"
magar ane jane me kiraya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!

ye 4 lines me pyaar bhi shikwa bhi gurbath bhi shikayath bhi !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Applause Applause good lines Qadeer ji.
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2009, 04:03:34 AM »
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Thank Very much Freinds and Nice line Qadeer...

But i am still waiting from all of you to plz write something for someone you love.
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«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2009, 04:32:11 AM »
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Sajid ji..

Khushi aap ke liye, gam humre liye.
Muskurahat aapke liye, aansu humre liye.
Zindagi aap ke liye, mout humare liye.
Phool aap ke liye, kante humare liye.
Sab kuch aapke liye aur Aap sirf Hamare liye Jaana  love9
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«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2009, 05:14:55 AM »
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Sajid Sahab velantine per to sirf hum yahi likh sakte hain "Ghayel" aur apse bahetar is ahesas ko kaun mahesos kar sakta hai ap bhi pardesi hum bhi pardesi !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Usse bichad ke jo guzri wo likhon !!
Ya jo guzarne wali hai wo likhon !!

Bata gahyel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Pyaar karne wala koi mila hi nahi !!
Nafarth walon ke naam beshumar hain wo likhon !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Pyaar bhari koi daastan raheti to zaroor likhta !!
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Mai chala aya kissi ko sisakta chodke !!
Mere intezaar me tadapti eak ladki uska  naam likhon !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Usse hum- kalam howe eak muddath guzar gayi !!
Howi jo qabon me guftagu uska unwan likhon !!

Bata ghayel valentine pe kya likhon !!

Apne log apne watan se dor raheta hai “Qadeer”!!
Jahan sub para-A- hain uss Shaher ka naam likhon !!

Bata ghayel valentine pe  kya likhon !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2009, 05:33:55 AM »
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Bahut khoob... kahi kahi dil ko chu gaya aapka likha yeh lines padkar..

Pyaar bhari koi daastan raheti to zaroor likhta
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon

Bata gahyel velantine pe kya likhon

Pyaar bhari koi daastan reheti to zarro likhta
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon


Haan haan .... batao ghayalji... likhe toh b kya likhe..  sad7
Very well expressed lines bhaiya.
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2009, 06:35:05 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 08, 2009, 05:33:55 AM

Bahut khoob... kahi kahi dil ko chu gaya aapka likha yeh lines padkar..

Pyaar bhari koi daastan raheti to zaroor likhta
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon

Bata gahyel velantine pe kya likhon

Pyaar bhari koi daastan reheti to zarro likhta
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon


Haan haan .... batao ghayalji... likhe toh b kya likhe..  sad7
Very well expressed lines bhaiya.

Shukriya bahen !! waise humare liye veltine khuch maine hi nahi rakhta sub se door hain hum kahan mana-a- veltine !! koi to ho jisse ke saath mana saken !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2009, 07:41:03 AM »
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SG ji! Bahut khoob!  Clapping Smiley
Aapkey,"But i am still waiting from all of you to plz write something for someone you love." eik 'choupadi' haazir kar rahaa hoon! Mulaahizah farmaanyen! Velantine ki usee din key liye chhorhiye!

Ay meyrey Mahboob!

Mein tujhko eik surkh kalee dey gulaab kee,
Chaahuungaa usey zeyhan mein, dil mein tu chhupaa ley!
Badley mein, muskuraa key, khil key, gul mein badal jaa;
Meyrey di-o-jigar ko tah-e-dil mein sajaa ley!!

                           - abd bundeli
 
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2009, 07:59:56 AM »
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nice lines Ro
Quote from: Roja on February 08, 2009, 04:32:11 AM
Sajid ji..

Khushi aap ke liye, gam humre liye.
Muskurahat aapke liye, aansu humre liye.
Zindagi aap ke liye, mout humare liye.
Phool aap ke liye, kante humare liye.
Sab kuch aapke liye aur Aap sirf Hamare liye Jaana  love9
NICE LINES ROJA JI
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2009, 08:13:08 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 08, 2009, 04:32:11 AM
Sajid ji..

Khushi aap ke liye, gam humre liye.
Muskurahat aapke liye, aansu humre liye.
Zindagi aap ke liye, mout humare liye.
Phool aap ke liye, kante humare liye.
Sab kuch aapke liye aur Aap sirf Hamare liye Jaana  love9

Sab kuchh teyrey waasitey,
Sab kuchh apnaa jaan!
Mein jab sey teyraa huaa,
Too meyree muskaan!!

           - abd bundeli
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